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i must say, you have written it so well. with all those technical terms. you are so talented. good work kalyani.

sweeettt...khushi is being witty... i liky.

awww. arnav is sweet. the man is searching for life now.

Looking forward to reading this one...

Wonderful update!! Very eager to see how this progresses

dt was amazingly beautiful stry..2 read..

suggstd by Rasgulla..:D

i hav read it til chptr 29...n i guess ders more2 go..)

strtd wid Ajit-Khushi-Mahi.-Shashi part..Khsuhi's Mahi's daughter...n he dsnt no..Khsuhi met Arnav at d hospital..bumped n he kissed her der..:Ptooo fast...den seein her in his office..workin under Aakash..n guessin Ajit myt b havin n affair wid her..den Mahi..n stil d dbt cntinues..Arnav did d background chck..cudnt dgst it..cud he?seein her ol clear..n stil thinkin of n affair of hers wid sum1..or rthr his family.Khushi bonded well wid evry1 around.LA..Aakash.,Ajit..MAhi..PAyal..Farhan..Jahnvi..Anjali..evry1..:)Khushi's attrcted 2 Arnav n so z he..he broke up wid La..n shemoved 2 Mumbai..well..she wasnt dt bad..;)Arnav has kissd her soo many times..oh..he z ol drooling..n his family cn notice dt..Khushi's family tooo has nticed Khsuhi's attrction 2wrds her boss..:DArnav..d airport scene was too cute..+ kolavari Di..Jahnvi tooo was cute..:Ddunno hw Anjali z cheatin Shyam ova here..har jageh ulta hota h..:Dhe's bein tooo loyal..n she's wid sum Imran n so..Shya,m cnt evn tel abt it 2 Arnav..:(PAyal was tooo cute ol d whyl..:)she has bonded 2 well wid Khsuhi..in future achha hoga dono k liye...lold last chptr..Mahi got n attck..does he no abt Khushi bein his daughter by any chnce nw?dt he z hospitalisd?Khushi cudnt digst d news n fainted..n wen regained her senses..was askd abt d same by Arnav..gettin n indrct reply..he cudnt hold it..n dey kissd..sooo badly..Khushi id think regrets abt it..its juz dt she's hurt.ryt?she must hav nt xpctd dis 4m Arnav..feelings r mutual soo no regret plz..Arnav z guilty..wndr aage ki stry kya h..yu hav sent me d linkk..thnx..:)wud read at nyt..pakka..:Dyu r a lovely writer..:)

Enjoyed the read and plot..Awesome

Anjali s very Interesting character..while talkng to shashi..she mention Imran as her husband

I'm glad that I found this FF😃

Dear Kalyaani,