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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Retail Therapy ... 😆 ... don't we all love that ...

Great friendship between Khushi and Payal ...

Though he is in Cape Town but Arnav can't stop thinking of Khushi ...

who seems like a puzzle to him ... 😉

Edited by Kishmish - 13 years ago

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Dhanya

@samrudhi.r

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

I am loving the way this story unfolds.

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: preetihere
The dynamics are so different here, i love it...Payal is such a releif to read about, i see Deepali and a nice modern one ...did i tell u i love that these girls all have their own careers...i probably did already 😃
Will Arnav find some link from BuaJi back to his family members i wonder!

I agree the serial leaves her looking silly always saying "Paar akash" and nothing more. Payal is a lot better here as I wanted to give her some due in my story at least.

Arnav wants to know the motive behind Khushi joining RE, not so keen on the family angle as of now.

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kinjalcp87

@kinjalcp87

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

nice update but when they will meet?

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Loved the update!!

Arnav has a way to get information ,be it from an agency or Payal...Interesting..

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citi

@citi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

The story is emerging gradually, the pace is just right, the characters have conviction and I am thoroughly enjoying it. Interesting to know Arnav's POV.

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Life was a puzzle and the process of solving it was challengingly enjoyable and arriving at the solution always gave a sense of achievement

Adore this sentence.

Wonderful.

Very well written.