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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

wow nice update...


tai jaan tu seriously a strange personality but still m becoming too curious to know wht will happen next ?

update soon dear..:)







thanks alot dear
yup she is .. strange...
will cont soon


Originally posted by: .Divya.

hmm... Nice update.. I don't know what to say about Tai jaan 😊





thanks alot dear

donot say anthing ..its oky😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
it's just that i like your past update more
as present is much painfull

than past of ths ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update...

loved it lodsss
Beautifully written...
hayeee...iss Taijaan kya koi kya karein...Sigh!
kitni matlabi hain na...hmph!
ap Business ke liye Mayank ki Shadi Nupur se karwana chahti hain chalo koi nhi atleast karwa toh rahi hain...
bt den kya uska purpose fulfill nhi hua toh MayUr ka talaq bhi karwa diya kitni ghatiya aurat hain...arhhh
i jst hate her...
chahe inki wajah se MN ki shadi huyi bhi hoon phir bhi unhi ki wajah se woh log alag bhi toh huye hain na...
i don't like dis woman...arhhh
Shilpa aunty kitniii acchi hain...hayee
so MayUr ki forceful wedding huya tha kya??? n den dey realised dat dey love each other bt den bataya nhi kya unhone kaha chod do toh chod diya alag ho gaye...yeh kya baat huyi...
Sigh!!!!!! chalo koi nhi baad ki baad dekhenge...
bt abhi m happy ke kuch toh accha ho raha hain...
apart from present...Sigh!
hayee...chalo bhag chalte hain...😆🤣🤣
kash woh present mein abhi bhag jaye...😳
Sigh!!!!!
Waiting eagerly for d next part...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗



ya khuda larki
commet kam sawalo k paitara zayda hai yeah...
bhi abhi tai jaan k achy kam per nazar rekho.. us ko enjoy kero full.. as woh mast hony wala hai
baki rah sawal present k tu waha bhi ek achi chees hogi... in cuming updates...
mayank k reaction in cuming part...
pakka..
thnks dear for loving it ..
lov ya

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Posted: 13 years ago
rplyd to u all

thanks for ur comments... will be quick updates now/..as want to make story move faster... aur yeah pls ap logo k kam mjhy yaad dilay gi... so will like to ask all to unres within 2 days.. thanku..n y aone thing more i know this update have a bit of urdu more.. n bit down on health i might have not perfectly added subtilts..so sorry ..u can ask any time if its too much ..


Chapter: 11

Past

Shilpa: mayank ap kam tu nhi ker rahy koi

Mayank: nhi ami bolain kya baat hai….

Shilpa: ap k rishta aya..

Mayank: he laughed.. mera… yeah kab se honay laga ..larky k bhi rishty atay hain ..wah.. tu mein kya kero…

Shilpa: us per sochay..

Mayank: ami abhi kuch saal hum yeah muda(matter) drop nhi ker sakty kiya…dekhain hum abhi is project tak apna dhiyan kahin nhi batna chahty…

Shilpa: nhi jo rishta aya hai us ko dekh ker tu bulkily nhi

She came and sat on mayanks bed and ask him to join her too….

Mayank: matlab..

Shilpa: aj bhai sehab ny subha ek baat ki jo mera dil ko buhat bhali lagi…

Mayank: kya…. He frowned…

Shilpa: apki aur nupur ki shadi…

Mayank: yeah k koi sale chal rahi hai hai.. Samrat ki shadi k sath meri nupur ki bhi kera do..

Shikpa was taken a back.. he didn't reacted this mean he do feels for her…really waoo..yeah tu kamal hai..

Shilpa: tu is mein borai kya hai

Mayank: bori ki baat nhi hai mein ny abhi nhi kerni… thora kam mein settle tu hony day mjhy.. taya jaan ko kerni hai tu nupur ki kerday… wasy woh nupur k kis se kerny k iraday mein hai..

Shilpa hit her hand on her head….

Shilpa: ya khuda hum jab hi kahay ap itni arms se kyun hain… beta hum chahty hai k nupur aur ap ek dosray se shadi keralin…

Mayank: KYA…. AMI… apko ho kya gaya hai.. kis kisam ki ajeeb se baat hai yeah… nupur.. had hai… aplog asa soch bhi kasay sktay hain…yeah kya fasool se baat hai ,,,,. Hum asa soch bhi nhi saktay

Shilpa: is mein borai kiya hai…

Mayank: ami hum aur nupur acahy dost hain… maagr is k mtlab yeah nhi k hum ny kahbi bhi unko us nazar se dekha hoo

Shilpla: hum jant hain ap ny asa khabi nhi socha… magar ab tu soch sakty hain…

He was very angry with this idea… he just cant imagine nupur like that.. its just.. errr

Mayank: kya hogaya hai ap logo ko… asa kasay.. pls.. yeah suny mein hi itna ajeeb lagta hai ..

Shilpa: aram se..aram se..koi zabradsti nhi hai..maagr pehly baat sun tu lain…phir koi fasal kerain asay jazabti maat hoon…. aj taya jan aur tai jaan ny khud baat ki hai..

Mayank: ap janit hai na taya jan ny yeah baat kyun kahi hai… ap un k iraday acahy se janti hai

Shilpa: han beta hum un k iraday achy se janty hai.. janaty hain un ko irade yeah nhi k nupur ko ap milain..per kuch aur hai.. … ap dono sath honagy tu yeah business bhi sath hoga…

Mayank: phir bhi

Shilpa; han phir bhi… hum sirf nupur k soch rahy hain… in sab mein us k kya kasoor hai… he was abt to say suthing one she shh him… dekho pehly humari baat dhiyaan se suno….

Nupur k risht ap us ko valdain(parents) se janty hain.. aur yeah bhi janty hain k us k sath kya kya hosakta hai…. Ap nhi tu koi aur bahar k.. business minded insaan us k naseeb baany ga… ap janty hain us k rishta aya hai…

Mayank: Kaun…he got soften a bit…..

Shilpa: waris uncle k beta(adhiraj).. aur bhai sehba razi bhi hain

Mayank: kya un ko deemgh karab hogaya hai… woh had darjay ga play boy hai .. us ko.. us ko woh nupur ko day ga….un ko andza bhi hai nupur kitni masoom hai… halata karab kerady ga uski.. woh us k laiq hi nhi hai..

Shilpa: yeah tu hum kah rahy hai.. beta yeah sirf mein ap Samrat soch sakty hain… aur woh dono tu buhat business mind hain… woh wohi kerain ga jis mein faida hoga..un k kayal se koi borai bhi nhi hai..

Nupur ek achi larki hai.. aru hum yeah buhat achy se janty hain k behna apny us ko kahabi nhi mana

Mayank: tu is k matlab hai hum un se shadi keralin

Shilpa: woh apki sab se achi dost hai..jasay ap ko woh janti hai ..hum bhi nhi janty… aur jsi tarah se ap us ki hifasad kerain ga.. aur koi nhi ker pay ga…. Jasy ap us k kayal rekhty hain wasy koi nhi ker sakta… janti ho ap ny asa khabi nhi socha… per is se pehly k us ki zindagi tahbha kerdain sab mil ker.. ap bacha sakty ho…. Ap janty ho woh nah nhi kahy gi… bhabi ki kis bhi baat ko … ap yeah bhi janty ho k us ki ray ki koi ahimiyat bhi nhi hai…

Dekho mayank sirf nupur k soch….aur Nupur ko socho. aram se dhnady(cool head) deemgh se.. us ko sath ki zaroorat hai.. woh bhi sachy sath ki…aur ek baat ap bhi buaht achy se janty hain us se acha sathi apko bhi zindagi mein khabi nhi milay ga..nuppur se behatar apki zindagi mein koi hosakta hai kya…. asai larkiyan aj kal kaha hoti hai beta… mayank ap aur kya chaho gay apni biwi se..k woh ap ko samjhy, ap k kayal rekhay aur ap k ghar walo ki bhi izzat keray .tu yeah sab aur us bhi zayda nupur mein hai.. ek daam se yeah baat sochny mein ajeeb lag rahi hai..per aram se har modhy ko dhaiyan mein rekh ker deko…

Thik hai.. soch ker jawab dayna…

She was on the door of his room when turned around to him…to find him completely dumbfold

Han magar apk dil mein kahin ek pal k liyan bhi yeah kayal aay ..k nupur ko ap biwi k darja(position) nhi day sakty ..aj ni.. magr zindagi mein agay bhi khabi nhi… tu sirf us ki hifasat k liyan is rishty k liyan haan nhi khana… hum nhi chahty us ko zindagi mein phir se ass milay aur phir adhori rah jay..

Mayank: aur nupur…

Shilpa: pehly ap koi fasal kerlay un se hum baat kerain ga…

Leaving the room she left mayank in a huge dilemma… he was highly restless wht to do and what not to do…he threw his pillow on the floor in frustration…

Mayank: hum asa us k baray mein soch bhi kasay sekthy hain..

the whole night he was thinking and thnking yet he couldn't find any way… the only friend other than nupur he has is Samrat and talking to him means ur tlking to girls brother… gosh wht to do….he cant deny the fact that yes they way they know each other nobody else do….

Mayank: I just cant do it… I cant do it…

But he will be able to make her feel like his wife, can he love her ever, can he gave her any right on him, how can he even think so about her… wht kinda decision it is… he was so much in thought .. the only person he has ever talked before taking his decions is nupur, even when he if didn't feel like doing sumthing , and if she said u must he has done it…. But today he cant just go to her and ask.. see my friends is suddenly lost… kya kero…who will answer this all..huh…he was frustrated ..so many things were going in is head..so many…

The knock on his door make him cum out of his thought.. with uter frustration he opened it and found her smilingly standing there ..

He wasn't able to look in her eyes, it was strange suddenly he was feeling the aura around them change , he even can lok at her.. she frown the way he reacted…

Nupur: kya hua tum thik hona…

He looked at her..

Mayank: han humain kya hona hai tum batao…

Nupur: jhot bol rahy hoo…koi baat hia.. pershan ker rahi hai… mein maddat keroo…

Mayank: nhi baba hum thik hai… tum batao is waqt yaha..

Nupur: aray haan woh hum tumhain gift dayna bhool gay thy…

Mayank: gift kyun…

Nupur: mayank… janab ap k pehly project approve hua hai.. is k gift… yeah lo…

She passed him a gift…and he took it with a smile…

Nupur: aur suno is ko is waqt mat kholo..

Mayank: kyun…

Nupur: islyan k abhi tumhara deemgh thik nhi hai… thori dair so jao… kafi zayda istamel kerty hoo tum jab tum pershan hotay hoo…

Mayank : tumhain sab pata hai…

Nupur: tumhary baray mein… haan mjhy sab pata hai ..she said proudly and he chuckled too… shaba kahir…. Aur jab bhi lagay tum hum se baat ker sakty ho tu kerna..

Mayank: haan kerlo ga..

Nupur: ajeeb se baaat hai asa tu tum ny pehly khabi nhi kiya…

Mayank: kyun asa mein ny pehly khabi socha nhi…

Nupur: kya hua hia mayank…

Mayank: nupur agar tumko… mjhy mein ya humari dosti mein se kissi ek k intikhaab kerna hota tu kis k kerti…

Nupur: KYA… yeah kasa swal hai…

Mayank: buhat hi fasool sa sawal hai..per sirf jawab do plss….

Nupur: tumhara..

Mayank: he was himself surprised that it wasn't a surprising answer for him…eh knew she will chose him …. Kyun

Nupur: dekho agar mein tumahin chor do gi tu tumahr akya hoga…. kyun k Samrat ko tu gunjan sambhal lay gi…. Per tumhain kaun baradhst keray ga… tum sath ho tu dosti tu bhi sath hai….alag alag thori hai yeah…mein sath hoon tu kya tum dosti khatam kersakty ho….per yeah kaha se sawal aya ha…

Mayank: na pocho… ap jao mjhy suna hai…

Nupur: Kya.. fine.. good nite..

Mayank: good nite..

Sting on his bed..he opedn the gift despite of her all warning. he smiled at though how well she can read him, how well she can make his all problems vanish…

Opening the gift he grinned widely… God it was an album of his memories… the album he wanted to compile from so long..and wasn't able to… yet with the person to whom he shared it was her.. and she granted him his wish… she has always been such… doesn't this the only thing u ask from ur life partner…

It strted from the day when he was born to the moment , a beautiful moment captured in party when shilpa was congratulating him for his project approval, it was such a beautiful moment and even he didn't knew it was capture, he was going through the album and maybe it was the sudden turn of tables or his high thinking mood in one direction that made him look to this album at a different way…

There mayb one or two pictures of his memory were she wasn't beside him, didn't this said it all, didn't it mean that she has always been the partner in his life…

Its not about sharing his life with her 24/7,marrage or no marriage he has been doing so and he will continue doing so, yet the question that was making him feel sick was the THE step of marriage,… will he ever able to gave her rights of wife, the love the wife has right on, the intimacy that's sumwhere the beauty of that life….

And her cums the answere NO way.. I just cant..its..its so… I just cant even thing about ti.. this not at allt he way .. I cant even put nupur in that frame how cum I'll be doing so..

Concluding his reviews, views and answer he drift into sleep, with a determination wht how he is gonna talk with his mom… it was a long day for him, but a huge night ….and it will be a different morning he knew…

Present:

morning came and it was no new for him..he was right there beside her.. at times spreading his hand in her hairs, at time just talking to her endlessly, it seems it has been ages he hasn't talk to her, it has been ages they haven't have each other the way they use to be…. Suddenly there one desicon made everything up side down…and more in her life it has caused a huge tornado..

Sigh whtever it has been damage has been done… though doctor has said she has opend her eyes in this week yet after he has arrived she hasn't ..and sumhwere he was feeling to pain at that…is she that angry with him…

Somewhere he was feeling she is upset with him, but how can she be like this with him.. they can argue can fight but cant hate each other.. even after the talks of there marriage nothing changed between them.. they were the same..

Yet today he is feeling everything around them changed..

Mayank: kya nupur..tum bhi na…soto raam hogai hoo..uth thi hi nhi hoo.. janti ho tumhari maa ko aj kal kafi ghusa charah hua hai… relax..apko pershan hony ki zaroorat nhi hai hum sab sambhal lay gay… unko bhi aur tum ko bhi… per mjhy moqa do gi tu kuch kero ga nah…asa kasay chaly ga yaar….

Tum janti ho yeah jo sony ki bemari tumhain lagi hai nah is Samrat aur gunjan k honey moon bhi cancel hogaya… pehly shadi delay hoi tumhari wajah se phir yeah… ji wohi honeymoon jo hum dono ny kitny pyar se arrange kiya tha na un k liyan…

Kitni galat baat hai na… mera tu chor undono k hi kayal kerlo…. Ek baar dekho tu..just once meri taraf dekh lo..plss…

Ajeeb ho tum wasy tu roz mjhy uthti thi,..na utho tu nahala dayti thi ..ab mein kero woh sab… nhi kersakta na.. ap janab arma farmany k liyan hospital hi tu mila hai…

Ata hoon fresh hoker… khabardar jo koi ulti seedhi harakt ki aur haan door lock hai tu apki vaalda motharam ya nhi askti ..tu relax…


Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update API...
i loved it lodsss
loved it wen Mayank was sooo normal assuming dat Nupur to get marry to someone lolzzz
hayeee...he was sooo cute while all baffled!!😆
i loved d way Shilpa aunty explained everything actually every posible aspect of his decision...
n for dat Hats off to my API...👍🏼⭐️👏
i loved it how u actually explain every important matter in such an wonderful way...
i was actually can understand what was Mayank's dilemma was actually able to understand his view...Thanks to u n han i sooo agree wid his View n all...
its actually weird to think abt someone u nvr actually though like dat bt han here Nupur is something else in his life so He deffo can think abt her like dat..😉
loved it sooo much...
again heart wrenching Present...Sigh!!!!!
eagerly waiting to read further...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome..

both past and present..
Edited by shafyyy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am completely at loss of any reaction :):)
it was soo nice...but what affected me the most was Mayank talking to nupur in the hospital...
it was so heart wrenching...OMG...it was so well written...

but what does intikhaab mean?? i am not so certain about its meaning
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amazzing. mayur relation is so pure and divine
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

i am completely at loss of any reaction :):)
it was soo nice...but what affected me the most was Mayank talking to nupur in the hospital...
it was so heart wrenching...OMG...it was so well written...

but what does intikhaab mean?? i am not so certain about its meaning


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thansk alot dear
for wonderful comments...
thnaku so much

intikhaab means..choice.. to chose between
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Posted: 13 years ago
I need to read more to understand this FF 😊 but nice update, Fiza 😊

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