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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

An update finally 😃😃

and a wonderful one as usual 😉😉

I loved Arnav in this chapter, he was just perfect !!!

His attitude to Khushi and Akash were coherent !!

He feels insecured because of Akash and it's quite normal because Akash is a good guy, with a status, good job, and who helped and still helping Khushi a lot 😃😃!! Really I love him a lot in this FF and I understand why he wants to protect Khushi from Arnav, afterall he too 'loves' Khushi ( hope not as much as Arnav does 😆) and he wants to preserve Khushi from pain !!

And I also understand why he isn't happy with Arnav being his relative, he knows only the dark side of Arnav !! And I'm sure when Akash will know more about Arnav and his past, he would accept Arnav as his cousin ( well I hope so but you're the writer 😆😆 seriously I don't think Akash is a bad guy !!! )

Back to Arnav !! The way he react to the revelation about his mom was awesome : he was lost !!! and it's completely understanble !!!

When you had given up any hope of finding your family and you learnt that your family was so close ( well I expect that now you understand my awful english 😕😆 )

Khushi disappointed me a bit in this chapter because I thought that she would help Arnav more in this stage than she did !! I mean she could have explain Nani about his childhood, about his life at Bombay (or 'in' bombay 🤔 ) ... and I almost expected her to defend Arnav in front of Akash !!

I do understand that she confused about her relationship with him and how to proceed with, and personnaly if I were her I really don't know what to do !!! ( maybe I would wish to have the Ghajini syndrome 😆😆 ) but seh should have helped him here because it's nothing to do with her relationship with him !!

I loved Nani, I was a bit scared that she would hurt Arnav but she didn't 😃😃 But she annoyed me a bit with all her questions 😆 !!!

and I disappointed that Arnav didn't meet Anjali ... I know that there won't be an Anjali/ Arnav bonding like in the serial but don't know I wanted to know how would Arnav and Anjali react to each other !!!

Well where are Lavanya and Aman ????

I'm so worried for Aman, and also scared he would do something to Arnav !! and Arnav he doesn't care about him at all !!

And Lavanya is she still upset with Khushi ?? she should have tried to understand Khushi !! she didn't even listen to what she wanted to say !!! It has been two weeks and she now must be back to her normal state !!!

And Rachel take care of yourself !!!

that's for you

🤗🤗

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Crinklez.

@Crinklez.

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#662

Poor Arnav, he has such a painful past 😭 i really feel for him.I'm a bit disappointed with Khushi, i expected her to show more compassion towards him. She told him this really big truth about his past, knowing how much he had suffered and then when he needed her support she didn't offer it to him.Yes he lied but she knows that his feelings for her are genuine. And if she can just think back to their previous moments she will realise why he had to hide the truth from her as he did previously express his fears of losing her or not being worthy of her affections. 😭 I'm sad.

Great chapter though and i look forward to next part.

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Sarikaa97

@Sarikaa97

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

wow an update!! that was fabulous and poor arnav...hope everything gets back to normal..

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desilover101

@desilover101

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

awww this arnav make my heart cry!! :( i just wanna go give him a giant bear hug!!!!

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Unm ... Hi
how do iI start? okay, Unmmm, I'm a big fan of yours although I've never commented on your work before today but i do press like almost always! uhh I really am a big fan and in genuinely sorry for not having commented earlier, I feel really guilty for having bbeen a silent reader for so long .
I started reading fan fictions based on arhi around four months back, mirage was one of the first stories I came across! when I came across it, you were already done with 23 or 24 chapters so I read the first couple of chapters and instantly fell in love but then things went wrong with my phone's browser and i lost all mmy saved links and truth be told I didn't exactly remember the name of the story, I just remembered the STORY,so then after fixing my phone i started searching through the fiction forum for any name that seemed familiar and had twenty or so chapters, I finally found mirage after some hard work!
Then I read till the latest update and of course fell in love with the story! I am a true romantic, I like happy simple and uuncomplicated stories but your wwriting is hypnotic, I don't know what exactly I enjoyed so much but I like to bbelieve it wwas the raw chemistry between arnav and khushi, it was clearly a thrilling romance and the scenario, the roles were exciting! it was almost forbidden, the romance! the minimal possibility of a future, all so thrilling!
ever since then, I've been stalking this story every alternate day, desperately waiting for updates .

so my guilt is due to the fact that for some reason unknown to me, I deprived this beautiful story of my appreciation when it clearly deserves it sooo much! please accept my sincere apology and believe me when I say im smitten by this story and that this is one of the best things I've ever read on this forum!

cheers
Sonia

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Awesome update x loved it loadz <3

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

wow.. the story is unfolding so well.. thank god that raizada's are not behaving all high and insult him..

i thought khushi would understand him better than anyone.. she knows he was not in this by choice but he had no choice.. it is survival instinct..

i am not asking her to support him but he can help him come out of it.. she knows he loves her no matter what..

it is a beautifully written update.. so well described the turmoil and pain of arnav..

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

This chapter was so heart wrenching. Throughtout the ff i felt like i should go and give arnav a warm hug and tell him that everything would be alright.
He surely deserves a happy life where for once he will not have to think of food and money and be loved only.
I understand khushi's point also that it is very difficult for her to trust a person who has broken your trust once but then arnav needs her now and his desperstion was totally visible when he said to khushi in raizada house that if he was not a criminal then khushi would never leave him. Well with the way in which you ended the chapter i think khushi will now console him as love always wins.
Have i said before that i love this ff?
Hope you get well soon. Will wait for the next update

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#669

my heart goes out to arnav... Khushi is only bothered about her broken trust. She should understand, how would an extremely reserved man like him share with her such a devastating secret so soon? He's lost all his loved ones and happiness already. He can't really compromise his lone chance of loving and being loved! I understand her dilemma, but she should really give him a chance

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norolim

@norolim

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#670

Loved the update. As usual.

Poor Arnav and Khushi are in a fix; what to do? And poor Arnie, being surrounded by his mother's memories must be hard. The poor soul doesn't even know that Abbas is his father.

I really feel for Khushi as well. She is so confused as to what POA to follow.

Very well written!

Continue soon,

Cheers, Avi.

PS: Who told you your Fic is flawed? Its one of the best I've read in a long time!