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heyy awsm FF yar new one with new cncpt awsm jst Lvd the updates

Originally posted by: Maria.

Nice update but Now you should add present part bit more,its seems story has stopped at one point..Niether past is clear nor present..After 6 parts we nothing know about Mayur story except this they were good buddies..Please change the pace little bit... continue soon

thnks dear..

unfortunately this story is based in past..so u have to bear it...u cnat feel the present if u donot know the past... present as i said earlier many time.. will only be in clips here.. will increase at certain point mayb completely not present at sum updates...
i think in past its nothing to get confused of... its going quite simple.. i will try to change the pace by giving quick updtes... but this have to go like this... cant jump to the lovestroy just like tht..
but i will try
thnks for ur suggestion 😊

Originally posted by: gopi06

amazing updt fiza
loved mayur teasing samrat
waiting to know mayank's reaction seeing nupur at that state
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thnks dear
pakka in next part.. u will see his n nupur face of..loll
will cont ASAP.. maybe around weekend...any one of u can remind me tht

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

nice update fiza

thnks alot dear

Originally posted by: Sweety.Arjun

Lovely part...

thnku

Originally posted by: shafyyy

very lovely part...

thnku

Originally posted by: Mini4

Nice update👍🏼.past n present perfectly written...the chatth wala kissa was quite nicely written..

it was funny d way mayank asks nupur to talk to his mother n when she asks him to do it himself he says nhi.. hum kerain gay tu woh humari bhi kerday gi😉

waiting to see how mayank vil react seeing nupur in her current situation!!!😔

thanx fr d pm.

continue soon.

thnks alot dear...
glad u feel it is in balance...
lol...u enjoyed it thts great
u will for sure see it in next update...

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

loved it ...

m curious to know abt present more .
but actualy dont like relation n mrg between cousins .i find it very weired .
kash mayur coysin na hote to mujhe aur bhi maza ata.

thnks alot...
i know u all are..it will be reveal pretty slowly tht i can say all
i know even i dont like it..n actually donot happen in our families... yet i want them to stay under same roof... and plus in future there will be sumthings for tht they need to be cousin..
yeah bhool ker story sojao... samjho mayank guest hai us k ghar per..lol...

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

OMG i could so well imagine Mayank's condition when he came to the hospital...

all ur updates are so well balanced between past and present...

please update soon

thnks alot dear...
i m so glad u can feel his pain..thnks alot..
will cont soon

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

ufff phir aapne itne interesting moore pe chor diya..

pta hai main kitni curious huin jan ne ke liye..

hayee

well wonderful update...

n ab main kuch nhi puchungi..kyunki i just wanna knw throgh the story everything...

do update soon

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

lol..thnks dear...nice to see u feel they are balanced..
thnks jani...sweet of u... as story goes on u will get to know everything...
will update soon

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--

nice update

thnks

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

ufff sach mein sabar ka baan tootne wala hain hmara...bht excited ho mein

loveddd it bht umda

thnks alot

i know..sabar ko pakar k rekho ..pls..warna bht muskil hojay gi
shukriya apki izaat afzai ka

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Nice update...

thnks

Originally posted by: kirti123

nice part

their past is lovely

😊

thnks alot dear

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

nice update

thnks

Originally posted by: -Gunners-

Nice update

thnks

Originally posted by: vinan2050

heyy awsm FF yar new one with new cncpt awsm jst Lvd the updates

thansk alot dear.. so ur back...

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

nyc update fiza!😊

thnks alot dear

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

beautiful update. continue soon

thanku so much

Amazing part dii...
But u know wat main mayur ke present se itni pareshaan hoon ki past mein dhyan hi nahi de pa rahi hoon...feeling extreme restlessness...dnt know wat will happen when he'll watch her in this condition...
Cant wait fr nxt part...
Cont soon dii...