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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

beautiful... your writing has that serene, calm and content feeling.. even if you are writing something very intense.. but you still have a way to sooth the readers back somehow...

loved it..

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

That was a superb OS. Lavanya was very cute & understanding & a true friend. She really find a way to unite them. U have written their emotions perfectly.

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meera

@jblueday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

wow that was an amazing thought! we all wish to see khushi like this someone who stand her ground.😃thank you for creating a bold khushi. loved that romance in rain. here la played cupid to bring these lovebirds together.😊 so sweet

thanks for the pm👏👏👏

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Nice os. I'm glad she stood up to him and didn't go to him the second he said sorry.

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

awesome ...amazingly beautiful Os...it had a natural flow of things the way it started n ended no quick jerks n turbulence.splendid storytelling.loved it...

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

It was so sweet and so real too.
Just a small gesture of concern from a loved one makes us want to forget all the hurt and complaints whatsoever and the heart tells to run back to the one u love most.
Thanks for the PM.