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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Payaliya!! Yeh parh lo pase! To say kay koi faraq nahi parhta and to actually koi faraq nahi parhta may there is a world of difference... and you my Shue, you are brilliance!

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

You call this different ??

This is just something that I wont even dream in those wildest dreams of mine !! And yet there you are suprising me with it !!

I just loved this OS !! probably cause I miss the old Payal-Khushi sharing times or I dont know !! But this one was just amazing from Payal's point of view... So tell me are you planning to write something from Aakash's POV too ?? Cause that would be perfect !!

Loved this one Nayika srsly

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Megha

@gheeshakkar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Good lord! Somebody tries to tell Payal's story. Nice :)

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

The void of their relationship was beautifully written here. The pretense which broke to tiny shards when a strong gust of wind blew. It was in tune with their characters. I liked it.

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johnangad

@johnangad

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

wow wat an amazingly written piece, it reminded me of rani abhishek confrontation in kank!!

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

hey it was really beautifully written.! i loved reading it.!

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Loved d ending..replicates their rltnshp..m glad u tried smthn dffrnt😊

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

That was truly amazing! I was reverted reading each word! This is the BEST work on Akash and Payal to date I have ever seen!

The CV's should read this! There is so much they can do with PAYASH!

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

very diffrent !!

awesome nayika ! loved it

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

wow! this is a brilliant piece dear .. loved it. reminded me of Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna a bit .. would love to read more if you decide to continue and make it an SS

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