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roohi_love

@roohi_love

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Very nice OS...different...but very very very nice!!! Thanks for the pm. 😃😃😃

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

definitely different, but so well-written! very realistic in the emotions portrayed! for a change it was all about akash and payal and concluded on a note of hope

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Nice os very diffrent but good thanks for the pm.

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suadvani

@suadvani

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Wow - that was sooo different! stunningly beautifully written.. but just so unexpected!

Payal an affair.. wow

Please write a follow up - I would Love to read what she does next.. does she really try? Does he forgive her..?

How long has it been since she left?

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

This was definitely different. But a good kind of different. I liked it!

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Wow that was really different!! I would least expect Payal to have an affair!!

Anyway great OS!!

Awesome work 👏

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

On a serious note...this has to be the BEST thing you have ever written!
I LOVED it!
It was brilliantly written!
Love,
Manal

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

i'm not really liking Payal on the show nowadays.. she always keeps worrying about her dress or jewellery! it was refreshing to read an in depth version of her feelings and how it would be if Payash continue to be this way :)