SwaRon OS-Joining the broken pieces of heart?part3

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Amazing os
it is one of d swaron scene which holds place in our heart...n u have just made it more heart-touching by adding d kiss n sharon's pov...thnx for pm

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Snowey

@Snowey

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Awesome OS Rutu.

Beautifully written, with keeping the main storyline intact the emotions you have shown..were superb.

and as u rightly said in ur note..SwaRon can never be away from each other for long..can they?

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

yaar Rutu you made me emotional 😭. I watched the whole episode and Rutu really the depth of the scene is totally and fully interpreted by you. Any loopholes the CVs had is fully cleared by you. How beautifully you write yaar, it is really a pleasure to read the OS at the same time heartwrenching. Really this is the real swaron not the one we see in D3 now a days. Gosh yaar, hats off to you for giving us such a beautiful OS.

🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

awesome os rutu...i will again say the same thing...i am speechless n out of words...really dear its outstanding...i had tears in my eyes...u have written it brilliantly...if u can then plz continue this os...would love to read it...awesome dear...great job...hats of 2 u...thanx for the pm...

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Man wasn't I able to replay the whole scene in my head and that too with every minute details in it...

I loved it, plz do continue the OS and don't end it here, show the destiny as per ur lines, just don't leave it hanging here... PLZ PLZ PLZ😊

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Sakina

@-Sakina-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Unreserved and Edited.:)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/61973648

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TANHA_H

@TANHA_H

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

a beautiful OS!
really amazing!

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

i very well agree with everyone that you've chosen one of the best scenes ever...which the CVs have stopped making ..!

well,i'm very much impressed with your OS...it hass left me spellbound.

each and every line of your had a deep meaning...

you very well justify the meaning of the word "intensity"..

a word which was reflected throughout the OS!

you presented sharon's POV which is amongst the most neglected souls among others...her POV is the one which adds a lot of weightage to the situation...but as i said neglected...her POV is never displayed!

well,enough of stupid talks!

lets come straight-way to the pt. i luved ur os!

it was amazing!

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

whoa!! it made me feel all the emotions... ah!! but continue it.. plz!! :)

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

t'was! Seriously amazing!

i dont knw but dis is my 3rd tym reading it!
i read it once and commented as (1st yay!!)
BUT...
How muj ever tyms i read it!
it melts me down ... and never Bore me!
and i Really want u to continue the next part!
i wish u cud!
i reallly wish!

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