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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Brilliantly written
Khushi again becomes a source of inspiration
Hope payash gets back together
But can't believe Payal of all is having an affair

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

i like it

saw different side of payal and even akash to certain extent

communication and trust is big thing in relationship

and since it was lacking in theirs...things changed

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Ann

@ipkkndank

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Well love the concept =)

Actually when i first read this i was bit confus but again i read it then only it hit to my stupid head =D (actually i'm still bit sleepy)

love ittt

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TheFictionFreak

@TheFictionFreak

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Excellent. Quite a different concept. Thanks for the pm...

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

it was a great read...really there is so much scope in the Payash relationship which the CVs dont explore enough...

it was very well-written..

thanks for the pm..

cheers
what_the

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mali

@mali

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

really nice, it was different. Loved his you portrayed the characters.

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Preeti

@preetihere

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Oooh a story on PayAsh, payal cheating- ha ha ha...sounds good for how Akash is now i really feel he just had a crush on Payal.

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NutsandDolts

@NutsandDolts

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

This was so different! Very nicely done. The whole situation is completely plausible given the way their characters are looking these days..

Way to go Nayika! :D

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Omg so much of a difference in PayAsh chemistry !! It made a nice read !!

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Loved this OS
i think its my first /ayash OS.
Beautifully written payash relationship. :)

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