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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

oh my god...
that was sooo beautiful...
n sooo damn perfect...
u spoke for emotions of millions of fans out there i guess...
i had tears in my eyes reading it...
it is so wonderful...every word,every line of it carries hundreds of emotions...
loved it immensely...
thank u so much for writing this wonderful one n sharing with us...

n thanks so much for the pm...:)

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blck234

@blck234

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

No no no, you can't do this. I am done with cliffhangers and tragedies. Isn't the show putting us through enough misery.? I am a just-finished-teenage girl who grew up on happy endings! Don't do this to me pls! pls pls pls continue the story and give me an all's well that ends well. :D Amazing portrayal of emotions! Loved Arnav-N.K bonding! Thank you for the pm:)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

*Tapli for Arnav*

*Mean look for author*

This was beautiful, Meera, and very still idiotic ASR like...with a hope that somehow Arnav will shine through sooner or later...like he did in the "Sorry" scene...sigh.

But I liked that Khushi didnt bow down because truly she needs to get over the martyr outlook and take charge of her life not for anyone else but her own self.

Good job! :)

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mariam42

@mariam42

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

This was by far the most beautifully written,

heart-wrenching OS, i have ever read!

Loved every bit of it!

Would love to for u to continue 😍

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Aiyeee... Don't leave it there... Please continue...

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Thats beautifully written!
I loved Nk and Arnavs convo..it was so sweet of Nk to support hm.&also he went to give that suicide letter I guess to khushi.

NO!U just cant leave us hanging..I wish U change ur mind & Update!:P

Awsum!piece of writing:D

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

meera y did u make me cry.

i dont want arnav to be forgiven fast.but tht goodbye shook me more than arnav maybe.

arnav's response n answers gien wer close to his character.perfect!

i liked the idea u used with them.also nk's role.hope nk provides a shoulder for him in show too.

nice update frnd😊

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Classic cliffhanger, this, Meera- both literally and figuratively.😃

Do put us and ASR out of our respective miseries!

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

He is just trying to resolve the situation the only way he knows how.

Who can blame him for that?

I see a lack of understanding from Khushi's end. Arnav knows all about her painful past. He understands her. Why she does the things she does.

But all Khushi knows about him is that his parents are dead. She has never tried to learns why he is like this. If he is emotionally frozen, why is that? Khushi needs to get him too. But she doesn't even try.

This OS was perfect in outlining their understanding of each other.

I loved it

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

All I can say is this left me shaken to the core. I'm still shivering from the impact of this powerful OS.

You brought out the inner torment through the jangling of the wind chimes.That was genius. And the characters,especially NK. You take each character and work wonders with it. He was no different here.

Sometimes you just hope inspite of the impossible situations in life. That is what I'm doing here.

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