MN.NEW..PARICHEY...CHP24 LTH#2 at Index Pg 1 - Page 45

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update API...

loved it lodsss

loved it to d coreee

Wow!!!! Mayank said YES!!😍

loved d way Shilpa aunty talk to Mayank n Nupur...

i sooo hate dat arhh woman dekho toh Ma hain Nupur ki bt batein kese karti hain jaise Step mom hoon...HUH!!!!

n den agar Mayank na kehta toh usse bhi dekh leti...😲 wah ji wah himmat toh dekho iss aurat ki...arhhh

meri Shilpa aunty kitniii acchi hain yaar...i jst love her...

awww...Mayank ke dad bhi bhttt cute hain abhi se beti ke liye khushi mana rahe hain...😳

Sigh!!!!! i hope ke agey ja kar Mayank ka yehi dooorrr bhagna unn dono ki alag hone ka wajah na ban hoon...Sigh!!!!!!

loved d way Mayank feel for Nupur n dis relationship...

Totally agree wid Gunjan...

Mayank was...is n will alwaysss be d Best Partner for Nupur...Sigh!

loved it sooo much...

waiting eagerly for d next part...

love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: Api as ab ap ek hi ff likh rahi hoon i know ke jaldi jaldi update kar rahi hoon bt still i know ke Ramazan hain toh ff is not possible bt can u write some OS plzzz as main apki writings bhttt miss kar rahi hoon spcly "WWU" type wale...kya ap plzzz waisa ek OS likhogi phir se plzzz

thansk alot dear
u doubt mayank wont say yes...asa kasay...
err dekho un k bara mein positive wala point lo she is actually one who ask them to marry...
lol...himat se zayda un mein garoor hai k woh sab kersakti hai..taqeeder likh sakti hain
Mayank k dad i promise bht cute hain agay k updates mein u will find him more cuter...
sigh agay jagay kya hoga..lets see...
i m givng u all quite quick updates so not tooo far..yet abit far..
Gunjna tu hamesha se hi favour mein thi tu she have to convince her man too..

abt the PS: i have np writing an OS...these days im lacking any concpt that actually makes me write an os...so concpt chaiy...janu
thanks alot dear
glad u liked it n enjoyed it
will update pretty soon

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

Aww luv u api ... Abi soch ri thi k kash ap update kre aur lo ap ne kr diya muwa... Bht umda api ... Past itna khubsorat lg rha he najane haal me kya ho rha he... <3 muje tu bra mza a rha he ;)

lov ya too dear...
bus asay hi yaad kero gi tu ana tu paray ga nah
glad tht ur finally enjoying the past forgetting the future...
thannks alot dear hope u cont to enjoy

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

wow. what a beautiful relationship. hope mayur talk to each other freely

thanks alot dear..
glad u liked it

Originally posted by: luvumjht

Awsome part ...love d way u narrate a stry :)

thanks alot ..
thanku so much for liking the style

Originally posted by: .Divya.

Now that I read this update, I am almost sure that Tai jaan has created some miscommunication..

Nicely written, Fiza 😊

lol..lets see wht has happened.. yet ya sumwhere she is the reason of all the chaos..
thanks dear

Originally posted by: Maria.

very nice part...:d past was beautiful

well written

continue soon

thanks alot dear
will cont soon

Originally posted by: gopi06

awesome updt fiza
loving this matured mayank
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thanks alot dear
glad ur liking him
will cont ASAP

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

interesting update fiza

present ka twist kab tak khol jaye ga?

thansk alot dear
present as soon as they get married will strt to reveal... i need thm there for u guys to understnd the present

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Lovly update.

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

i loved Gunjan in this update :)

very nice :)

thanku😊..glad u liked her

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--

nice update.. :)

thanku

Originally posted by: Irum.

thansk alot dear...
i know u must not be... yet sumwhere he is in a hard choice to... he cant say no as he said..its isnt abt yes...
she cant marry him he isnt the type of person at all
thanks glad u liked her ...
she is like tht... donot u remember tht she was not even asking samrat abt gunjan ...she decide n people follow
samrat wasnt over reacting... he know bith if them so well, he is brother n nupur is very preicous for him..sumhwere he has also planned to give her alteast a person who loves her like anything... and he prtty well know the most imp thing in this relationship is lacking... so he is just being himself
lol... iftar achy se kero...subha subha saheri mein updates read kero gi tu sir ghomay ga...
i will make it alright soon presnt will take over...
thanks dear
glad u liked it

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Sorry di for nt comnting in previous part...I ws so bz that cudnt come online...
So abhi dono part eksaath parha...
And OMG itna sab ho gaya 2 parts mein...Shilpa aunty talked to mayur and both said yes too...WOW can any news get better than this...NOPP...
I just loved both tha parts...
The way mayank ws thinking nupur's importance in his life and frm a wife's perspective how perfectly she fits in his life..Loved all his thinking...And lol the time when he got embarrassed with nupur ws hilarious...Im so gappy that he dint take this decision coz of adhiraj but for giving their frndship a chance...
And i so lovedd shilpa aunty in this update...nupur is so lucky to hav her in her life...nd now she's gonna be her mother-in-law so sone pe suhaga...
Now waiting for mayank's comeback and their meeting...Dying to see their expressions now...lol
Cont soon dii...

its oky dear...
ramzan are going on i know we all lack time.. yet i m in speedo jet updates..lol...maybe cause they r already wriitten

yes they both said yes...shadi nhi hogi tu divorce kasay hoga...
glad u liked it and they way it has been presented..
u donot need to ask mayank to cum back..they will be not exacty yet facing eachother before he leaves too... so u will see tht soon too...
will cont soon

Originally posted by: shafyyy

VERY VERY NICE PART

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: drmaha

amazing update ..

dono nai haa kerdi wow cant believe...

seriously girl u r creating suspense day by day :)

thanks alot dear
glad ur enjoying

lol..tht i want to be there

Originally posted by: .rumki.

awesome update

thanks alot

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

so.. finally its official! MN gonna get married!🥳
par present ka kya hua?? update soon!

yup finally they are geting married...
present aay ga...next mein aay gay...
need to have it on n off..

will update soon