Two Hearts-One Heartbeat ~A ManVeer SS~ Note on Pg50

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Riyu

@Devil.Gal

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

awesome update yar👏u r a amazing writer👍🏼do cotinue soon i want to read more😍and also a long update😍love u🤗

Edited by smiley12 - 13 years ago

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

very nice awesome mindblowing thanks for the l;ong update loved the writting please update soon😃

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

👏👏thnaks..awesome...👏👏

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Ash

@kakacool123

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

That was simply a beautiful update, i wanted to cry when i saw how much M missed those memories.

I am left speechless by such amazing writing skills and a lovely concept,
I really like this SS one of my favs

Thank for the PM continue soon 😃😉
😃

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Shazzie

@Shazzie

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Wow oyeshee!! That was brilliant and superb. You write very well. Loved the nok jhok and teasing in manveer fb. We had wished sooo badly to see such scene in show... But alas!!

Wow! Uday is awake and first word is manyata!! Simply fab!

Loved your update! Thanks for pm

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famin

@famin

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

wow awesome ...i just don't have words to appreciate u really.. but 1 request plz don't mind akash character ko bech me mat lana.koi or hero ka nam lo per akash nooo... I m really fed up to hear ths name..

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Tuli

@Tuli.Luvs.Uday

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Okay Oyshee...can i just say that I love you??😳😳 And do u know how awsum u r?? Giving us this update proves it!! Officially, i announce u as good a writter as Reeha, Alissa, Cham and Mais!! And again, I'm not buttering😆😆😆. And now, u r making me miss DEK more now, reminding me all such beautiful moments we could se but...okay, not going there.🤢🤢Part 1 was just...Awsum!!! Amazing!!! fantastic!! Emotional!! Every compliment take it girl!! its yours!!!Starting with scene 1, it continues from the dream right, where UV chases M...so M is finally caught by UV, and that too willingly😳😳😳😳👏👏👏👏. M flirting, Surprised+Happy UV..absolutely as it could have been on DEK!!And i see M has emersed herself into work...poor girl. Hmm, VB always the star!! Congrtas!! Coz ur VB sounded exactly VB, i tell you. What u made him say, i can easily visualise him saying thse to M😳😳. So j seems to have maintained her sudharna inyou're SS...giving her a chance, huh??

Waise J ka roka?? isnt it?? A love story for J?? okay...make it good, hope ill be able to forgive J here atleast!! I trust u!!😳😳

And RP predicted what? UV alive? GOD!! u're such a suspense queen...suspense se maar dalogi kya??And Uv finally waking Up!!!👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ YYYAAAYYY!!!!!

I see that u're not the dragging types!! thankgod for that!! and u know, it didnt even feel rushed!! Kudos 2 u😉😉. I was thinking that u'll for at least 3 parts will keep him sleeping, but thank god u didnt!! UV ke bina dill kahi dhang-se lagta nahi hain yaar!!😆😆😆

And they way u described his waking up!! Too good...the update was like Im watching DEK on tv...⭐️⭐️👏.

And M's pain...u know, i could feel it. And all of us were sooo eager once to see M pinning for UV like that...at least u r giving us what SA😡😡 did not😡😡😡😡.

I could feel his restlessness!! His want to be with M remains same huh?? Ziddi kahika!! Im in love with his Ziddi-ness, really😃😃😆😆.

So last but not the least, so much info. about Rajeev and Raveena. New characters?? Important characters??? Ohhh!!! This is getting so intresting!! Waht did u mean by "She should have heard the name" ? Kya khichudhi pakaa rahi hain yaar? kahi issko UV pe lattu karne kaa iraada toh nahi hain??

Wowww...look at the length of my post!! I've quite analysed ur update, lol😆.

But awsum update yaar...and it wasnt "MAHA" coz if u keep writting like this, Ill keep wanting more and more longer ones!! So, keep up the tradition of "MAHA LONG" updates😉😉.

One last tim!!! AWSUM!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Edited by Tuli.Luvs.Uday - 13 years ago

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oyshee

@..oishu..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: famin
wow awesome ...i just don't have words to appreciate u really.. but 1 request plz don't mind akash character ko bech me mat lana.koi or hero ka nam lo per akash nooo... I m really fed up to hear ths name..

thankyou SOO much yaar for liking it!! it makes my day to read all of you guys comments..😳😳😳arre yaar Akash ka naam nahi lungi toh uske taraf M ki much wanted fafrat kaise likkhungi?? Uski vaat kaise lagaungi?? sorry yaar, Akash ka jikr ko toh sehna parega..usko sehna parega...caz agar maine uski vaat nahi lagayee toh main pagal ho jaungi!! I TELL U!! Mujhe usse tarpa tarpa ke apna badla lena hain...plzzz understand!!!

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famin

@famin

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: ARMaaneetAbhiya
e="2">thankyou SOO much yaar for liking it!! it makes my day to read all of you guys comments..😳😳😳arre yaar Akash ka naam nahi lungi toh uske taraf M ki much wanted fafrat kaise likkhungi?? Uski vaat kaise lagaungi?? sorry yaar, Akash ka jikr ko toh sehna parega..usko sehna parega...caz agar maine uski vaat nahi lagayee toh main pagal ho jaungi!! I TELL U!! Mujhe usse tarpa tarpa ke apna badla lena hain...plzzz understand!!!

ok yaar kuch pane ke liye kuch sahna partahe...