A Lost Battle -SwaRon OS- Part 2 updated.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Sudha sry for being late but i am glad you continued and i really loved the part2 osm...

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Anonymous--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Wow that was really good!! Ur very creative...! Will read part 2 soon

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Rashmi

@mrash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

👏
no words...
just 🤗 for such a beautyful n soothing writeup.

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

It was a lovely OD di!!

It was really awesome!!

D way u write makes me go "Wow"

I must say u r very expressive!! loved it totally!! :D

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Awesome OS...simply loved it😊

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Part 1-sudha di..😊.dis one was a really awesome story⭐️...it z nt bout our normal swaron story...bt nevertheless its so full f charm nd gud to read.😃...d whole thng ws gr8..d storylyn...evrythng ws refreshin.😊..sharon cme to india nd fell fr sum1..😉.Luvd d denial prt...y she cant b wit Swayam...her fear evrythng ws nycly written..😭..i absolutely Luvd how u matched sharon's nostalgia wit d present moment..😳..specially d car prt.😃..Luvd how d story proceeded...how dey strtd fallin fr each oder witout knwin themselves..😳😳..both of deir pain ws nycly ptryd.👏..where sharon ws scared to loose him.😕..one loss in her lyf has made her scared nd vunnerable..she don wanna loose any1..d dinner date ws beautiful.😃..d kiss dat shared ws apt.😳..bt after d kiss thngs went diff..😕.sharon tryin to run awy...thnkin bout raj her mom nd society...she leaves.😭..d depart ws so painfull.😭😭..sharon so wnt him bt still cnt hve him...it ws jst gr8...awesome blossom...👍🏼

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Part 2-yeah.😃😃😃..happy endinss...alas sharon accepted wt she wnts.😳..how she z nt doin justice to herself nd to raj.😊..Luvd d whole convo wit jeej nd her sis..😉.it ws nyc how dey gav her tym to knw wt she wnts...nd alas she left fr India to retrn bak to Swayam.😃..Swayam's expression on watchin sharon ws so funny...d blue print part ws funny.😆..it made d situation a bit li8er.😉..finally sharon confessed...😃nd dey kiss nd tokd.😊..a vry swt nd pleasin endin...Luvd d story...jst awesome...😳😊