muuahhh for your notes... finally we get few lines today...
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oops... what was that???? i mean seriously its not khalid??? oh God why I forgot during all the analysis that the name of this story is MIRAGE??? so the soft corner for Khalid is just replaced by sheer hatred... and for Abass i feel nothing... i mean am completely blank there... it's a tangled web you have created for your readers... and that's the effect just after reading your note... what will i feel about the update???? i really have no idea as i didn't read it yet...
Congrats on your result...
***EDIT***
woohoo what an update... i loved it, simply loved it... i can actually felt the good side of Khalid... He was just like any other lover... devoted, loyal and head over heels in love with his lady love... i guess i don't hate him any more... i mean how can i hate the person who is the soul reason that we have Arnav still alive in this ff and apart from that he is the one who was ready to give his name to Aarti's son who is none other than our very own Arnav??? you were completely right in saying that every bad person has a good side and you wrote it beautifully to convince your readers that you were not wrong saying so 👏 brilliantly written emotions, i must say
I promise i will take care of your son... well he doesn't know but he is actually keeping his promise??? so Arnav's mom finally decided to come to Delhi for Khalid??? but DESTINY 😭
I liked her decision, i mean she was ready to accept him, but i wonder does she know about his being a mafia person... i don't think so... she wanted to keep her son away from all her past??? she wanted him to not involve in any kind of mess??? but poor soul didn't have any idea what mess her decision can create 🤢
so now the question is who killed her??? Abass???
you know I hate him... i was supposed to hate Khalid but it turned out that it was only Abass who deserve my hatred...
hats off to you for such a fantabulous update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I liked the VM by loveyDovey... but is Arnav "A Raizada" in this ff???? no offense to the maker of the VM, I thought he is just Arnav Singh...
Edited by lilly205 - 13 years ago
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