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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#481

Wow...amazing yaar...i had tears in my while reading the update.poor aarti hate this abbaas to the core...plz continue soon...

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kaymail

@kaymail

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Posted: 13 years ago

#482

I think it might have been Abbas that killed Arnav's mom. Imagine how it will be when Khalid finds out who Arnav is...

I think he might understand Arnav's love and help him...

Awesome twists and turns...very well written...

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#483

Omg what a twist...amazing updates...wounder if abbas knw arnav is his son or not ...looking forward to the next part continue soon...

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#484

Hiya rachel!

Whoop you finally updated this, even though there was no arshi in it i loved it never the less!

it was soo interesting got so much out of this chapter, soo abhaas is the father of Arnav and not Khalid hmm.. cant wait to read more, so please continue soon;P

Oh yeah by the way i LOVED the trailer, it matched your story sooo well! It was nicely put together and it suited 'mirage' very well..

Please continue soon im dying here ;D

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Ayera

@chocolover98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#485

Woooaaahhh. So many questions answered! Thaaanks alooot. x

Amaazing part. Which made everything clear.

WHAAAT the...! Arnav is abhaas's son..Shit!

I'm feeling so bad for Khalid..poor him :/

Can't wait for the next part. Update sooon.

P.s. *stalking alert* *ALERT ALERT ALERT* Lol :p

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#486

oh my god.. poor khalid.. sometime.. things don't work as they are planned. everything would have been good if khalid married aarti.. after all arnav did end up in mafia..

i feel extremely sorry for aarti.. she came to mumbai with a hope of new start and that was ending.. leaving her son with endless nightmares and scars..

loved the update..

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arushi05

@arushi05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#487

Well another great chapter fron you rachael.
So when i guessed and said that 'was abhaas arnav's dad?' then i was right!
From the chapter it looks like abhass killed aarti and wanted to kill arnav.
Looks like abhaas does not know that arnav is his and aarti's son.
So khalid bhai will get the shock of his life when he will realise abhaas killed aarti and arnav is aarti's son. Wonder how will arnav react when he will know abhaad is his father and khalid loved aarti.
Looks like khalid will die to save arnav.
Update soon. Just can't wait to read chapter 47

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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: loveydovey

No offense taken I noticed it too. But I cannot edit out the 'Raizada' part when Khushi was screaming "Arnav Singh Raizada" It would've been totally uncool if a *beep* sound appeared out of no where 😉

well Khushi was not screaming Arnav Singh Raizada 😛 she called him Mr. Raizada check out the VM at 2:03... but i can understand u can't avoid that... Khushi always calls him Mr. Raizda when she is really mad at him... i mean really really really mad

and you know what i saw a pic on net other day and i was thinking to make a banner for MIRAGE using that pic but i don't know how to make a banner and even i don't know how to post a pic on IF 😔

but you made such a lovely VM 👏 you are truly a devoted fan of Mirage

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Roopa

@roops82

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Posted: 13 years ago

#489

Superb update!!!! khalid and his love story was awesome..the emotions well portrayed..

Does Abbhas know that Arnav is his son?? or he wants Arnav cos he is strong and very talented in his profession??

Who killed Aarthi?? was it Abbhas or Khalid's dad??

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#490

OMG! What an amazing twist! So initially i thought Arnav was Khalid's son but he is abhaas's son? I so wanna see Khalid,abhaas and arnav's reaction when they come to know about this truth! I hope in the end Abhass will turn good and clean up the mess he had created between khushi and arnav! If he dint ill punch him in his gut! 😈

I felt really bad reading Khalid's story! I mean till now i have never felt disgusted because of Khalid though he is a mafia don! Trust me! I always hated abhaas who turned out to be Arnav's dad 😡

It was an awesome update! :) Just loved it! :)

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