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Originally posted by: nimra21

So both Arnav and Khushi have now remembered the Bangalore incident. And the part about Khushi heaving a sigh of relief because Arnav was leaving was funny. And Arnav checked up on Khushi. Both of them seem intrigued by each other and I am looking forward as to how you take their story forward.

But the Shyam-Anjali angle was extremely interesting. Shyam seems very complicated. He is okay with bending the rules himself, okay with his wife's affairs but seems to love his daughter a lot and genuinely respects ASR. Would love to read more about him. A well balanced chapter and well written as always. :)

This is a very intriguing, complex and layered story.

luv d update!so dey finally know about d kiss dey shared!

Soo Khushi and Arnav have looked up each other..glad Khushi's also from a rich family else Arnav on remembering the Blore hospital incident wud've concluded she was some gold digger or stalker!
I wonder why his uncle wont tell him anything about Khushi.
Manorama the enigma..when will she make an appearance 😃
That was good update, that Shyam knows whats happening...he is every bit the shrewd lawyer he is supposed to be..i liked that ! Is it that Anjali feels neglected? Waiting to see how this goes!

Originally posted by: khusiarnav

I love ur FF dear... read it one go... wonder why few readers!!!

anyways i love the way u have portrait all the characters... its seems too real...

the dirty secrets of family members intrigues me...

since our Arnie boy is smeeling fishy and digging deep, it certain in no time he would know who khusi is ... m excited!!

amazing writing... add me in ur list!! i am hooked for sure

will be waiting for ur update

update soon!!

Anjali's Mama is Kushi's bi0l0gical father. But again he is n0t their bi0l0gical mama as their m0m is ad0pted s0. S0 Kushi and Arnav cann0t be exactly bi0l0gically related. We hav 2 c0nsider this fact if we want Arshi t0 b t0gether.
At this p0int I agree with Shyam...they d0 hav funny relati0ns which in turn are damn c0nfusing...I really d0nt kn0w where this FF is headed n0netheless I l0ved it...
wud u b kind enuf 2 pm 0r y0u d0nt d0 that???

loved thi FF.. Arnav pecked Khushi in their first meeting and under what circumstances... too good... and Anjali's character is too different... waiting for more updates..

wow i m first to comment!!!!!😃

Even i need retail therapy now!!!! 😃

The dynamics are so different here, i love it...Payal is such a releif to read about, i see Deepali and a nice modern one ...did i tell u i love that these girls all have their own careers...i probably did already 😃
Will Arnav find some link from BuaJi back to his family members i wonder!