Arhi: Dark Night Dawning Epilogue updated pg 23 - Page 35

Fantastic story

Just awesome story. Truly goes by name from 6 months to eternity. I seriously hope in original serial also something like this has happened. You have tied all the loose ends perfectly. And the last confession that had about their entire journey so far is just wonderful. Thanks for such a nice story. Please PM me whenever you write something new.

Awesome one. This is the nth time I am reading this. It's like re-living all those moments. Beautiful work.. Take care :)

just read the whole story

attacked on this story..
let see how much time i take to cover this one

I just loved this entire story..
I started from Honeymoon series.. and read this FF from morning and finished it now.
I loved many things ... your writing style. . your description of scenes .. which made my heart beats thump many times throughout the story.. (which is very rare!)
And the chemistry between Arnav and Khushi is something very unique and the romance was not over the top without getting into mushy types and hatred.. It was so good.. Surely standing to the quote "nafrat paas aane na de.. mohabbat door jane na de.. The love and desire was unique..
It was very much realistic and even Anjali's reaction to the truth fitted so well... Not so dramatic and overwhelming reactions. .
And next the main part which I loved was Arnav and Khushi vented out everything and speaking about their past.. (which I so wanted to see on the show)
Then Arnav's proposal with her bangles was cherry on the top. . I so freaking loved it.
You did the things which the CVs of the show didn't. ..
I loved how Anjali converted her bro's and SIL's story into a fairy tale for her daughter. . And her name Arushi. Just love it...
I loved this entire FF very very much. .
Great work!

P.S. I loved how you used few exotic hill stations of India in your story with lovely detailing of the places..

That was an amazing read, Kavi.. Right from Arnav telling her how this marriage is permanent to Shyam's band bajao sessions, be it either seeing ArHi together☺️ or the way Arnav blasts him.. The moron that he is he deserved much more.. And what do I say abt ArHi's journey.. Khushi being apprehensive to bear her heart in front of him in worry of a denial whereas Arnav was still figuring what this emotion means.. Anjali went on to become much more strong than I anticipated her to be.. Arnav and Khushi's relationship saw a lot of bumpy rides till being settled.. And alls well that ends well.. I loved the small lil details u gave be it the places or how Khushi's saree looked.. Thats the best part about your stories.. I so miss "Desert Rose"... And this was such a beautiful story by you and Im shocked Im reading it now.. Anyways, better late than never.. And hopefully we get a new one from you.. Im so waiting...

It's such a beautiful story. Loved every bit of it :)
Do PM me too if you write more.

Charlotte, I have just read this story from prologue to epilogue in one go. I must say it is a lovely piece of work. I really like theses when the charachters are the same as the series. I loved the way the two of them got together, facing so much between them, infact it was do much better than the actual storyline as it was more realistic. Arnav sometimes the hero, but sometimes Khushi reverses the role. The chat that they had in the last chapter was SO RIGHT, they needed go get evrything off their chests, clear evry reason for the ugliness between them.

A BIG thankyou for your story, the time and effort to write and then post. Muuwh