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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Nice update but Now you should add present part bit more,its seems story has stopped at one point..Niether past is clear nor present..After 6 parts we nothing know about Mayur story except this they were good buddies..Please change the pace little bit... continue soon

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#232

amazing updt fiza
loved mayur teasing samrat
waiting to know mayank's reaction seeing nupur at that state
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Mini4

@Mini4

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#233

Nice update👍🏼.past n present perfectly written...the chatth wala kissa was quite nicely written..

it was funny d way mayank asks nupur to talk to his mother n when she asks him to do it himself he says nhi.. hum kerain gay tu woh humari bhi kerday gi😉

waiting to see how mayank vil react seeing nupur in her current situation!!!😔

thanx fr d pm.

continue soon.

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

loved it ...

m curious to know abt present more .
but actualy dont like relation n mrg between cousins .i find it very weired .
kash mayur coysin na hote to mujhe aur bhi maza ata.

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#235

OMG i could so well imagine Mayank's condition when he came to the hospital...

all ur updates are so well balanced between past and present...

please update soon

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

lo...kya kero cliffhanger per nhi hoga tu next update k intezar hoga...lol... but mayank's reaction is in 8th chapter...
hmm they were so differnt..
hmm mayank reaction needs to cum... he has to react and will change... is se zayda bora kya hoga... tht he will find her lifeless.. so us k reaction aay ga...

will cont soon

LIFELESS!!!😭 ye kya kah rahi ho..nupur will die kya?mai nahi padungi ab!!!😭