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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

Addab,

So here I am back with another ff'.

Parichey is a pure lovestroy, revolving around Mayank n Nupur. It is based on Muslim culture. Its in urdu, don't worry not to much typical and will be with English translation of difficult words'
This one is for Faria n Valiayh..there an year long wish is coming true here' and whats the wish u will get to know soon..

Things that u need to have in ur mind'.

1. As its based on Muslim culture so the first fact u need to get in ur mind is, in Islam marrying cousins or having relation with them is normal and allowed..

2. If any time in this ff u find urdu difficult 'pls let me know'.

I am directly starting with the first chapter reason u will get to know'hope u enjoy and like this one too
Fiza Ahmed

PS title credits to Ms SUjaa

PS:2...There is a question for specially my old readers, after reading this chapter which ff of mine just cums in ur mind' I need ur answer for sure..before I update the next chapter.. n hope u all can guess it

for pms ADD ME TO BUDDY LIST PLSS

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Posted: 13 years ago

INDEX

CHAPTER: 1
CHAPTER: 2
Chapter : 3
CHAPTER :4
CHAPTER: 5
Chapter: 6
CHAPTER: 7
CHAPTER: 8
CHAPTER: 9

CHAPTER : 10
CHAPTER: 11
CHAPTER: 12
CHAPTER: 13
CHAPTER: 14
CHAPTER: 15
CHAPTER: 16
CHAPTER: 17
CHAPTER: 18
CHAPTER: 19A
CHAPTER: 19 B
CHAPTER: 20
CHAPTER:21
CHAPTER: 22
CHAPTER:23
Chapter: 24
CHAPTER: 25

Thread:2
CHAPTER: 26
ONWARDS

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter: 1

Samrat: doctor howz she..

Doc: woh thik nhi hai… woh buhat gahri neend so rahi hain (she is sleeping , in a very deep sleep), agar unko 20 days mein nhi hosh aya tu I am afraid she will slip in to coma…

Samrat: so cant u do anything…

Doc: see Mr Samrat, it may sound to filmy yet, her brain will respond only when she actually wants to, jasay humain deep sleep se koi nhi utha sakta asay hi, is waqt agar woh chahy gi tu asa hoga warna nhi, kuch bhi jo un k liyan bht special ho,, ya koi insaan jo yeah kersaky… apny dekha hai woh apko thora hi sahi per respond kerti hain… per us k elawa woh bulkily khamsoh hain.. yeah sirf mareez(patient) ki apni chah hai… kyun k hum sab kuch azma (try) keraky dekh chukay hain

The doctor left and Samrat stood outside the ICU, looking at the figure lying so peacefully on the bed, it seems she has never experience so much peace other than today, it seem now she wants to rest after so much happening in her life, and yet its true why not she will want to have some rest, wht for she will get back to life..

He felt a hand and than some one hugging him from side…

Samrat: kuch tu kerna hoga Gunjan..

Gunjan: tum janty ho sirf ek hi rasta hai…. Us ko bolao.. woh zaroor aay ga

Samrat: kya kah ker boaloo us ko..yeah k us ny jis k kayl rekhny ko hum se kaha tha ..hum nhi ker pay …us ny yeah sab mjhy bataya tha.. k asa hosakta hai wasay hosakta hai..per hum kuch nhi dekh pay… us waqt humain kuch samhj nhi aya… humain us baat ki haqeeqat k zar bhi andaza nhi hua k woh jo kuch kah raha woh is had tak mojood hai is mein.. humain laga itna inteha(extreme) per itni jaldi ksay pochy ga sab kuch…

Woh thik tha.. hum bachpan se janty hain in ko phir bhi jaan nhi pay

Gunjan: yeah zaroori nhi hai Samrat.. is waqt us k yaha hona zaroori hai…

His cell rung and she showed the name flashing to gunjan, closing his eyes he gathered his courage to talk to him..

Hello, kasa hai tu..

Samrat kuch hua hai kya.. kuch garabar hai..tu pls chk ker , pata nhi huamin buhat gahbarhat mehsoos horahi hai… kuch hony wala hai.. tum dekho …

Samrat close his eyes, listening to his panicked voice…

Samrat: tu aja … yaha kcuh garbar mjhy bhi lag rahi hai..

hum dubai airport per hain .. 2 ghatey mein Karachi airport per land keray gay… ..kya hua hai…

Samrat: kuch nhi bs humain bhi kuch garbar lag rahi hai… aur tu ny kaha tha k kuch bhi ho tu hum tujhy bata doon
…………….
Past:

Samrat: kaha hai tu… kab aay ga.. mein teri wajah se ja k din nhi miss kerna chahta hoon

Mayank: abay araha hoon na…rasty mein hoo… university k first day tu asay bool raha hai jana hai jasay aj se tu shoro hojay ga ..

Samrat: dekh aj raging hoti hai… aur larkiyon k samny hero bany k sab se best day hota hai yeah…

Mayank: I don't need such day to be hero.. hum tu wasy hi best hain..

Samrat: ya yah.. maar jaldi ..

Mayank: maar gaya tu… teri settings k kiya hoga…

Samrat: hum khud kerly ga… yaar yaha baba mjhy drop kerny ko bol rahy hai ..kasam se mein nhi jao ga

Mayank: lol…. Oh cho cheet..dadi's boy hath pakar k jay ga…galay mein bottle latka ker….he was laughing at him… bahr aa agay mein…
…..
Gunjan: hey.. ap first year ki hai…

She was walking towards her dept and found a girl walking ahead, instead of getting bored she though why not to start making frnds ..

Girl: ji.. hey nupur…

Gunjan: gunjan… gr8.. humain tu laga tha orientation mein hum pakny wali hoon..

Nupur: hum bhi… chalo sath mil ker pakty hain..

They chukled and went inside the auditorium, filled with student of first year.. they were here for two years..PG.D( post graduate diploma) in business…they went on pretty back and mid seat tht so nobody notice them to much and will easily have fun with each other..they were similar, friendly and fun loving yet studious too..

The orientation finished and senior cam in locked the auditorium and went on the stage…

So we are ur senior…

Samrat: pari paoona bhai sehab…

The whole auditorium burst into laughter and he and mayank share a high five…

Oho so u really wana hai fun, both of u cum here…

Samrat went to them and actually touched there feets, and stood infront of them…

I said u too..

Mayank: apny kaha aur hum hazir… asay tu halat nhi…

He said leaning to his seat, siting in chilled position…

Shut up and cum here ..and do as I said..

Mayank: I wont ..kya kerlo gay…. Principle se shikayt nhi ker sakty, humari tu bulkily hi kuch nhi kersaty.. tumhara han mein kafi kuch ker sata hoon…ap ko naam pata hai humara … surname k sath… huh

Tum mera kya kero gay..abhi bata hoo tujhy tu mein...he moved forward and his friends stop him saying so is ko bahr dekhy gay abhi lets have fun…

Mayank very well knew now whts gonna happen, Samrat is gonna give them quite tough time, they have been raggers themselves throughout there academic life's, nobody ever has been actually successful to rag them….

Okay tu u… sing a song

Samrat: KYA..

Mayank: tu indan idol k audition mein aya hai…ga gaa… asi ragging tu hum skool mein bhi nhi kertay thy yaar… grow please…

Samrat: kasm se yaar.. mjhy laga tha in k caliber kuch high hoga but..okay sure I will…

He bow down and asked a girl who was sitting beside him and he has made quite an acquaintance wth her, to dance with him…

The sniper were quite shocked with their confidence and actually having fun ways, he took her hand and start singing and dance around…

Mein shair tu nhi magar aay haseen…
Jab se dekha mein ny tum ko mjhy ko
Sahiriy aagi….

Gunjan: yaar kasam se aj pehli bar regret horaha hai beechy bhitny ka…agay hoti tu yeah dance mera tha..he is dam hot

Nupur: Gunjan… pagal hai kya..woh pora flirt hai

Gunjan: tu hum ny kya kerna hai…dance hi tu tha…hum kaun sa us se shadi ker rahy hain… chill girl…uni hai tafree tu keray thori hum wasy achi khasi hata dali hai indono ny seniors ki ..im loving it…

Nupur: addat hai undono gi..she said in a whisper… wasy bhabi ap kahin tu hum baat keray un se apki

Gunjan: kya… yeah humain bhabi wabhi kyun bol rahi hoo… kya baat hia ap ny dost ki katair us ko bhai bana liya

Nupur: haan socha is dosti k liyan yeah bhi….she said dramatically

Samrat: thanku my lady… he bow down and ask her to sit, the whole auditorium clapped for him…

Go away.. they thought now it will be better to ask a girl to cum.. they knew they can rag her too easily..

Hey u.. they pointed to nupur and all turned around to look, but gotten figure out who.. nupur sallow a lump in her throat…

She was a confident person dam confident yet, this kinda things do make her a bit nervous…so the best way was she too moved her head back to look some one behind her..

pechay kya dekh rahi hoo..u in black n white dress…

Unfortunately she was only girl there in black n white…mayank looked at her and saw her sigh . they way she stood up he knew she can do it, yet yes she was a bit nervous too..

Samrat: yaar yeah kerly gi

Mayank: ker sakti hai ..thora back up chaiy…

Samrat: tujhy kasay pata..

Mayank: hum same point mein uni k andar to dep aay hain… yeah almost on door khari thi… bus waly ny brush kiya is ny jo wat lagi hai nah uski… jitni seedhi sadi nazar ati hai nah..itni hi tafree bhi hogi yeah… but in close circuit

Samrat: tu tu asay bool raha hai jasy tujhy pata nhi hai k yeah kya chees hai..wah.. drama

Mayank: humain nhi pata hoga tu kis ko hoga

Samrat: han tu wohi tu kah raha hoon

Mayank: aby abi seniors ki hatny per concentrate ker..

The gaze she was under from the moment she stod and was walking her way made her looked back in those eyes.. and she saw him showing his hand to be chill hum sambhal la gay… she raised her eyesbrows and pretty clearly said .. I can do it myself…

Okay so u..act like a boy..and propose any one of us..

Nupur: kya meri ankhein itni karab nhi hain..

Donot wory dear… hum tum aur bhi moqay day ga..to have an eye candy..

Samrat: yaar yeah too much horaha hai…

Mayank: relax.. zayda bhai bany ki zaroorat nhi hai.. hope yeah handle kerlay…

Nupur: chalo languor k bhi din aay.. fine…

Mayank: they laughed ..she will handle them…

She looked at all of them, when smart interrupt her…

Samrat: aray rukho…yeah lo zara character mein ajao gi..he gave her his jacket…

Mayank: magr phool tu hai hi nhi..ap kya hoga..

Nupur: hai nah..just wait..

She wore the jacket and pulled out a small flower that was attached in her hair clip…

She went near to a boy, who was too much fair, have a bit long hairs, and was wearing a bright purple shirt on jeans..

Nupur: han yeah thik hai… already a larki k character mein hai…

Han tu shankantala… tumhain dekhty hi meray dil k garden mein purple rang k phool khelty hain, tumhari yeah ghani lambi zullfay, tumhara yeah chehra jab bhi meri nazaro k samny se guzarta hai ..tum meri raat ki nenday ur jati hai…kya tum zindagi bhar meray liyan asaab(night mare) ban ker raho gay….

The class was laughing as nupur said it all in extreme dramatic way, and was actually full on insulting him…

The raging session finished, and they were out of the class walking in corridor..when someone called them from behind…

Samrat: hi nupur…

She turned and find the two boys cuming towards them..

Nupur: yes…

Samrat: shabash.. humain fakir ap ny humara khandan k naam rooshan kiya ..hi lady..he moved towards gunjan…

Gunjan: gunjan ..hi Samrat…khandan matlab..

Samrat: aray apko nhi bataya apki dost ny..bht bori baat hai
yeah…intrdcuing myself..Samrat nupur k yahin apki dosst k bhai

Gunjan jaw droped and she looked at nupur who has an smirk on her face..and noded in yes

Gunjan: ohh..

Samrat: so tum log humary sath hona …so wht say kafi achi bany gi humari..

Nupur who was noticing mayank which was least bothered about wht Samrat was doing and was busy in his cell phone..

Gunjan: dekhty hain…aj tu pehla hi din hai…

Samrat: yaar dekhny k liyan tu poray 2 saal hai…ap pls typical touch me not larki maat bana…

Gunjan: tum ko lagata be hai hum us type ki hain…

Nupur: wasy agar tum dono k hogaya ho tu lecture hai ..aur mjhy miss nhi kerna hai…

Mayank: chalo bhi shoro hoagin humari parko

Nupur: thik hai.. tum log yahin raho … hum jarahy hain

Samrat: akely kya kero gi…

Nupur: han ji hum akelay jay gay… aur phir ghar per ami ko batay gay

Mayank: nhi.. yeah zulim nhi… apki ami jaan hum dono k sir qalab kerday gi ( she will kill us)

Samrat: yaar aj frst day hai ..kya farak perta hai…

Nupur: parta hai Samrat.. strt hai subjects catch tu kerny do..phir bunk bhi keraly gay…

Gunjan: wasy class mein masti kerny mein zayda maza hai..

Samrat: nice idea…chalo…mayank tu chal raha hai ya mobile k ander hai abhi bhi…

Mayank: chal rahy hain na hoon nah…

Gunjan pulled nupur abit back

Gunjan: woh dkeho hum srif mazk ker rahy thy pls woh

Nupur: aray janab taselee( relax) rekhain.. hum apki dost bhi hai…aur bhai se asi koi baat nhi kertay…sathway asman per ja ker bhait jay ga… so relax…

Gunjan: thank god..warna mjhy laga mein tu gai…

Mayank: nupur tumko pechy chalna zaroori hai…meray agay chala ker ..kitni bar kahin ap se…

Nupur: arahi hoon na kya hai…

Woh kal bhi asa pass thay…. Woh aj bhi qareeb hain….

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Sujata

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Posted: 13 years ago

a big congratulation for your new ff. 🤗

edited.

Fiza, I really dnt know, what to say ... actually I alwz lack of words when it comes to your ff.

hats off to you dear.

no doubt, like your each n every ff, I start liking this ff too ... not only for that its your ff, but for its amazing concept n writing style.

in start, you gave a total shock ... she is in hospital ... away for everyone ... specially mayank ... she needs him right there beside her ...

I like when samrat called him and he informed that he already in airport. ... thats call a relation of heart ... love ..

past scene was very funny ... completely contrast of present ... I really forget the present when I have read the past story. they were total bindas type ... ekdum mast!!

the way nupu n samrat ragged their seniors ... I was laughing like manic ... kash humare Uni me bhi ragging hota, par kya karen, waha to ragging banned ho chuka hai ...

lol, I think, I am the first one who mourned for ban of ragging ... lol

you are alwz my fav writer ... n I alwz like your writing since BYLM.

very nice written ... superb.

now come to your question, I remembered all your ffs in this update, except Ardhangini ...😉😆

waiting for next update.

love ya

congrats once again ..😃

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Anila

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Posted: 13 years ago

🥳Congratulations🥳 API..🤗...for another Brand New FF...😍

hayeee...i loved it...

i loved it lodsss

i loved it to d coreee...By God!!!

srsly!!! u made me smile BIG...Sacchi!!

i was sooo laughing wid all dat ragging session where seniors were being ragged...🤣

hayeee...Kash hamare Uni mein bhi asa hota..n as dis is d 1st time after admitting into my Uni i read something like dat...so d most beautiful thing is ke...dat time main assume karti thi ke asa hoga waisa hoga bt dis time i can imagine ke yaar asa hota n asa hua...😍😉🤣

loved it sooo very much...

loved it to BITS...

yaar mere time bhi asa hona chahiye tha bt our seniors were way more intelligent dan Samrat,Mayank n Nupur...🤣

n Gosh!!! u know API..mujhe toh abhi se lag raha hain ke hayeee pata nhi yeha aur kya kya parhne ko milega ke apni Uni mein bhi yehi hone ke sapne dekhungi...By God!!😆😳🤣

bt now abt d starting so as for now i can assume dat its Nupur who is lying on Bed in hospital... n woh MAyank hi hain jo wapas a raha hain...

m sooo Eager to read it asap!!!!😆

waiitng for d next part...

Continue super soon...😳

love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: abt ur Qs...den mujhe iss ff ko parhte hi bhttt sare things yaad aye bt as for d clg life mujhe apki likhi huyi one of my most fav FF...""Ardhangini"" ki yaad ayi...By God!!! bt i suppose n hope atleast yeha Samrat won't be Evil like dat one...😆🤣

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maria

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Posted: 13 years ago

congratulation Fiza on New FF🤗Nice and Interesting start

will wait for next part

do continue soon..

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...EhSaas...

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Posted: 13 years ago

congo for new FF 🥳

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ruchi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Congratulations on ur new FF fiza di...and you are right...utni typical urdu nahi hai..I could understand well while reading..aage ka pta nahi😆

lovely start..by God mujhe mere colg day ki yaad aa gayi when I sang a song,acted an add for product aur pta nahi kya kya for seniors 😆

that was so much fun...their face fell seeing my confidence😆

I love all four characters here...(First ever time)😉 and mayank yahan bhi sadu😛 chalo koi ni still he is best 😳

continue soon di.

P.S.about ur question..sorry I read only CSI series,gear up,gmyh,MY and inme se kisi ki yaad nahi aayi..baki maine padhi nahi...😳

Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago

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mahek

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Posted: 13 years ago

congo for new ff fiza

urdu mein ff maaza aaye ga

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

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loved this ff .after long timew will have college fun ff again .
by d way are dey in uni or college? i mean samrat said JANNE K LIE PURE 2 sal hai .uni hai to atleast 4 sal to lagega na!!!!!!

so samrat is nupur's cousin.phir cousin k sath shadiwale bat kyun ayi? will family decide their mrg oor samrat gonna be villain? but from the first part it seems they share a pure bro-sis relation .

confusion .

cont soon.

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