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@lovearshi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Awesomeee
Loved it!!!
Hope khushi forgives him soon

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duncanelise

@duncanelise

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

I just caught up with all of it...

Your story is definitely not for the faint hearted.. I loved the way you've portrayed arnav, how he is just a vulnerable boy inside all of it.. My heart really broke for him.

I loved all the flashback scenes, especially the ones of aarti and khalid..it was just so sad!

You have weaved an amazing story.. Can't wait to read more!

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nina

@DeePiku

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

Poor Arnav...and poor Khushi...amazing story and update!

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Viji

@-Viji-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

OMG...last two updates wer awesome...👏

Arnav and akash are cousins...woah...😲

Felt very bad for arnav...its very hard for him to take such a big shock...😔

waiting forward to c how khushi consoles arnav...😊

Loved it😊

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Emotional update!!

It was heart wrenching to read Arnav's part...

I just wanted to give him a hug...he is all broken..

Akash could have been a little more supportive ..

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Ravneet (RKV)

@Mendesarmy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

new reader 😊

nice conept 👍🏼

finished all chapters from thread 1 to 3 took me 2 days to get to ch 49😆

i loove❤️ arnav in ur story even though he's a criminal

i cant believe abhaas did that to his own son😡

hows arnav gonna react

looks like khushi's confused with her 😕heart and mind😕

she's consoling arnav but also dont know what to say to him

nani was nice at least

i really hope khushi forgives him coz he loves her madly and deeply

i just cant see arnav like this 🥺 poor soul

i was shocked with akash and arnav being his cousin😲 but also kind of expecting it🤔

update soon and well soon dear🤗

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NILOUFER

@BARUN-myladdu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

aww i feel bad for my laddu...poor guy...y is nt khushi supporting him in such diff phase of his life...

poor guy...

bt hez family hez been longing for al these years..

bring them back together hun plz...

fab update girl

n hey wtz up wid ur health??how u doing now???

get well soon hun...

take care

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#678

fantabulouse...great update...feel bad for arnav, wounder wt his reaction to his father may be

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RIYA

@riyar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#679

hai u make me cry...😭😭😭

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#680

That was brilliant! Very well written and the flow of the story is wonderful. Its as close as it can get to perfection!

I hope you feel better soon. Take care.

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