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Posted: 13 years ago


hey irum

its such a beautiful way of giving ur comment thnks alot for this efford...
i m glad u liked it
u know first i was directly making him react but than i thought us k tu wahm mein bhi nhi hogi yeah baat tu thora twist tu banta hai..n i m glad u enjoyed it
i know present is difcult... yet..let see...
thnks for liking

today u actually reminded me of Mahima..she was use to be here ...she use to comment always in a diffrent way...

thnks dear


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



hey irum

its such a beautiful way of giving ur comment thnks alot for this efford...
i m glad u liked it
u know first i was directly making him react but than i thought us k tu wahm mein bhi nhi hogi yeah baat tu thora twist tu banta hai..n i m glad u enjoyed it
i know present is difcult... yet..let see...
thnks for liking

today u actually reminded me of Mahima..she was use to be here ...she use to comment always in a diffrent way...

thnks dear



U r most welcome Janni🤗
I m glad u liked it.My all efforts have paid of by ur this comment.
Mahima I think I talked to her twice or thrice may b when I newly joined this forum🤓.Bt that time I ws not this much active.

Wase Fiza u r very beautifully describing "Conversion Disorder" here .👍🏼
Hye Allah yeh kya ho gaya hai mujhe?

"Beautiful" and "conversion disorder" k words sath sath use kr rahi hoon.

I think I should stop here.😆
Edited by Irum. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful post
i had tears when mayank was talking to nupur in hospital ...

me too was taken a back like shilpa aunty seeing mayanks reaction regarding rg at first but later i loughed out loud .

past too was potrayed nicely .

but ...bohot muskilse mai ACCORDING TO UR ADVICE mayank ko us gharki guest samjh rahi thi .but mayank k hichkichahat schayi ko samne le aya 😔
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Posted: 13 years ago


thnsk alot dear


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

beautiful post
i had tears when mayank was talking to nupur in hospital ...

me too was taken a back like shilpa aunty seeing mayanks reaction regarding rg at first but later i loughed out loud .

past too was potrayed nicely .

but ...bohot muskilse mai ACCORDING TO UR ADVICE mayank ko us gharki guest samjh rahi thi .but mayank k hichkichahat schayi ko samne le aya 😔




thansk alot dear..
i m sorry to make u cry
lolz...

err..oops...nhi tu socho woh sirf frnd hoon tu bhi tu yeah hichkchat aay gi nah..remeebr jany tu ya jany na...😃 asa socho...


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Posted: 13 years ago


thanks alot dear




thnsk dear



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update API...

i loved it lodsss
loved it wen Mayank was sooo normal assuming dat Nupur to get marry to someone lolzzz
hayeee...he was sooo cute while all baffled!!😆
i loved d way Shilpa aunty explained everything actually every posible aspect of his decision...
n for dat Hats off to my API...👍🏼⭐️👏
i loved it how u actually explain every important matter in such an wonderful way...
i was actually can understand what was Mayank's dilemma was actually able to understand his view...Thanks to u n han i sooo agree wid his View n all...
its actually weird to think abt someone u nvr actually though like dat bt han here Nupur is something else in his life so He deffo can think abt her like dat..😉
loved it sooo much...
again heart wrenching Present...Sigh!!!!!
eagerly waiting to read further...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗




thansk alot dear...
i m glad tht part i just addef for fun u all liked it
hey thnaks alot dear..u were able to understand it...n hope u will able to understand it further too

so here u goo with the next part
thanks alot dear for liking it

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Posted: 13 years ago

RPLYD TO U ALL..THANKS FRO UR COMMENT

N A VERY HAPPY BIRTDHAY RUCHI…


Chapter: 11

Past:

Morning came and he was still in sleep, yet shilpa was too much eager to know her son's decision which she sumwhere fear will be against wht she wants him to decide…

She knocked on his door ..he ws sleeping on his book of memories, wch he realize when he opened his eyes and hided it under his pillow, suddenly everything was changing… this never happen that he has hides nupur's any gift from his mom…but now he was feeling nt good to show it to her

Mayank: ji..

Shilpa enter the room and saw him still with closed eyes, she went to him and ruffled his hairs, siting beside him..its not unlike him tht sum one will woke him up..but she knew its isn't just a small thing that he is going through..

Shilpa: kya baat hai janab.. aj tu ap office jarahy thy.. aur abhi tak soray hain…

Mayank: alarm nhi lagay hum ny raat ko.. so sotay rah gay…

He was lying in her lap, waiting that she may ask him the question, he was awake at his time but didn't went out , so that she came to his room

Shilpa: kya baat hai ..raat bhar ap saoy nhi hai lagta hai..haina..

He nodded in yes..

Shilpa: tu soch kisi natijay (fasala) per pochi ya abhi bhi ap kashmaksh (delima) k shikar hain…

Mayank: pata nhi..

Shilpa: asa nhi hoskata… mera beta itna samhj dar tu hai k apni zindagi k fasaly buaht aqalmandi se lay sakhy… kya hua ..hum nupur se baat kerain kya..

I know my son is tht so sensible to take his life's decision properly

Mayank: ap loog meray baray mein itna yaqeen se kasay rekh sakty hain

Shilpa: hum log….hm… yahin mein aur nupur…

He smiled and shocked his head…his mom has just strted wht he was afraid of "teasing"

Shilpa; kyun hum log apko kafi achay se jantay hain… so ap ki haan hai..

Mayank: han k tu pata nhi… per sigh…..nah bhi nhi kerskata…

Shilpa: per apki fasaly ki wajah mehiz adhiraj tu nhi hai nah..

Mayank: nhi ami hum itni bewaquf nhi hai.. us k tu kam mein wasy bhi tama kerskta hoon..choro ga tu nhi mein usko.. us ki himat kasay hoi is had tak jany ki..baat hi kasay ki us ny yeah

Shilpa: ahaaa… ap asa kuch nhi ker rahy hain… wasy shukriay..

He looked to her…

Mayank: kis liyan

Shilpa: ap ny huamri baat suni aur bulkily sahi fasal kiya…

Mayank: hope so… ami…pata nhi kafi ajeeb sa fasla hai yeah… ami nupur se tai jaan nhi ap pehly baat keray… tai jaan ko humri rai baatana se pehly… taky hum nah kerday …unko koi moqa nhi day ga apni ray k izhar kerny ko…….pause….hum ny thik kiya naa…

Shilpa: ap fikar na keray hum abhi un se baat kertay hain…aur haan apny bullkil thik fasal kiya hai.. hum janty hain is per ap khabi nhi khabi nhi pachtay(regret) gay…

Mayank: hmm… aur sabar keray … hum office chaly jay …humaray samny maat shoro hojana..

Shilpa: chukled.. ab yeah bahgna ap jab tak jarai rekhy gay… apko utna hi door jany lagy ga apni sab se achi doost se… thik hai… hum un k room mein jarahy hain abhi she kissed his forehad.. and left the place..

( the more u will run form all this to face the more u move away form ur best frnd so face it if u have taken it)

He took a deep breath and went to get ready…he didn't knew wht he is doing is right or wrong yet one thing he knew… its all gona mess many thing.. and he has to be careful at tai jaan's part..he pretty well know her intensions..

……….

Tai jaan: ap se hum poch nhi rahy hain..apko agha ker rahy hain…. Apky pass do rasty hain…ya mayank ya adhiraj…. Mayank ny mana kerdiya tu woh bhi nhi bachy ga…so apna zehan taiyar ker lay….

She left Nupur's room and saw shilpa cuming out of mayanks room… but she couldn't read her expression wch shilpa deliberately hided…

Nupru on the other hand dropped her self on the bed and was in complete trans what just happen.. MAYANK…Shadi… how can b its possible… and adhiraj… the other part sacred her to bits… she knew wht kind of a person he is, if she every told mayank that one day he tried to came close to her, mayak would have killed him, yet know how he is she didn't told him..and living a life with him was..No No… it is better she die than doing so…. She actually don't have a choice…

Just than shilpa enter her room, seeing her numb sitting on floor her head on bed, she knew wht for her bhabi has came in her room…. Sigh …

Shilpa: Nupru beta kya hua..she spread her hand on her head…

Nupur: apko sab pata tu hai choti ami… yeah log asa kasay soch sakty hain…

Shilpa: agr ap apny aur mayank k baray mein baat ker rahin hai tu… kya borai hai… hum janty hain woh apk acha doost hai… tu kya ap nhi chahti k ap k sab se acha dost hi apk humsafar banay… is mein galat kiya hai..

( if ur talking about u n mayank ..so whts the bad thing.. u both are best frnds… so donot u wnt ur life partner to be so…)

Nupur: per hum dono ny asa khabi nhi socha ……..

Shilpa: janty hain… tu ap ek dosray k baray mein asa soch lo…. Nupur zindnagi mein agay pachtany ( regret) se acha hai… apko mayank per behroosa nhi hai kya…

Nupur: asi baat nhi hai …

Shilpa: aur yeah hum vaada kertay hain k apko thora waqt tu day gay ..k ap is k sath khud ko sambhal saky… dosra ap mayank ko janti hai… woh apko moaqabal azadi day ga

Per adhiraj…

Nupur: nhi mein us se shadi nhi kero gi adhiraj nhi ….choti ami woh bht bora hai …

Shiplap: shh asa kuch nhi hoga… jab mayank hai tu apko ksis aur se shadi kerny ki kya zaroorat hai..she said with smile…

Nupur: matlab us ny ..

Shilpa: ji un se hum ny kal baat ki thi.. aur subha unhiny haan kahdi hai…

Nupur: us k pata hai na adhiraj k baray mein… yeah tu nainsahfi (wrong) hai na choti ami…hamehsa mjhy bachny k liyan wohi kyun qurabani day….. uski khushi us k zindagi us k kiya

Shilpa: tu kya ap nhi chahti ek asa humsafar jo apno khushi se pehly apki khushi k sochy.. tu maaynk wohi tu ker raha hai..

Nupur: per usk kiya.. hum janty hain woh sirf adhiraj se bacha raha hai humain…us ki ziandagi barabd hojay gi…she sobbed a bit and sumone move step ahead and than stoped in mid way

Mayank who took his way from the lounge balcony to her rooms balcony, there secret passage wch they use always to make her feel good at times when she was locked there, or atimes for there movie nights n parties… or to make nupur escape at night to go out for fun

But today he wanst trusting anybody but her words only and wht made his heart ache was..he didn't did it because of the things she is thinking..he did it cause he donot want to repent his decion ever….

In early morning when he woke up , with the his head lying on open album, the person he saw first was her… that sumhow made him clam n peaceful…..He wants to give his most valuable relation a chance further in his life… he don't want to regard a time when som day in morning he will wake up and find person beside him, who donot know him, neither tries to, who isn't that close to him that he can share his sins with her too, yet he has given her whole rights of a wife, yet there is no companion ship..and that moment he will be regretting his "no" to nupur.. and that regard will be of no use…..

with nupur beside him , he has all the things, the only thing is about the intimacy and all…tht.. they will find there way to that too…

If lord has decided this fro them… he will make ways for their complete relation…listening to her one think was pretty clear to him that he has to tell her all too, but how, knowing everything has change now she will not be as comfortable talking to him as was before… but he will do it sumhow..he got what he want to hear and left the place to office he was already late….

Shilpa" asa kuch nhi hai beta…. Mayank ny yeah fasala kisi daabao mein aker nhi kiya hai…. Hum ny unhy pehly hi kah diya tha k sirf adhiraj ki wajah se is rishty k liyan haan nhi kerna… aur subha bhi jab humari baat hoi tu un k yeahi kahana tha..k adhiraj ko tu wasy hi dekh laity…

Nupur woh apni dosti k ek moqa dayna chahta hai.. han per apk fasala un k liyan sab se zaroori hai… agar ap mana keray gi tu hum bhabi se kah day gay k mayank ny mana kerdiya…

Nupur: choti ami ap ami ko janti hai nah… adhiraj nhi tu…

Shilpa: han hum janty hain…. Ap ko hum per behroosa hai nah… tu bus is rishty k liyan haan kerday.. hum apko yaqeen dilatay hain… apko is per kahbi pachta wan hi hoga

Nupur: yeah baat hum janty hai choti ami… asa khabi nhi hoga.. per hum mayank ki dosti k asay istmel nhi kerna chaty thy..itni khudgarzi hai yeah…

Shilpa: nhi hai.. unhony apk intikhaab khud kiya hai.. acha ab bus… is sab mein aur kuch maat sochy hum..apki ami ko yeah khabar day dain….

Tu meri beti ab hamesha k liyan meri hogai.. apko pata hai apky chotay papa ny tu abhi se celebration shoro kerdi hai…unko betay se zayda apni beti ki khushi hai…

Nupur smile knowing its true both of them love her more than her own parenst….

Shilpa: she kissed her forehead..khush rahy hamesha….

………….

Shilpa: bhai sehab.. hum ny mayank se baat ki thi….aur un ki haan hai…

Taya jaan: aray wah..yeah tu buhat hi khushi k baat hai..bus tu ab ap taiyariyan shoor kerain…hum chahty hain salamn eid per aray hain ..bus shadi tab hi hojay…samrat ki shadi se pehly…

Shilpa: yeah tu buhat hi achi baat hai….

,……….

Samrat: tu batay ga tu ny hum dono ko yaha kyun bolaya hai…aur tu mjhy se kuch kahny se pehly itna soch kyun raha hai

Mayank: humain khud samhj nhi araha hai kasy batao..aur kya bataoo…

Samrat: meri bhai bool..ab tu mjhy tension day raha hai….

Mayank: ok.. mein ny nupur se shadi k liyan han ker di hai…he said that n close his eys with the reaction

Samrat /gunjan: KYA..

Mayank: aram se

Samrat: yeah kya bekar k mazak hai

Mayank: mazak nhi hai yeah yaar

Gunjna: aray wah… yeah tu kamal ki khabar hai

Mayank: kya..gunjan…

Samrat; tu bol kya raha hai ..ek min ek min… tu khana chata hai k tu aur nupur..ek dosray se shadi.. aur kya soch ker tuny yeah fasal kiya hai…

Gunjan: I was so right

Samrat: yeah mazak nhi hai gunjan… mjhy baat kerny do…

Mayank: pls tu larki k bhai ki tarah baat maat ker…

Samrat: shukar ker mein sach mein nupur k bhai ki tarah baat nhi ker raha ho.. mayank tu us pyar nhi kerta

Mayank: mjhy pata hai..

Samart: phir..

Mayank: tu pori baat sunay ga… raat ami ny baat ki thi… yeah baat khuda jany baro k peech mein kab se chal rahi hai… Samrat mein nah hi ker raha tha… per pata nhi.

Samrat: pata nhi…he frowned..

Mayank: mein is rishty ko ek moqa dayna chata hoon… yaar us se pehtar mjhy koi nhi jatna …aur..mein life yeah baat regret nhi kerna chata.. na hi us ko kis idot k sath dekh ker ..na hi khud ko….

Gunjan pressed samrats hand to cool down..she can feel his though abt his sister…

Gunjan: tum ny thik kiyah hai mayank.. is se behatar fasala aur ho hi nhi sakta… aur mjhy yaqeen hai k tum dono ek dosray mein behitreen partners paao gay.. tu shadi kab

Mayank: khuda k wasata hai aram se yaar… ek din mein pori duniya uper neechy hogi hai… life mein pehli baar mein ny subha nupur se baat bhi nhi ki… had hai..

Acha Samrat mjhy tujh se ek favor chaiy

Samrat: kya..

Mayank: nupur samhj rahi hai k mein ny haan adhiraj ki wajah se ki hai aur woh khud ko kasoor day rahi hai sab k… tu us ko sab batay ga arm se baat keray ga…..

Samrat: aur yeah tu kyun nhi kerta khud..

Mayank: kyun k mein jaraha hoon parsoo training per.. aur eid k as pas hi aao ga..

Samrat: tu bhag raha hai…

Mayank: shayd … mjhy us ko face nhi kiya jaraha hai..ajeeb lag raha hai.. bus asa mjhy aur us dono ko waqt mil jay ga…hum samny rahy gay tu

Gunjan: mayank per asay us ko yeah bhi lag dakta hai k tum khush nhi ho islyn bhag rahy hoo

Mayank: asa nhi hosakta…woh meray baray mein khabi galt rai nhi qayam ker sakti…. Acha meri meeting hai mein chalta hoon…thanks…

Samrat: yeah kya horah hai ..

Gunjan: bukil thik horaha hai..samjhy tum… aram se raho…jis insaan ko us ko subha na dekhny per itni bechani hai.. woh tumhari behan k liyan pehly khud k liyan baad mein sochta hai… jo duniya tu kya us k apany se bhi us ko itna bacha ker rekhta hai…us se pehtar koi insaan la sakty ho tum nupur k liyan….

Woh dono apna rasta bana lay gay…

Samrat: I hope soo….

Gunjan: kya hope so.. mayank se behtar nupur k liyan koi hosakta hai kya…

Samrat: pata nhi… per nupur….


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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update API...
loved it lodsss
loved it to d coreee
Wow!!!! Mayank said YES!!😍
loved d way Shilpa aunty talk to Mayank n Nupur...
i sooo hate dat arhh woman dekho toh Ma hain Nupur ki bt batein kese karti hain jaise Step mom hoon...HUH!!!!
n den agar Mayank na kehta toh usse bhi dekh leti...😲 wah ji wah himmat toh dekho iss aurat ki...arhhh
meri Shilpa aunty kitniii acchi hain yaar...i jst love her...
awww...Mayank ke dad bhi bhttt cute hain abhi se beti ke liye khushi mana rahe hain...😳
Sigh!!!!! i hope ke agey ja kar Mayank ka yehi dooorrr bhagna unn dono ki alag hone ka wajah na ban hoon...Sigh!!!!!!
loved d way Mayank feel for Nupur n dis relationship...
Totally agree wid Gunjan...
Mayank was...is n will alwaysss be d Best Partner for Nupur...Sigh!
loved it sooo much...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: Api as ab ap ek hi ff likh rahi hoon i know ke jaldi jaldi update kar rahi hoon bt still i know ke Ramazan hain toh ff is not possible bt can u write some OS plzzz as main apki writings bhttt miss kar rahi hoon spcly "WWU" type wale...kya ap plzzz waisa ek OS likhogi phir se plzzz
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Aww luv u api ... Abi soch ri thi k kash ap update kre aur lo ap ne kr diya muwa... Bht umda api ... Past itna khubsorat lg rha he najane haal me kya ho rha he... <3 muje tu bra mza a rha he ;)

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