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Ah, WOW!
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So many times I spent reading so many fan fictions on ArHi this summer. Each had its own charm, its own uniqueness, its own beauty. They were awesome, they sure were. But soon, I found myself feeling bland and searching on google for some fan fiction based on original concept. I ended up finding some one shots, but can I say, I was not satiated. I was crazily running here and there with my folder full of bookmarks. Now, I had read your Desert Rose on blog previously itself. And that was surely magnificent, the only FF which could let me conceptualize Arnav-Khushi as known to us, in my rear mind. I ended up going through your list on blog, and then climbed back to you in IF to find this beautiful series. Thank you for writing this.
The alternate way in which you presented the flow was more realistic for me. Arnav tried hard to rethink if he was correct in doubting the one person he loved. It's so true that one simply doesn't forget all the love at once and starts hurting the other person so bad as shown in IPKKND all of a sudden. He had his moments of rash decisions, then again he also wanted to make Khushi happy after all the contempt she had to face from her family. They have their moments together as a couple living so closely knt together. But then, one moment of distrust is enough for Arnav to make another rash decision. This is so true to his presented personality.
Lastly, I would like to say, your scenes are very sensual. When I say sensual, I must tell you that I prefer Sylvia Day to E L James. Having said that, I congratulate you as you have that special talent to convert love scene into a hair-rising steamy moment for a woman. Kudos!
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