A Lost Battle -SwaRon OS- Part 2 updated.

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Shalini

@lyfisbeautiful

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Sudha this was really nice... n i loved the fact dat it was one looong OS!!!:) :) nothing makes me happier than long SwaRon oneshots!! love u for this!! Thr is something very simple about the way u write n i loved how we got the entire story in sharon's narrative. Her thots involved both the present and snatches of flashback but everything was so clear right from the beginning.. Thr interactions were so sweet and genuine that i really dint mind the end.. and dats nt me.. u knw how much i love happy endings.. bt absolutely no complains with this one.. Its wierd how this OS has an open end to it n yet it seems so complete in itself...! Bt obviously i'l love it if u cntinue.. if nt i'l sure b coming bk to read dis again..

U shud definitely write more..

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Why did u end it one a sad note... Anyways it was amazing... Ok i just loved your os you could have made it a ss instead pretty long one must say...

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

this was freaking amazing sudha !!👏

it didnt feel to be ur first time at writing , this os was beautiful and fantastically written 😃

it was totally heart wrenching and i had tears after reading the end . sharon still left for US knowing the fact that swayam truly loved her.💔

i loved how u portrayed swayam , the perfect friend and the true lover who did let out his feelings but didnot impose them on sharon and let her take her own decisions 😊

u are awesome at writing so plz do write more ...

pm me next time.

Edited by tanukaswaron - 13 years ago

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

hey it was beautiful...and really it didnt look like u wrote it for 1st time...

if any plans of continuing pls pm me

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

sudha if possible make this a ss and make sharon come back to india and to swayam :)

if u decide to continue plz pm me .

Edited by tanukaswaron - 13 years ago

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

This is beautiful Sudha🤗loved it..thanks for the pm :) do write more...

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Loved the fact that it was such a long OS...Even though, it was a sad ending, It was very SwaRon like and beautifully written !!! Do write more on SwaRon in the future and make sure you keep PM-ing me when you write them !!!

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

hey...
are you serious????
this is your first time...
i can only say... unbelievably awsomest...
it so felt swaron way...
both know that it is love...
swayam accepted...
but sharon knows its destiny.. that they are not meant to be...
you know what... its really annoying that there are so less swaron ff's or os on this forum...
although i loved kriyansh.. still i am biased towards swaron... because their love story is so different...
so hope u'll write some more...
mai likh leti but i dont have such writing skills... neither time...
love you for it...

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

wow!!😃

di telling you it doesn't seem as if u r writing for d frst tym . u r sucha perfectionist.👍🏼

loved it di😃

cumnig to d os it ws heart wrencing, u have taken emotions to a diff level, well done 👏

i noe its n its truly ur choice if u wana continue or not, but as a req plzz do it .. m usually not a bugger fr happy ending but a sad ending like ths is breaking my heart.😔

cuming bck to d update d wrd is ..PERFECT!!😊

do write much more n thnx for the pm

-- Shreya and Kanishtha

Edited by muzzy_sk - 13 years ago