Mirage #3 Check note on pg 149 for next thread! - Page 66

At last I read the most awaited update and my dear you are something else... I mean you never failed to give us intense feelings and emotions and the beauty is that we can feel each and every bit of that intensity so hats off to you... and am not good with words and never comfortable to describe my feelings so I really can't tell you what I truly felt about this update... marvelous that's all I can say 👏

Oh I so loved that Arnav came to her place directly from the airport but why the hell is Akash at Khushi's place and that too at that time???😡 No wonder Arnav pissed with him... and the way he thought "That man was behind his Khushi" despite of all the sadness this particular line brought a big smile on my face... he is possessive so like the Arnav we used to love...

What's the problem with Akash??? I so knew he won't accept him easily... I mean how could he??? He knows Arnav's truth, he is from a conservative family and to top it all the girl he loved is in love with Arnav. So his reaction is quite justified... I can't blame him for his out burst...

Oh God where did Khushi get this much self control??? I so wished that she give him a tight hug... he needed it badly... oh can I give Arnav a big bear hug??? I really want to... poor baby is going through a lot of things...

First his breakup with Khushi and then his past came to worsen his condition… but I loved the way you described Khushi's confusion and her love for Arnav with little bits… she sat beside him on same sofa, she wanted to cup his face when reality strike him… she was worried for him… she hated herself for being feeling so weak… she waited for his return back… she asked him to stay at her place… she at last accepted to herself that she loves him a lot and the time she stayed away from him only increased her love for him….and finally she showed her weakness, she tried to kiss him… but damn the kiss was a miss just like the show… the way she almost forced him to have his breakfast….and the way she hold his hand to give it a squeeze outside of Raizadas…. these all are awe moments and I so loved all of them… but the conflict between her mind and heart was the best part… her mind was giving her logic and her heart was there to defend Arnav against every logic of her mind… I so liked the idea that despite all her unconditional love for Arnav she can't forgive him easily… that's so realistic emotion… even I can't forgive a person who didn't bother to trust me just because I used to love him/her… so kudos to you for bringing such a realistic emotion with your beautiful writing style… loved you for that…

Oh Arnav you don't need to worry about, "What exactly was she doing when he woke up?" we are here to tell you…hehehehe… well she was kissing you man but bad timings… you got up at the wrong time dude…

Awe he didn't know what to do??? Well his confusion is quite understandable… during bike ride he was remembering their earlier rides and "He longed for those wonderful days with her." We also long for those days Rachel.

And now the bestest part of this update and that's actually my favorite, Arnav's visit to Raizadas. What can I say Rachel…???? You made me cry with his pain… how much he has to suffer more??? Please he needs some peace in his life… I can't bear his pain anymore…

So the ladies accepted him??? So many questions popped up in my mind… what explanation did Raizadas give to society when Aarti left them??? Did they try to search her??? Why couldn't they trace her being so influential family??? Did they have any idea about the reason for which she left the house??? And why the person who killed Aarti left her dead body to be retrieved by the police??? What did Raizada's reaction when they got her dead body after 8 years??? And above all Khalid Bhai… why couldn't he figure out her killer???

Coming back to Arnav I so loved his turmoil… so many things running in his mind and the only reason and answer he is getting is that his fate is ironic…. He suffered from hunger despite being the son of the Raizada's… his hunger turned him into a criminal… his love left him considering him not a good guy… and he is all alone to bear this and blame himself for this…. I can't blame anyone for this, not his mother, not his grandparents, not Khalid bhai, the intention of every person was good.. His mother did it for him and for her family, Khalid Bhai asked them to come to Delhi for his love.. I don't know to whom I am supposed to hate… not talking about Abbas as he is not worthy for even hatred…

The only hope is Khushi… go Khushi try to make him feel a little better… give him a hug try to ease his pain… you owe this to him after all he is the one who was there for you when you needed an emotional support… now it's a time to pay back…

Originally posted by: molten_lava

Note to all the readers :

Since there was so much talk going on in the forum about the readers and writers issues, which I'm sure you are aware about, I would like to clarify something to all the readers of this FF.

First of all, I love you all and really appreciate that you take out your time and read this FF and give me your feedback.

And I would like to reiterate once again that I'm not compelling anyone to comment. It is all upto you. I would even update this FF even if no one comments. But inspite of this, I'm indeed grateful to everyone who comments, especially those few ones who post such a long comment and make my day.

And you must have seen that I don't reply to your comments. I only answer certain queries. But that doesn't mean I don't read your comments. If I 'like' your comments, then you can be assured that I read every single word of it. It's just that I am person of few words and I rarely talk to people unless I go high and act weird and only then you will find me blabbering stuff,😆

And no, I don't favour any reader over the other. I love you all equally.

If you have to criticize something about my FF, point out any flaws, please feel free to do so. I know this FF is quite flawed. I realised it as I proceeded with the story. But who cares, as if I'm going to publish this.😆

And if you want to interact with me, you can send me a pm. But beware, I don't talk much. So please don't be offended by my silence. I prefer being silent than sounding stupid. 😆

And my biggest pet peeve. DON'T RESERVE A POST! Especially if you are going to take more than an hour to edit it back. Instead you can comment later if you want to. I assure you, I go through even the last comment. But if you reserve and don't turn up to edit it, I'm definitely not going to read it back, coz I have a weak memory and I normally don't remember where you have reserved a spot.

That's it! Thank you for reading it till here.

And to new readers, NO, I DON'T SEND PMs OF THIS FF TO ANYONE.

Originally posted by: lilly205

First of all, I love you and really appreciate that you take out your time to give us such an amzing piece of writing 👏🤗

and you know what you don't demand comments or likes from your readers and that is what makes me eager to tell you what i feel about your writing... and maybe that is why i loved to give long comments on your updates and trust me it all comes from my heart 😃 well I am assuming that I am one of those few who post such a long comment and make your day. 😆😳

i loved the way you answer your readers' quires... it's always good to answer them without disclosing the future plot instead of being silent 😊 and i totally understand your situation buddy because am also a kind of silent person... don't consider me a talkative person by my long comments 😉

"And no, I don't favour any reader over the other. I love you all equally. " now that's a lie... trust me it's not a human nature to love everyone equally...i mean everyone has favorites... it's ok you don't tell us who is your favourite reader but am sure you definitly have one 😛

how can i criticize your FF??? i mean am head over heels in love with this master piece of yours 👏 so i am unable to see any flaws 😆

i want to reserve a place but i didn't because am a good girl and don't break rules and never do anything which can annoy my favorite writer 😉😛

love you sweet heart 🤗

Originally posted by: molten_lava

@red: yeah, yeah. I do have a favourite reader. 😉

Guess who?😛

That one who posts such long comments that I feel like I'm reading a mini version of my own FF.😆

yeah, that one who commented atleast thrice for this update.😉😆

yeah, I think she even made the cover picture for this FF.😉😆

Do you know her? 😈

No? Maybe you need to stalk this FF for her.😉😛