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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: tejjo
need a update
when will get a update??????

yes yes,

update plz...

⭐️

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: tejjo

waiting 4 romantic action...samy u understand na ki what i want to say

mujhe unki fighting bhi romantic chahiye...kya karun romantic ff padhkar aadat pad gyi h
aadat se majbur

I understand riya, infact mujhe bhi romantic ff's padhane ki aadat ho gayi hai... 😃 😃

but in this story, u all will get to see romance of Veer and Neha (VEHA) but it'll happen only after one big twist ... till then u will have to wait...

"VEHA" courtesy to sweet Rashu 🤗

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

yes yes,
update plz...

⭐️

yep, writing it... but I am quiet busy with some work, I promise will update soon.

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Lovely part

oops! Neha hv difficulty in wearing saree? Even I hv the same concerns as her 😆 oye hoye! so our prince charming is there! no wonder the girls are over the moon. Man! Veer really is a devil in angel's disguise. Awesome! w8ing for another 1 on 1. Update soon

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

oh my..

hw come i never came across this ff...

but finally i did..

n read it all in one go..

simply amazing n awsum one..

loved it alot..

Veer - Neha nhok jhok is awsum..

cont. soon...

n do pm me when u update...

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rockstarashu

@rockstarashu

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

nice update samu.neha thoughts about veer were funny.seems like a war of words can occur between veer and neha because of priya.

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

res..

wil read n comnt soon...

~~EDITED~~

o teri.. poora ka poora ud jagda n jagda...

voh bhi kya burning...red hot...

dono ke dono kya active volcano h ek dosare k liye,

everready to blast on each other...

god, kya explosive anger h inn dono ka,

poore college k samne, kya masst jagda kiya h...

veer,.. jhootte kahin ke..

jhoot kyunbola..

neha is the best host this college cn hav...

u r number one wrong in dis- dat neha is not a capable host...

wait wait...wow.. wait one...

well i think, kahin veer kuch neha ki function hosting k saath tho kuch bora nhi karega na...

god i pray fr neha...

di, main bhi aapse naraz hun...

aap mere ffs pr kabhi cmnt nhi karte..

sabke prr karte tho.. hamehsa karte ho...

aap mere ffs padhte h kya???

di, come on.. behsak agar psnd na aaye.. dats different...

but, padhne layak tho likhti hi hun main...

i feel...bad...

ek chance tho dena chaiye na aapko meri writing ko...

just one read...one chance...

yeh tho main haq se mangg sakti hun...

mera right h..

aapne hi kaha tha ki m your little sis...

itna tho haq h mera...😭

by the way ud soon...

lov u

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Shraddhamurat

@Shraddhamurat

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

O my God!!! Ye dono kabhi baaz nahi ayenge jagadne se...
Kya verbal fight describe kia h...its just more than awsum... I really love your style writing... Neha ne to Veer ki band baja di...sach me Veer ko iski jarurat thi... Hw could he do dat to gal?? Priya ne sach hi kaha tha Veer kh shaadi Neha jaisi ladki se honi chahiye tabhi uski akal thikane ayegi...((waise b shadi to Veer n Neha ki hi hogi))
update soon

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
res..
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wil read n comnt soon...

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o teri.. poora ka poora ud jagda n jagda...

voh bhi kya burning...red hot...

dono ke dono kya active volcano h ek dosare k liye,
everready to blast on each other...

god, kya explosive anger h inn dono ka,

poore college k samne, kya masst jagda kiya h...

veer,.. jhootte kahin ke..
jhoot kyunbola..
neha is the best host this college cn hav...
u r number one wrong in dis- dat neha is not a capable host...

wait wait...wow.. wait one...
well i think, kahin veer kuch neha ki function hosting k saath tho kuch bora nhi karega na...

god i pray fr neha...

di, main bhi aapse naraz hun...
aap mere ffs pr kabhi cmnt nhi karte..
sabke prr karte tho.. hamehsa karte ho...

aap mere ffs padhte h kya???

di, come on.. behsak agar psnd na aaye.. dats different...
but, padhne layak tho likhti hi hun main...
i feel...bad...

ek chance tho dena chaiye na aapko meri writing ko...
just one read...one chance...

yeh tho main haq se mangg sakti hun...
mera right h..
aapne hi kaha tha ki m your little sis...
itna tho haq h mera...😭

by the way ud soon...

lov u

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thanx dear for such a lovely comment but

ye kya meri little sis to naraz ho gayi, u know wat rashu i always wait for ur long nd detailed comment. Nd talkin abt ur stories, i love ur stories, i like evergreen lov, army wife nd i also commented on it but sorry if i missed it anytime.