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Neha

@melovemayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Wow! That was beautiful!! Something I would hav liked to see in the show!!

Thanks for the PM!

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

This was just awesome. You write so beautifully.

Naina

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Nice OS... really loved reading it.. The last lines were simply amazing..

"Then why did you leave?"

"Why did you make me?

awesome...

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Great..Cute...BUT i want him to eat his words😈

Ha! yes baby i am CRUEL

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

*sigh*
beautiful :')
Amazingly written...absolutely wonderful...
Pleasure reading:)
Thanks for the pm:)

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Your way of writing is so different and unique! I loved it 😳

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Preity

@pepples_joy

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Wow... Beautiful...😛😛

Absolutely fabulous ...😊😊 Loved Lav's entry in this OS...

Just perfect...😊😊

Edited by pepples_joy - 13 years ago

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Avi64

@Avi64

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

That was a very nice OS... so expressive and beautiful... 👏

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Shar.

@infinity_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

OMG Sonalika! 😲

I can picture a person standing in Hogwarts robes and conjuring this story up! Coz, this is pure MAGIC... I love love love the way you write... and every time I read your works I feel so inspired! 😳 You are one amazingly talented writer and the OS is beyond beautiful. . .

My favorite part is where Arnav mouths that he may not be happy if Di is sad, but he won't be able to live with out Khushi! Gosh, its just too prefect for words.

I could imagine every expression and you write so clearly and wonderfully!

Splendid job! 🤗