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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Simply beautiful!

Amazing work 😳

Please do continue with this.

Would love to read more on it

And please do Pm me the next part 🤗

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

This was beautiful Meera!

Arnav opening up to receive help from NK was very well written. So powerful is the bond of friendship betwen NK and Khushi that she was bound to listen to him.

And yes, I agree with the impossibility of the situation, things are so far worse that for Khushi to stay back with him, it needs a miracle.

Powerful, Intense, and Emotional writing Meera.

Thanks for the PM

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

perfectly right i loved

it was swiveled with emotions and the superb piece

gr8 writing

very intense

continue soon ya plzz pm me

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awwwwwww

@awwwwwww

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

awesome,😉intense heart ache kind,please continue!!!!!!!!!!

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violet-amster

@violet-amster

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

heyy meera...

the OS is brilliantly written...

the only thing which i felt was that the end was a little bit abrupt...

but hence, it was good!!!!

keep up the good job and continue giving us beautiful stories...😊

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Awesome. Would love to see you continue this.

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shona-li

@shona-li

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I'd love to read what happens next :) I wonder what Arnav would say...

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

thnkz fr da pm... grt os.. mst def continue...

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

wow this was indeed very well written, i loved it, it was so serious yet so heart touching well done!

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

That was wonderfull!

Very nicely put together!

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