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Roshkolovemusic

@Roshkolovemusic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Beautifully written os. So different.

Loved it.😊

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Anzie

@Anzie

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

That was really really good! Different, but damn good!

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

That was different but interestingly different. I just hope cvs soon start some sensible storyline for payash coz seriously there is a lot of potential for these two characters to grow

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Certainly different, but very nicely written.. :)

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sweetygirl28

@sweetygirl28

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

well written shu abt the hollowness in payash relationship.. i think CVs too should work on their pair a bit more.. Good one!

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

That was different and I loved it...Very realistic ...😊

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Nice OS.. focusing on Payash.. hell true! there's gonna be a misunderstanding btw them in the show too... i think 🤔

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Different but Nice. Thank You😛

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

...this was out of the blue... i would expect arnav to behave in such a way (if not worse)... just not awash though... hmm... and payal... wow.. didn't expect it. however the ending was so similar to how payal would act. keep behind a facade of insensitive, because she is too scared to change anything...