MN.NEW..PARICHEY...CHP24 LTH#2 at Index Pg 1 - Page 22

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update...

loved d Past...

Beautifully written...

dis present is sooo...arhhh

i mean ok sometimes i think ke yeh Mayank hi hain jjisse Nupur ki shadi huyi hain den lagta hain ki nhi...

bt den again jesa ki aj Gunjan ki baaton se laga ke han its Mayank jisse Nupur ki shadi huyi hain n of course uski wajah Tai Jan hi hongi...

bt again lagta hain kya pata...arhhh

i dont know...m srsly!! worried wid der Present...


relax dear... i know its kinda obvious for u to know all.but it isnt cuming so early in this ff... till 15 chpat it isnt cuming...us k baad bhi nhi...Ardhngini yaad hia us mein 24 chapter mein reality aai thi... so u have to wait... and as i use to say there too,...enjoy the past...
tai jaan ny shadi keraii...ah haaa..itna acha kam bhi kerasakti hai woh...hmmm

der past is sooo damn fun...

i jst loved it...

loved it to d coreee...

d way Mayank took care of her is jst too Adorable...

n jaise Nupur always knew ke wht she want Mayank will get her dat for sure...like her likings n all...

n wen Mayank said tumko pata hain na done!! i was like he loves her...

i know dey both do...of course..

thanks for liking it dear... aahmm mayank n nupur are in Love... really..there just good frnds.. n even if they love each other is more of frnds wala than anything else..

bt den why is der present is like dis...

yeh Talaq n iddat...

as aj akhri din hain n aj hi Mayank ki wapsi Gunjan ka kehna ke ab bht der ho gayi hain...n all

it sooo seemed like Mayank se hi huyi hain shadi den yeh talaq kyun!!

n agar Tai jan ki wajah se shadi huyi hain toh akhir yeh shadi tooti kyun!! n agar nhi huyi den yeh iddat n all...m jst all meesed up...

lo phior wahi chali gai.lolz... thnks dear.. for thinking so much n i m loving that fact it makes me feel u all r living it just rather reading it...

bt srsly!! m loving dis fact too much dat m all caught up wid dis ff...By God!!

dis feels gr8!!

bt d way Mayank had made his situation was looking sooo terrible,...

pata nhi kya hoga jab woh Hospitala ayega...

can i hope ke iddat wali baat next part mein clear ho jayega...

n plzzz kuch toh accha dikhao Present mein bhi...

dekho gi presnt mein acha ..maagr abhi zayda con kyun k past per hai ek leevl per stroy chali jay than present per conc kero gi

Nupur ko thik karo n yeh jo kaha hain ke abhi agar woh uthi bhi den sab hokar bhi uska kuch nhi hoga...dis line is really making me upset...

kash ke sab thik ho jaye..

n ya abt d title i know its somewhere related wid d story...so kya Nupur sab kuch bhul jayegi like Mayank from Ardhangini though mujhe asa lagta nhi as Mayank jiss haal mein hoon usse Nupur se juri batein acche se yaad thi...sigh!!!

oye ardhangni mei mayank kuch nhi bhola tha... he lost his stregthen yet us ko sab yaad tha... nupur tu bulkil...

really want to read asap!!😳😆

loved it lodsss...

loved Mayank here...

he is d best!!!!!! his double meaning lines were too much fun...🤣

bt jab Gunjan asked him abt Nupur's marriage...

i was wishing to see something different in Mayank jo dikha nhi as he hided it...

loved it to d coreee

love u API...🤗🤗🤗

thnks alot dear...
glad ur enjoying it so much
will update pretty soon

Originally posted by: Maria.

you have ended it at very crucial point..

asusual past was beautiful but cant say anything about Present

really waiting to see Mayank reaction at Nupur condition

continue soon

i know...
but if u are waitng for mayanks reaction tht will cum in chapter 8 ...
thnks for liking it
glad ur enjoying it

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

its just a cliuff hanger situation...
very very nice part Fiza :)
OMG the past is soo good...i am just hating the present...i am just clueless what will happen next

thnks alot dear
n i am loving the fact ur clueless 😆... i hate to be predictable 😕...
glad ur enjoying it
will update soon

Originally posted by: .Divya.

nice update Fiza 😊

thnku

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Beautiful part dii...
The past ws so colorful nd full of life n laughter...aaj dekhu toh kisiko jeene ke bhi khwaish nahi hai...
Its really painful to see mayank in this lifeless condition...aur kya hoga jab usse nupur ka haal pata chalega..aur vaise nupur ko yeh sab hua bhi kaise...jaane ke lie main bekarar hoon...
And the way they fight nd tease im wondering how they'll fall in love with each other...ques of the century...lol
Loved this part dii...aab bohut sare ques hai...plz jaldi jaldi reveal kare..
Cont soon..

thnks alot dear

sigh i know there is such huge difference in boht..but they colours will meet sumhere so dont worry
mayank's reaction in chapter 8
lol... wasy ap pass ki baat hai mein bhi aj kal yeahi soch rahi hoon...how to make them faal in love.. its a task... 7 ffs n so many ways to make them in love..now im sounding out of stock 😆..sochty hain kuch
thanks alot dear...
reveal kero...thora muskil hai.. pls abhi past enjoy kero... plish...
will cont soon

Originally posted by: gopi06

awesome updt fiza
past was cute...present is tense...con't wait to read more
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thnks alot dear
glad u liked it
i will update ASAP

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

past is full of masti but present bohut hi zaada confusing hai😕

thnks alot dear...
i know ...i hope to clear it soon

Originally posted by: kirti123

loving their past

nice part

😊

thnks alot

Originally posted by: shobhakaimal

Great going. Update soon

thnku so much

Originally posted by: shafyyy

great part

thnks

Originally posted by: Sweety.Arjun

Nice update...

thnks

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

awesomest part di...

loved it...

the past was toh mind boggling..

wo shadi ke baad kya hoga...toh mayank answer jo sabke saath hota hai..wo line was toh HAHAHA...

loved it

loving the past...

bt yeh present ka kya????

agar mayank n nupur ki shadi hui hai toh ..n divorce ho bhi gya hai toh... ab toh iddat ka time bhi nikal gya..ab kya hoga...

waise mujhe kbhi kbhi lagta haai ki jaise ardhangini mein nupur ne mayank ko nhi btaya tha na ki she is his wife..

may be shayad yahhan bhi mayank n nupur ka divorce na hua ho...wo sirf tai jaan ke liye 1 drama ho...

pta nhi

bt jan na hai..n jaldi plsss

do cont soon

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

thnak alot dear...
lol..glad u enjoyed it..

ahmm tht is not the case actually... lets see..abhi donot get into tht..i know u all are so so so curious ot know..yet right now enjoy there journy towards each other...
revealing will cum a bit delay..

will cont soon

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--

nice part..

thnku

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

uff ab sabar nahin ho rha kya hova hain??????????

lol...sabar kero...sabar k phal mihta hota hai...

Originally posted by: drmaha

my god fiza it was amazing, lovely part.. wht bonding they four have developed.. loved it but m scared aisa kia hua hai k nupur hospitalized hai and they both gonna meet now or face eachother...

pls solve this mystery asap...

cant wait more...

thnks alot dear...
yup they have great bond...
that will cum later in the story..so dont worry abt that...
will cont soon
thnks for ur comments

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Kya di u too started ending at cliffhanger...beautiful past and tragic present...they were such a mastikhor group..I am scared about Mayank's reaction now...as u described he'd completely changed now...kahin kuch bura na ho jaye...I am really waiting for next part..how he'd reach seeing nupur like this.continue soon.

lo...kya kero cliffhanger per nhi hoga tu next update k intezar hoga...lol... but mayank's reaction is in 8th chapter...
hmm they were so differnt..
hmm mayank reaction needs to cum... he has to react and will change... is se zayda bora kya hoga... tht he will find her lifeless.. so us k reaction aay ga...

will cont soon

Originally posted by: Irum.

Loved their past .Their past was very beautiful.Bt I m little confused about present.What is the relation between Nupur's idaat and Mayank?I mean y did Gunjan said" ab tu dair hogi hai smarat'buhat dair hogai'. iddat k waqt kahtam hogaya aj"

Mayank has changed alot.He is not that lively person any more.

Waiting eagerly for next update.

Thnx for pm

😊

thnks alot dear...
glad u enjoyed the past...
i know preset is confusing.. as its very cloudy all i can say u have to wait to have a clear picture of all

will cont soon
thnks fro the comments