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jazzpreet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

beautiful OS! im a sucker for happy endings :) if only arnav had said all this in the actual show too :(

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Manju

@Drwho

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Small is beautiful!

You captured the essence and ended on a happy note!

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pips27

@pips27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

oh...so beautiful 😳

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Very very beautiful Sona!

Lavanya acting as a peacemaker between them, and when she reminds her of how he apologized for things he did to khushi ... So beautiful!

Yes such a painful portrayal of Khushi realizing that who was she kidding, she was just being non chalant to keep her emotions in check, but her here every moment wanted him..and only him.

The last scene where rain is falling and she asks him what about me? Just so brilliantly written sequence Sona, I loved reading it!

Heart touching and magical, it's what you always do, Magic!

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Omg this oneshot is sooo beautiful

I really love the vocabulary you use, you join the sentences so well, it creates such an elegant sense of imagery

and the emotions are so defined, I loved how Lavanya symbolized the bluebird, that was so beautiful

I really enjoyed how Khushi expressed her side of the story and her feelings to Arnav and how she really felt about him

and the rain sequence with the rain quieting down to listen to their conversation was so beautiful <3

your writing is so beautiful <333333 so elegant :D

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Aww it was simple and sweet!

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ritu

@janu1610

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Amazingly Awesome. The pain, The love ,The wait ,The hurt . every thing was perfect.

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rparash

@rparash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Very well written...

Nice OS dear...

Thanks for the pm😊

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

... i had to hold my breath while reading this... can you believe the tears poured after reading this??? absolutely beautiful

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

I'm late. I'm sorry! :( I read it last night and was about to comment when my Dad busted me and asked me to isleep :| I had a 4 am wake up call! But that aside.. This was brilliant! :)

I love how she is feeling so bereft without him even though she doesnt want to. The conflicting emotions have been shown so beautifully! She is fighting her feelings. I can see a Khushi who has reached breaking point react like this so amazing work! Love that Lavanya played cupid! :) And Arnav *sigh* he speaks so little but what he speaks from the heart, it does not fail to move you. Aur Khushi kis cheez ki bani hai! :D *melts* This was superbly written. Such a vivid picture I could paint for each scene you described. Lovely stuff Sona :)

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