Two Hearts-One Heartbeat ~A ManVeer SS~ Note on Pg50 - Page 7

Oyshee my love I'm so sorry for being late *holding ears*
Alright so now the story, I have one word...it was MAGNIFICENT
You described each and every thing so well and in such great detail...it was a pleasure reading it
The story line is very unique and different, and I'm totally in love with it
It's so smooth yet full if emotions...wonderful work darling
The connection you showed between uday and manyata, it's truly beautiful and heart touching
You portrayed their love for each other in such a beautiful way, I could personally felt the divine connection between the two of them...true unconditional love, really touching
Also I totally loved the idea how everyone thinks he might be dead but she has faith in him and somewhere in her heart she knows that his heart us beating, and that's the reason she is still alive with hope,...such a beautiful story which such amazing dialogues and true heartfelt emotions...
Absolutely loved you work...awesome job baby...LOVED IT <3
And yes Please do continue soon...you really need to continue this...add me to pm list ;)
Once again so sorry for being late and super dooper good job with story
Love ya *hugs*

Originally posted by: alissa345

Oyshee my love I'm so sorry for being late *holding ears*
Alright so now the story, I have one word...it was MAGNIFICENT
You described each and every thing so well and in such great detail...it was a pleasure reading it
The story line is very unique and different, and I'm totally in love with it
It's so smooth yet full if emotions...wonderful work darling
The connection you showed between uday and manyata, it's truly beautiful and heart touching
You portrayed their love for each other in such a beautiful way, I could personally felt the divine connection between the two of them...true unconditional love, really touching
Also I totally loved the idea how everyone thinks he might be dead but she has faith in him and somewhere in her heart she knows that his heart us beating, and that's the reason she is still alive with hope,...such a beautiful story which such amazing dialogues and true heartfelt emotions...
Absolutely loved you work...awesome job baby...LOVED IT <3
And yes Please do continue soon...you really need to continue this...add me to pm list ;)
Once again so sorry for being late and super dooper good job with story
Love ya *hugs*

AWWW...Too sweet Aloo...no need for apologies😳😳😳...thanks for liking it😉😉

wow loved the update hope Udayveer returns to her soon!

Oh wow so heart touching continue soon

Such a touching update !!!

okay...so i'v got this thing in my head...i faces. what i mean is, faces for the new characters you've introduced...like this Rajeev and Raveena and this new guy ur gonna get J engaged to!!

Originally posted by: Tuli.Luvs.Uday

okay...so i'v got this thing in my head...i faces. what i mean is, faces for the new characters you've introduced...like this Rajeev and Raveena and this new guy ur gonna get J engaged to!!

so...faces plzzz!!

okay dear...ill think about that. But u've got to help me as wel...ill need suggestions 😉

That was a lovely update. Both parts were beautifully written.
Great job yaar!..Sorry for being late.