MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #6 link #7 pg135 - Page 4

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Congrats for the new thread hun👏👏👏👏👏
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Congratulations and celebrations for the new thread
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short ho ya big mujhe toh update chahiye 😳
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Haye me waiting to meet my darling Prem😳
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Congrats for the new thread😊
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Congrats for the new thread...
Waiting for the update...
Pls update soon...
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Congo on the new thread🥳
Do Update Soon ...W8ng!!!!!😍
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congrats for the new thread...
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.Here is the next update I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it. I have asked a question at the end of the update do answer it
love-Piya
PART 33

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Geet slowly started shifting her body weight on his chest by submitting herself in his loving folds

Prem hugged her back and both of them stayed in this position trying to capture some precious gems of these passing moments

After few minutes

Brad: Fantastic shot guys

Prem and Geet come out of their hug

Brad shakes his hand with Prem and pats his shoulder

Brad: What a way of portraying the meaning of true love; Hats off to u dude it seemed that this wasn't a simple musical scene of a movie it felt as if u were pouring out your feelings in front of Geet

Prem did not want to create any awkward situation for Geet as he respected her and loved her beyond imagination

Prem: Brad I am a trained singer and I have good knowledge of composing and writing lyrics and being a professional I personally feel if ur song has to be impactful u need to portray the feelings properly and that's exactly what I tried to do

Brad: But Prem somehow I could read the emotions in ur eyes and it felt as if every word was a reflection of ur true feelings it felt so real and moreover both of u were so comfortable with each other that anyone would be forced to think in this direction

Geet was about to say something when Prem stopped her by holding her hand

Prem: Both of us were comfortable because we know each other very well infact we are great friends who respect and trust each other to a great extent and this is the biggest truth of our relationship

Geet looked at him with immense respect

Prem: But Brad I think there is some serious problem with ur eyes or else how could u find emotions oozing out from my expressionless mirrors?

Brad: Haha u have a great sense of humor Prem common let's cut this topic I just wanted to thank u for ur contribution; it was just because of u that I was successful in getting exactly what I wanted for this particular scene

Prem: I am pleased that I could contribute in a small way for your dream project

Brad: Okay guys after 1 hour we will resume our shooting till then if anyone wishes they can take a break but make sure to come back at the location exactly after an hour

Brad walks towards the script writer and starts discussing the next shot

Geet was looking intently into Prem's eyes

Prem: Geet tum aise kya dekh rahi ho? [Why r u looking at me so keenly Geet?]

Geet: Tumne Brad se jhooth kyun kaha Prem? [Why did u hide the truth from Brad Prem?]

Prem: Tum iska jawab jaanti ho Geet? [U already have the answer Geet]

Geet: Prem'

Prem: Geet kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai main tumhse pyar karta hoon ye meri khushkismati hai tum mujhe apnao ya na apnao mujhe iss baat se koi farak nahi padtha kyunki mere liye mera pyar ek dua ki tarah hai jisse main har din pujhta hoon aur har dua puri ho ye zaruri toh nahi na? [There is no need to say anything Geet I am proud that I love u it doesn't matter to me if u accept me or reject me as I consider my love for u as a holy prayer and it is not necessary that every prayer gets answered]

Geet had no answer to his heart touching statement

Every word of Prem had a healing touch

Prem: Aur waise bhi Geet humare rishte ki sachhayi hum kisi begane ko kyun bataye? Humara rishta toh kafi anokha haina isse sabke saamne bayan karke usse sadharan kyun banaye? [There is no need to leak out the reality of our relationship in front of some stranger as it is our relationship is special and we won't make it ordinary by narrating the beauty of our relationship to every second person we meet]

Her respect for him touched the heights of the sky

Prem: Jaanti ho humare rishte ki speciality kya hai? [Do u know what is the speciality in our relationship?]

Geet was waiting for his reply

Prem caressed Geet's face lovingly

Prem: Humari dosti itni special hai ke hum ek dusre se koi bhi expectations nahi rakhte par bhi hum jaante hai k zarurat padne par hum ek dusre ke saath honge aur yahi humare rishte ki sabse anokhi baat hai [The speciality of our relationship is that we don't have any expectations from each other yet we know that we will be there for one another whenever required isn't this something unique?]

Geet took his hand and placed a small peck on his palm

Geet: Main humare rishte k iss khoobsurati ko humesha barkaar rakhungi Prem aur koshish karungi ke tumhe wo saari khushiyaan mile jo tum deserve karte ho [I will try to maintain the beauty of our relationship Prem and will try my level best to give u ur share of happiness]

Prem: Mere liye yahi kafi hai [This is enough for me]

Their sweet moment was broken by Sanju

Sanjana: Geet chal na shopping ko chalthe hai ek ghante ka off mila haina toh kyun na uska fulltu fayda uthaya jaaye [Geet let's go for shopping we have got an off for an hour so why not take full advantage of it]

Prem too wanted to divert the topic

Prem: Haan Geet Sanju thik keh rahi hai tum dono kuch der ghum aao [Yes Geet Sanju is right]

Sanjana: Mr. Richie Rich tumse kitne baar kaha hai ke tum mujhe Sanjana kehkar pukaro par tumhe ye baat samaj mein nahi aatina? [Mr. Richie Rich how many times have I told u to address me as Sanjana but I guess u cannot understand my simple statement]

Geet knew the cat and mouse fight was going to begin just in a matter of seconds

Geet: Bus kijiye aap dono mujhe yaha koi chuhe billi ka jhagda anhi dekhna Sanju tujhe shopping jana haina to chal agar tu Prem se uhi ulajthi rahi toh ho gayi humari shopping [Stop it u both as I am not interested to be a witness in your cat and mouse fight; Sanju u want to go for shopping na so lets go if u continue to fight with Prem on silly topics then our shopping will end even before it started]

Sanjana: Tu thik keh rahi hai chal chalte hai [Yes u r right common let's go]

Geet extends his hand and Prem gives the key of his car to her

Prem: Jaldi lautna [Come back soon]

Geet gave him an assuring smile and left with Sanju

Geet and Sanju were busy with their shopping when Prem messaged Geet and informed her that the shoot has been called off for the day due to some technical reasons hence they could continue with their shopping

The girls were super excited with the news and started taking full advantage of the oppourtunity

Meanwhile,

In India

It was night now and Maan was desperately waiting for Naintara's arrival

All of a sudden he was feeling all alone as there was no one with whom he could share his happiness of winning a prestigious award and that too at a very young age

He was lost in his own thoughts when the door bell rang and Naintara entered her bunglow

Naintara: Raji humare rose water bath ki taiyaariyaan kijiye [Raji arrange my rose water bath quickly]

Naintara was going to her room when Maan stopped her by calling her name

Maan: Tara

Naintara: Maan aap yaha iss waqt kya kar rahe hai? [Maan what r u doing here at this time?]

Maan: Kyun mujhe tumhare ghar aane k liye tumhara appointment lena padega? [Do I have to take an appointment for meeting u?]

Naintara could smell some frustration in Maan's behaviour and she did not want to ruin this fake relationship atleast till the time Maan was famous hence she tried to control the situation before it went out of her hand

Naintara goes and hugs Maan

Naintara: Aap apni Tara se naaraz hai Maan? Hum jaante hai aaj hum aapse baat nahi kar paaye par sach kehthe hai hum wakai mein kafi busy the warna aap toh jaante haina k koi bhi kaam aapse pehle nahi aata humare liye [It seems u r angry on ur Tara but Maan I swear I was really busy today or is it possible that I would have ignored u? U r aware that u are my top most priority everything else is secondary]

Maan breaks the hug and both of them sit on a sofa

Maan: Thik hai maaf kiya maine tumhe par mujhse vada karo ke kal ke function mein tum mere saath zarur chalogi [Okay I forgive u but u need to promise me that u will accompany me in tomorrow's function]

Naintara: Function?

Maan: Haan tumhare Maan ko best male actor ka sabse bada award mil raha hai [Yes ur Maan has won the best male actor honor in one of the most prestigious award functions]

Naintara: (thinking) Bus itni chothi baat par itna bada dindora peeta jaaraha hai disgusting par agar maine isse ye bata diya k main kal iske saath nahi jayungi toh ye mujhe emotional blackmail karne ki koshish karega aur majburan mujhe iss gadhe ke saath jana padega aakhir sone denewali murgi jo hai ye Maan'hume iss mushkil ko kuch alag tareeke se suljhana padega [Such a small thing and so much excitement this is disgusting. If I tell him now that I won't be able to accompany him then he might try to blackmail me emotionally and he might even succeed to take me with him as he is the man who is giving me golden eggs so I need to tackle this situation properly]

Maan: Kya soch rahi ho Tara? [What r u thinking Tara?]

Naintara: Hum ye soch rahe the k kal ke function mein hume kya pehenna chahiye? [I was deciding my outfit for tomorrow's function]

Maan: Iska matlab tum aa rahi ho? [That means u r coming with me?]

Naintara: Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai jaha aap jaayenge aapki Tara bhi wahi apne kadam sajayegi [Is there any need for this question u will find ur Tara with u wherever u go]

Maan: Main jaanta tha issliye maine organizers ko yeh baat pehle hi keh di thi ke ye award hum dono milkar collect karenge [I knew it hence I have already informed the organizers that both of us will collect his award together]

Maan hugs Naintara

Maan: Oh Tara kal subah kab hogi [Oh Tara I can't wait for tomorrow morning]

Naintara: (thinking) Hum bhi wahi soch rahe hai aakhir kal ki subah humare liye bhi kafi important hai huh aise award functions toh aate jaate rahenge par jo mauka hume mila hai usse hum itne aasani se gawa nahi sakthe [I am also waiting for the arrival of the next day as I have grabbed a golden oppourtunity which I can't afford to lose and that too coz of such a stupid award function]

Maan: Tara main kal tumhe pick karne aa jaaunga hum ek saath function mein chalenge [Tara I will come to pick u up tomorrow we will go to the function together]

Naintara: Nahi Maan hum khud aapke ghar aa jaayenge [No Maan I will come to ur house]

Maan: Thik hai jaise tumhari marzi [Okay as u wish]

Maan bids her Good night and left her house

Naintara: Aapki khushi se sau guna badkar humare sapne hai Maan aapke iss doh kaudi ke function mein hum kya humari joothi bhi nahi aayegi [My dreams are more important to me than ur happiness Maan don't even think that I will attend that stupid award function with u as my sandals also don't like to roam in such places]

Next Day

Maan was waiting for Naintara's arrival

He had chosen his best suit for this special occasion

Everything seemed perfect for him till the time he heard a message alert on his mobile

Maan: Tara ka message [Tara's message]

He opened the message with a smile on his face but his smile lasted only for few seconds as he felt insulted and rejected with the words that were flashing on his screen

The Message

Naintara: Maan hum aapke saath award function mein nahi aa sakthe kyunki aaj hume Karan Johar ke movie ki shooting ke liye jaana hai jismein hum Om Shanti Om ke title song ki tarah ek aur song mein ek cameo role play kar rahe hai[Maan I can't attend the function with u as I have to go for the shoot of Karan Johar's movie wherein I am playing a cameo similar to the song Om Shanti Om]

Niantara: Aap toh jaante hi haina k K. Jo ki movie mein ek scene bhi karna kitni badi izzat ki baat hai aur hum itna bada honor aapke uss award function k liye kho nahi sakthe[U r aware that it is a matter of Pride to be a part of K.Jo's movie and I can't reject this honor for the sake of ur award function]

Naintara: Aap hume galat mat samajiyega par samajdaar wahi hai jo sahi mauke ka fayda uthaye aur hum apni ginti samajdaaro mein karna chahthe hai aap fikar mat kijiye hum aapse vada karte hai k jis din aapka award function TV pe telecast hoga hum wo zarur dekhenge par filhaal hum Delhi jaa rahe hai K. Jo k saath [Do get me wrong but a smart individual will grab a golden oppourtunity with both his hands I promise to watch the telecast of ur award function when it airs on TV but right now I am going to Delhi with K.Jo]

Naintara: aapki zarurat ka saara saaman hum Shikha ke haath bhijwa rahe hai jo aapko humari mohabbat ki yaad dilatha rahega aur haan ho sake toh hume contact mat kijiyega kyunki K.Jo kafi professional hai unhe kaam ke waqt SECONDARY cheezo ko importance dena zyada pasand nahi [Shikha will give u all the things that u require which will remind u of my love but if possible don't contact me during my shooting schedule as K.Jo is professional and he doesn't like the interference of any SECONDARY thing]

The message ends

Maan felt completed dejected.

He threw his mobile onto the mirror expressing his anger

The mirror broke into thousands of pieces but there was something else that he could see in those shattered pieces

There was some red color that was stretched on those broken elements; it was Geet's sindoor which she had kept secured in one edge of the mirror stand

When Maan had thrown his mobile accidently it had touched the sindoor dibbi resulting it to fall down

Maan's feet automatically moved towards the broken glass pieces as he could see Geet's face in it

Her face was looking so pale so tired and completely shattered exactly like the broken pieces of glass

It seemed that he was not alone Geet's soul was still there with him to share his grief and to lend him a shoulder where he could cry

She was crying because she could feel his pain atleast this is what his heart believed

His heart started dominating him and requested him not to allow her to go away from him this time

He tried to touch her face but before his thoughts could cross this barrier the doors of his imagination were closed and blood started oozing out from his fingers which was a proof that he was all alone

Knowingly or unknowingly the true words of his heart made way to his mouth

Maan: Geet'.Geet'

PRECAP 1: It was strange she was praying for the safety of a man whom she hated the most'but was this the truth? Does she really hate him or was she trying to hide her love behind the curtains of hatred?

PRECAP 2: Maan admitted in hospital

Okay guys just wanted to ask what punishments do u want to bestow on Maan? If any one of u have any kind of suggestions then do let me know

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Love-Piya


Part 34: Page 26

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fabuls update. loved geet n prem scenes n da awesome dialogues. loved prems unconditional n selfless loved towards geet. maan tho deserves more this is jst da start.

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