A Lost Battle -SwaRon OS- Part 2 updated. - Page 5

Originally posted by: shaani2209

This is beautiful Sudha🤗loved it..thanks for the pm :) do write more...

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Loved the fact that it was such a long OS...Even though, it was a sad ending, It was very SwaRon like and beautifully written !!! Do write more on SwaRon in the future and make sure you keep PM-ing me when you write them !!!

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

hey...
are you serious????
this is your first time...
i can only say... unbelievably awsomest...
it so felt swaron way...
both know that it is love...
swayam accepted...
but sharon knows its destiny.. that they are not meant to be...
you know what... its really annoying that there are so less swaron ff's or os on this forum...
although i loved kriyansh.. still i am biased towards swaron... because their love story is so different...
so hope u'll write some more...
mai likh leti but i dont have such writing skills... neither time...
love you for it...

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Shalini you were way to kind on me.

I don't see i deserve this much appreciation. I was worried that i will leave the readers confused with the frequent past and present drive, glad to know that it was pleasant and smooth enough and made a good read.

I know, i am just like you a sucker for fairytale ending, thats what surprised me, i write something for the first time and can't think of a happy ending for it. 😕

But the ending felt apt to me @ the moment. Will sure consider continuing. 😊

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk

wow!!😃

di telling you it doesn't seem as if u r writing for d frst tym . u r sucha perfectionist.👍🏼

loved it di😃

cumnig to d os it ws heart wrencing, u have taken emotions to a diff level, well done 👏

i noe its n its truly ur choice if u wana continue or not, but as a req plzz do it .. m usually not a bugger fr happy ending but a sad ending like ths is breaking my heart.😔

cuming bck to d update d wrd is ..PERFECT!!😊

do write much more n thnx for the pm

-- Shreya and Kanishtha

Originally posted by: ccubedtab

I liked the last part. Some what similar to REALITY...

Keep writin... ;-)

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon

That was beautiful, Sudha. This was your first time? You have got to be kidding me?

The whole OS was really very well emoted. Aww, Sharon is a Keralaite. :) So are we!! Lolz.

I liked the way everything was so casual between these two. Untill... Oh did Sharon have to go? Moreover did she have to go without telling him what she felt for her, leaving both of em heartbroken? I guess things don't always turn out the way you want them to.

Beautiful written. And I didn't get a PM for this. :( Me sad..!!!

Originally posted by: neetha

oh god sudhaaa...ths was sooo soo good..ur first tym..???its unbelievable..my suggestion..u shud write more...if u updatin ths,..then do pm me k..pls..n u r awesome..hey u too south indian..me too..but me karnataka😃

Originally posted by: kool kanz

amazin 1😊😊👏...very touchin..bt really wished swaron had been together in d end though😭😭

Originally posted by: swaronland

great update 👏
i really luved the flashback most. swaron & cute moments between them was very enjoyable 👏
but sharon left swayam 😭 if u write something on swaron in future pls pm me