A Lost Battle -SwaRon OS- Part 2 updated.

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Radioactive.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

That was beautiful, Sudha. This was your first time? You have got to be kidding me?

The whole OS was really very well emoted. Aww, Sharon is a Keralaite. :) So are we!! Lolz.

I liked the way everything was so casual between these two. Untill... Oh did Sharon have to go? Moreover did she have to go without telling him what she felt for her, leaving both of em heartbroken? I guess things don't always turn out the way you want them to.

Beautiful written. And I didn't get a PM for this. :( Me sad..!!!

Edited by Srishti_SwaRon - 13 years ago

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neetha

@neetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

oh god sudhaaa...ths was sooo soo good..ur first tym..???its unbelievable..my suggestion..u shud write more...if u updatin ths,..then do pm me k..pls..n u r awesome..hey u too south indian..me too..but me karnataka😃

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

amazin 1😊😊👏...very touchin..bt really wished swaron had been together in d end though😭😭

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Trushna

@swaronland

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

great update 👏
i really luved the flashback most. swaron & cute moments between them was very enjoyable 👏
but sharon left swayam 😭 if u write something on swaron in future pls pm me

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

This was a beautiful os sudha
please make it a ss
Do write more n pm me

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swa-ron

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

oooh wont they be one...
Loved it n u done an awesome job...
Well done...
Pm me when u post ur next writings

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Edited:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59545052�

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Savage
Reserved. =)

Edited -

Hello, Sudha. Good work, there, really. :)

Now, you write in a very simplistic and realistic way. I liked the OS. You could work on your punctuation a wee bit, everything else is nice enough and you had absolutely nothing to be apprehensive about this but you did, no matter, understandable.

You've woven Sharon's story commendably and it's got a fine and relative setup. The sweet nothings fitted well and it all made up for a refreshing read for me, so thanks for that. 😳

Thanks for the PM, and I am sorry if I took a little too much time to edit.

-Kankshita

Thank you so much for liking my work, ihappy 😃
Will sure work on my punctuation and try making it much better the next time. You should know this means a lot coming from you, I admire the way you write. 😊
No sorry needed, glad that u even commented. 😉

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

sudha..dis OS is beautiful..n heart wrenching one!u wrote d whole OS so perfectly emotional..!!

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Oh sharon still went 😭 Sudha, let me tell you noone will say that this is your first time. You are so professional. It is more heart wrenching Swaron OS. Gosh how can sharon go away from swayam. Well done sudha you have written a masterpiece. Pm me when you write again.

Thanks meera for promting sudha to post.

Thanks for the kinds words there gal😊

Well sometimes its difficult to choose love over family and life security ahead. Sure will PM you if i write again.