MN.NEW..PARICHEY...CHP24 LTH#2 at Index Pg 1 - Page 26

As usual very well written fiza

Their part and present were so contrast and you wonderfully kept the balance with serious as well as fun moments….keep it up

I am eagerly waiting for story to unfold so continue soon…

oh gosh cant wait fo rthe next chap ...

Originally posted by: -Anila-

API..

Awesome update...Beautifully written...

loved der Past lodsss...

i wish i cud say something like dat for der Present too...

it felt horrible to think abt Mayank's reaction wen he will see her...Sigh!!!

so i will hv to wait for more 2updates to see his Reactions...sigh!!!!!!

loved der past...
thanks alot dear.. hmm at present u will have bits of good but quite late.. need to build story so tht u can relate it with the past.. mayank n nupur meeting is cuming up.. in present..

hayeee...

wht i love abt dis ff is d Siblings bonding...

Bonding dat dey all share wid each other...

loved it to d coreee

m happy dat in dis Sequel SaJan r not bad as previous one...

n happy ke unke life mein at least MN ki tarha problems nhi honge...as Gunjan is qualified as per Tai jan's list...

i sumhow thing it has turned abit MJHT ff rather than MN...as sajan are very important part of this ff... n yes there nice unlike the frst season...

hayeee...Mayank is soo Adorable n Fun..

loved d way MN teased Samrat..

n han loved d way Samrat said ke uski behen ko sahi salamat pohchadena...he is such an Adorable Bro...i loved him here of course as a Bro...😉

lol.. i m gla du like there bond...han khud koi kam nhi hota na us se,..paka bhai hai

bt i want to ask something ke why Mayank always take Adhiraj's name as isse i feel like he has deffo to do something wid der Story...

kya pata Nupur ki shadi usse huyi ho ya uske liye Tai jan ne Nupur ki shadi Mayank se kar diya ho...

i actually can see u both occupied and i m glad with it... they way evry time u cum up with new plot...lol... i love it... oky adhiraj part is sumthing always in ur life.. if u look at urslef ..kloi na koi banda asa zaroora hoga jis se tumhary frnds har waqt tumahin tang kerat hoon... sirf adhiraj hi nhi hia yah ek sharaafaat bhi hai us se bhi mayank tang keray ga...

wht i love abt dis ff is it left U occupied to think abt it after u hv finished reading it...

Main n Paro na jane kitni dafa baat kar chukey hain FB mein ke iss ff ki kahani kya hain...🤣

so hatss off to my API for dis...👏⭐️👏

waiting eagerly for d next part...

loving it to BITS..😳

Love u API 🤗

thanks alot dear for loving it soo much

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Amazing part dii...
But u know wat main mayur ke present se itni pareshaan hoon ki past mein dhyan hi nahi de pa rahi hoon...feeling extreme restlessness...dnt know wat will happen when he'll watch her in this condition...
Cant wait fr nxt part...
Cont soon dii...

thanks dear
lol..aay hay asa hoga tu maza kasay aay ga... bulkil enjoy nhi ker pao gi tum tu phir... i think as mayank will enter in presnt u will find sum hope...
wil cont soon

Originally posted by: Prada_176

As usual very well written fiza

Their part and present were so contrast and you wonderfully kept the balance with serious as well as fun moments'.keep it up

I am eagerly waiting for story to unfold so continue soon'

thanks dear...
glad u are feeling balnce in it...
wil cont soon

Originally posted by: drmaha

oh gosh cant wait fo rthe next chap ...

it was amazing one yar...

loved it

thnsk dear
will cont soon

hope to see next part soon

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Chapter: 6

Past:

Samrat and gunjan were a couple and they have to face a high teasing session from mayank n Nupur.. to her bad luck Samrat wasn't at the university that day… they were in there final (3^rd) semester and they knew this the best time for them to have all the fun…

Nupur: han tu bhabi..

Mayank: yaar humain bhi tum ko bhabi bolna paray ga…

Gunjan: bus kerdo tum dono… aur kitna tang kero gay…woh tu bhag gaya

Mayank: woh kaun..

Gunjan: mayankk.. maar kahao gay….

Nupur was attending a call and she was siting on the opposite side of the road side… and the other side mayank was on full on mood of teasing her…

Mayank: maar kya kaho ga.. asoolo k hisab se bhabi jaan hum ap se baray hain…woh bhi pora 4 mehinay

Gunjan: han han… bulkily apki izzat kerain hum bhai sehab.. haina…

Mayank: kam se kam itna hi batado ko Samrat ny kaha kya…

Gunjan: yeah ap apny dost se pochy hum se kyun pcoh rahy hain…

Mayank: us se tu mein sab nikal wa hi loo ga.. magar.. he was smiling all the way and gunjan was too having fun but than suddenly his smile completely vanish and his eyes got stacked… gunjan followed his eyes and was about to shout

Mayank: nhi bulkily chup..he stoped her at once

Gunjan: mayank woh nupur k uper .. she was chocking

He gulp a lump in his throat and looked at her who was busy chatting on phone

Mayank: nupur ki jaan nikal jay gi gunjan.. woh buaht khauf zada hojay gai… us ko beintheha( pretty much) daar lagta hai saap(snake ) se…

He was panting wht to do.. the place were she was siting and talking on cell, had a huge tree above, and a snake was hanging just above her… he knew if he shouted she is goona move to much and the sanke is gona get alert and may attack her…

Mayank: aram se… gunjan hum us k pass ja ker khamsohi se usy ko layny ki khosih kerta hoon.. bus tum pls maat chilna us ny dekh liya tha buhat bora hoga… aur yeah lo chabi ..car kholo…

She nooded in yes.. and he very carefully n fearfull strt walking towards her… he himself was pretty worried knowing any time an time it an attack her… she say mayank cuming to her but he looked other way and she continue believing he is going somewhere else..

Just he reached her..

Mayank: statue nupur bulkily maat hilna… he griped her both hand and an instant pull her towards him..

She was shocked at his action ..yet he pulled her away from the place and pulled few step back… and the snake just came forward to attack… and mayank moved her more away .. they were on safe distance ..but from gunjans view it seems ..the snake will hit one of both.. and she couldn't control yet she shouted..

Nupur looked at gunjan and than towards were her eeys were…mayank tried not to let her.. yet she saw the sanke…

Nupur: her breath got stuck…. Ma..ya..ank… s..a..appp…

Mayank: maat dkeho kuch nhi hai ur safe..

Nupur: hum wahin … th..y.. w.oh…. hu..amin….. she was panting and shivering and he can feel her body turing completely cold…and next she lost her self

Mayank: nupur…

Yet she fainted….gunjan helped him to place her in his car… and she was lying on gunjan lap in back seat…

Gunjan: im sorry mjhy nhi pata tha…

Mayank: its okay gunjan… bus is ko hosh ajay… nupur pls ankhein kholo…. Nupur.. he slightly patted her cheeks… he was hell worried .. she was responding to anything… nupur ..nupur uthoo.. he sprinkled water and was rubbing her hand… and again patted her cheeks… nupur plss utho.. ya khuda..

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Present ( HAAL)

Mayank saw Samrat stopped at the door of a glass chamber… and he looked up to find it was ICU…. He closed his eyes and sink his head down… and slowly finding strengthen he proceed further..and stood still at the door… he didn't dare to look up… he need himself strengthen to look wht he is afraid of seeing… slowly rising his eyes…the sight wht he saw made everything inside him died right at the moment… the girl was liking lifeless completely … pricked with needles and attached with wires…. He placed his hand on the glass door…and slowly touched her image …

Aray tum hona..meray sath kuch bora hony dao gay khabi

Tumhain lagta hai meray hotay huay asa kuch hoga….

He didn't had any tear in his eyes, he was just lifelessly looking at her… he has no strength left in him now… a breath like a moan escape from his mouth…

For Samrat it was the most painful sight to watch ..two of his most beloved were almost dead…silent.. in a dreadful silence… still he moved to him and placed his hand on his shoulder..

Samrat: tu anadar chala ja…. He said n he looked at him..he closed his eyes in assurance… he knew he has no rights now on his sister neither he can get them ever … yet he even knew that at this moment its not about right or wrong… it was only about there feelings who nobody every thought even exist..

He opened the door and proceed inside…the more step he was taking the more clearly he can see her.. but she was nt the person he knew… she was a smiling creature at her worse part of life… she was fearful but nevr a loser… she always believed he will protect her… and here he even didn't knew she is like this…

Standing near by her bed he was looking at her, who was so pale, and seems so tired, and why not she has faced soo much all alone from ever and after he was gone he knew it must have doubled… it must have turned to worse… it must have turn to the intolerance of her… and here she lost her strengths even to live..

He place his knuckles and spread them on her cheek… it wasn't the same feel, they were cold not warmed, there was no blush, they way it those days… it has no reaction from her.. it seems it has no effect on her…

He sat on the chair and kept looking at her, trace every feature of her … ever moment of hers…he was continuously moving his hand on her cheeks trying to believe she was here.. beliving she can feel his warmth diffusing in here still

Mayank: nupur… he whispered softly in broken voice… kasi hoo… jawab bhi nhi doo gi…. Itni naraz ho kiya… thak gai hoona.. buhat zayda …hmm thak gai hoo… thik hai mein nhi tang kero ga… tum aram kerlo.. per vaada kero tum uth jao gi.. utho gi nah… mein tumahry pass hoon.. tumhain chor ker kahin nhi jao ga… khabi bhi nhi.. bus humaray pass raho.. jaldi se utho jao… plss

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Past(Mazzi)

He felt her eyes flicking a bit and saw her moving … he breath a sigh of relief…she opened her eyes and saw him looking at her intently… she got up and hold his hand tightly

Nupur: mayank woh ajata nah…

Mayank: shh… nhi aya nah… hum thy na pass ap k…phir… asay kasay ata.. dekho kuch nhi hoa tumko.. bulkily thik ho tum… tu daarny wali kya baat hai.. kahin nhi hai woh.. tum bulkily mehfoos hoo… kcuh nhi hai.. itni nhi daraty…

Nupur: tumhain pata humain buhat daar lagta hai saap se.. humain buaht khauf ata hai… nhi samjh ata kuch

Mayank: acha roo tu maat .. humain pata hai tumhain kasa lagta hai..

Gunjan hugged her tightly and rubbed her back..

Gunjan: nupur bus kero… kcuh nhi hoa hai sab thik hai…

Mayank: ghar chalein nupur…

Nupur: han pls humain ghar jana hai… hum abhi gahr jana hai… choti ami k pass jana hai..

Mayank: thik hum chalty hain…

Gunjan: mayank tum jao mein bhi chalti hoon..

Mayank: mein chor doon tum ko

Gunjan: nhi meri car hia na… tum abhi is ko arm se lay jao….

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They reached home and nupur rushed to shilpa and mayank signal her to take her to her room…

She wiped for sometime and than slept peacefully… he was all the time standing on the door of her room….

Shilpa: came out and close the door.. kya hua hai is ko..tini khauf zada kyun thi…

Maaynk: university mein saap dekh liya.. is k sir per latak raha tha…sirf ek inch dur tha woh us se…kuch bhi hosakta tha

Shilpa: kya.. ya khuda…shukar hai yeah mehfoos hai

Mayank: han shukar hai… woh buhat kareeb tha ami is k …ek baar agr utna kareeb dekhti tu pata nhi kya hota…

Shilpa: khuda k shukar hai ap thy waha… itna daar gai hai yean… ap foron ghost lay hum in k sadqa dain….aur ap bhi pershan na hoo…shukar hia na ab thik hai sab

Mayank: ji.. ami tia jaan ko maat kahan… khama mein is ko daar pook hony per suna day gi..halaky yeah daar un k hi diya hua hai….

Donot tell tai jan she will accuse her of being a coward ..though this is all because of her…

Shilpa: pata nhi bhabi kyun asa kerti hain..

Mayank: mjhy tu shak hota hai ..unki beti ha bhi k nhi..

Shilpa: asa nhi kahty beta… ap jay aram kerain… pershan maat ho woh thik hai… hum abhi un k pass hi rahy gay

Mayank: ji…

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Samrat: KYA… tum logo ny mjhy phone kyun nhi kiya woh thik hai nah..ya khuda

Gunjan: aram se Samrat sab thik hai.. woh bhi thik hai..mayank se baat hoi thi meri abhi kah raha tha k woh soo rahi hai…

Samrat was in office as asked by his parent to strt taking interest in the business.. there studies will be over within 2 months and Samrat knew not a single b of business.. mayank has always been helping his father in business and knew evrything very well… this was an area of concern for tai jan.. she didn't like they way Samrat was to dependent on him.. she didn't want that mayank take over all the responsibility of business heer and so she want Samrat to get in to it fully..

Samrat: shukar mayankk tha waha ..

Gunjan: Samrat… tumhain nhi lagta mayank nupur ki buhat fikar kerta hai

Samrat: han mjhy pata hai.. woh us ki buha fikar kerta hai.. bulky hum sab se zyada ..jitna woh us k kayal rekhta hai hum bhi nhi rekh patay

Gunjan: tu kya yeah sirf fikar hi hai… kuch aur nhi

Samrat: tum kahna kya chahti hoo

Gunjan: kahin mayank nupur se pyar

He laughed out loud..

Samarat: nhi asa harghiz nhi hai

Gunjan: tum itny yaqeen k sath kasay kah sakty hoo..tum ny dekha nhi aj … jasy nupur behosh thi.. jitna waqt guzar raha tha..us ki jaan nikalti ja rahi thi

Samrat: ek wqat tha jab mjhy bhi yeah dekh ker asa hi kuch laaga tha.. per mein ny sab try kerliya .. asa kuch bhi proof nhi hoa

Gunja: kya azama liya tum ny..

Samrat: us ko jalaya woh nhi jala… nupur ki fikar tu woh hamesha kerta hai… aur bhi buhat tareeko se maloom kerny ki khosih ki per no

Gunjan: tum bhi na.. zaroori nhi hai k hum kisi ki traaf insecure hoon jab hi pyar kertay hoon… woh us per itna atebar kerta hai k is sab baato se us ko khabi farq nhi paray ga…

Samrat: gunjan tum kahama kha rai k pahar bana rahi..( why are u making it to big)

Gunjan: woh tu waqt hi batay ga… mein rai k pehar bana rahi hoon.. ya tum ko undekha nhi dekh raha..

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Originally posted by: -Anila-

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haye haye issiliye i was waiting for too long n upar se ap toh always 1 ress kiya karti thi na iss ff par...

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mein likha the note in the res
its okay jani