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I love ur FF dear... read it one go... wonder why few readers!!!

I agree with mistyrains post. Of course the chapter is very well written as usual. The Arnav-Khushi part was interesting as Arnav seems to have remembered the incident in Bangalore. Nice to know that Khushi is impressed by him professionally and not just physical attributes.

The Shyam Anjali part was different. So Shyam is aware of her philandering and is ok with it. her thoughts on adoption will probably play a key role in this story I think. Personally I think they are narrow minded specially for someone whose mother was adopted.

Another awesome update!!

Both Khushi and Arnav have done their bit of investigations and research to find out all the details they can about each other 😆 even he has realised that she is the girl whom he had kissed in the hospital corridor a few months back ... just waiting for him to get back from South Africa to get real fire works started between them ... 😉

Originally posted by: mistyrains

The initial parts about Khushi being relieved, made me laugh :P Could totally imagine her expression there. And then her silent admiration for his looks, his achievements brought a smile to my face :D

Also the Shyam/ Anjali part has got me thinking. But I'll wait for you to throw more light in that arena, and not judge. Continue soon Kalyaani!:)

And that is absolutely because the way you write is is unique, in the sense it is straightforward, blatant, crystal clear. And I love that about your work.

Originally posted by: segad

I agree with mistyrains post. Of course the chapter is very well written as usual. The Arnav-Khushi part was interesting as Arnav seems to have remembered the incident in Bangalore. Nice to know that Khushi is impressed by him professionally and not just physical attributes.

The Shyam Anjali part was different. So Shyam is aware of her philandering and is ok with it. her thoughts on adoption will probably play a key role in this story I think. Personally I think they are narrow minded specially for someone whose mother was adopted.

So both Arnav and Khushi have now remembered the Bangalore incident. And the part about Khushi heaving a sigh of relief because Arnav was leaving was funny. And Arnav checked up on Khushi. Both of them seem intrigued by each other and I am looking forward as to how you take their story forward.

Absolutely excellent.. Reading Shyam's pov was amazing that gave more depth to anji, Arnav and raizada family in general..

So finally khushi and arnAv both recalled their first meeting :)