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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

Vey Very nice part Radhika

loved it thoroughly
you written very well
I loved ur writting
nicely dscribed about temple n carnivals .
Dhram n sia met n hiarious thing was Veer nose which emerged in that 😆
Best part of the update . Veer n ananya meeting
...haayeee kya meeting thi kitni Romantic 😳 😳 😳
~~~~Day Dreaming ~~~~😍
n veer's praises about her Beuty .ohhh It seems Veer fall on her one sided 😛
They both looked at each other and as their eyes met with each other,the world around them has stopped,it seems like the world around them doesn't matter or it doesn't even exist,😆 It doesn't even exists
n ur discription abt her Beuty is so apt .
her shining blue eyes , delicate skin , her hairs which is more velvety than velvate ,, her angelic touch , smell
her smell was so mesmerizing that it can creat an havoc of desire in anyone in just a second, ⭐️her beauty was so unmatachable,so pure that one can spent his entire life just gazing at her and then veer's gaze moved towards her lips which are hidden behind the black netted scarf,☺️
kya kyamention karu ...soch me pad gayi ...🤔
I loved it so much
update soon
love u ⭐️


dear thanx for this lovely comment...that was really appreciating...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

wooowww..

simply marvelous..

wat an awsum start..

just loved it..

cont. soon..

thxn for the pm...


thanx anu...luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
CHARACTER SKETCH


THE ROYALS (KSHATRIYAS):-



Dharamsen Vardhan:- would be crown prince of aryanagar.Very dashing,handsome,calm,patient,responsible,brave,mature,obedient all in all a perfect gentlemen.Always gives more priority to his mind over his heart.Loves his brother a lot and always support him in his every prank and stood with him as a pillar whenever he was caught red handed.



Veersen Vardhan:- dashing,extremely handsome,cute,adorable,naughty,the biggest prank player,short-tempered,brave,stubborn and responsible equally to his elder brother.Always gives more priority to his heart over his mind.If the cause was right then he can fight with anyone even with the ministery or the assembly of the palace.Loves his brother a lot and do pranks on every one without any hesitation even with the king.



Agrasen Vardhan (agni) :- handsome,dashing but cruel at any extent,always jealous with two brothers but doesn't show it to anyone like his father and do all misdeed in the shadow of kings rule.Try every possible way to separate the two brothers.



Aryasen Vardhan:- the king of the aryanagar.A bit orthodox,always stick to the rules and regulations.Gives more importance to his culture and traditions over one's feelings.Trust his elder brother jaivardhan blindly and totally depend upon him to take his own decision.



Maharani Padmini:- a perfectly homely lady,keep distance from the palace politics.A very soft hearted,loving and caring mother,started to cry on every little things.



Jaisen Vardhan:- evil,cruel,jealous with his younger brother and wants to kill his whole family and always try to ruin his respect and did all wrong work taking king's name.



Maharani Kaushalya:- jaivardhan's wife very sweet and nice lady,unaware of his husbands misdeeds,respects his husband a lot and support his every decision without knowing his real intentions.



Maharani Nivrati:- a widow,lost her husband and kingdom in a war and presently living with her brother's in aryanagar,very loving and caring mother,always feared for her son veer's reality and try every possible way to protect him.



Kanhiya Singh Chauhan:- Prince of kaling,friend of dharamveer,a very cute,innocent,handsome and confused rajkumar.Brave but sometimes behaves like a child.



Rajkumari Saadagi (Sia):- Princess of magadh,mature,calm,talented,patient,understandable.Respect everyone's decision and elders.Waiting for her dream man to come in her life.



Rajkumari Korvaki (Kaveri):- Princess of ujjain,sweet,intelligent,beautiful,short-tempered,stubborn.Very close friend of rajkumari sia and over protective towards her,can do anything for her happiness.



Rajkumari Yashodhara:- Princess of sumaina,very simple,sweet,fearfull,confused.Close friend of rajkumari sia and kaveri.



Maharaj Chandrabhaan:- king of magadh,sia's father,a very cheerful and happy person,tries to make everyone smile even in the worst condition.



Maharani Vidhushala:- sia's mother,very strict from outside but that much time softer from inside,always worried for her daughters future.


THE TRIBAL BASTI (SHRAMIKS OR SHUDRAS):-

(veer's original family)



Somnath:- shramik leader and krantikari who raised his voice against the injustice and discrimination system but mercilessly killed by jaivardhan's guard.



Bhimsen:- shramik leader and karantikari supported somnath and got arrested and now spending his life in the jail of aryanagar.



Pari:- soma's wife,kept quite just to save her child's life and always keeps a distance with him and try every possible way so that his truth would not get revealed.

(well i know she is too young to be veer's mother but guys prithvi k opposite kisi aur ko rakhne ka mann nahi hua...u guys have to imagine her a little bit old than her age...😳)



Sakshi:- beautiful,hardworker,short-tempered,again trying to give life to the voice which her father has raised years ago.



Kranti:- sakshi's friend,secretly loves her but didn't confessed.Helping sakshi in her mission.


THE MIDDLE CLASS FAMILY (VAISHYAS):-


Well thay are one of the most respected and famous merchant of Daulatpur,known as the god of lower cast people.They are generally not daicots but they fight against injustice and can go to any extent to help anyone but didn't show it to anyone and that was the reason the richer one think them as daicots and spreaded the rumour against them of being daicots who can do anything for money.

Jaimal Thakur:- one of the famous merchant of daulatpur ,brave,hardworker,smart,intelligent,respectful,loves his family a lot,always worried for his sister's daughter and about her future.



Arjun Thakur:- very brave,handsome,smart,intelligent,hardworker,patient,mature and a very loving and protective brother.



Maya Thakur:- very cheerful,bubbly,beautiful,confused,soft heartend girl,loves arjun a lot.



Shera(ananya) Thakur:- brave,extremely beautiful,very calm,patient,mature,clever,smart,intelligent,stubborn,soft heartened but doesn't show it to anyone,master in every work whether related to the outside world or homely work.



Daimaa (neelanjana):- more bubbly than her age,funny,best prank player and lovingly call ''sahiba'' to shera.



Mohan:- an orphan,son of jaimal's friend,respect him a lot and lives with him,always wanted to be like shera and always be with her as her shadow.A pure bharamchari.



Meera:- daimaa's grand daughter,loves mohan a lot,wants to marry him and always try to break his brahmcharya and tease him everytime by getting close to him.


THE BRAHAMAN'S:-


Sanjaya :- one of the most trusted guard of palace,very close to senapati and respect him as his own father,loves sakshi a lot.


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HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT

LUV RADHIKA...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Wowww AWESOME CS DEAR:-):-) SUPERB:-) Waiting 4 the next part:-):-) LOVED IT:-) Continue SOON:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
not liked it
bt loved it vry much
dv ki yaad aa gyi

bt isme to bhot saare characters h padhne me maza aayega

cs padke hi excitement ho rhi h mujhe
to thodg jaldi ud dena ok

superb cs
n mindblowing writer do cont soon

luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
resed..wil edit soon

~~EDITED~~
ekdum feeling aa gyi ,
historic, nostalgic abt dv,
di mahaul bana diya h,
ab jaldi se stry shror kardo,

rayal main bhoot variety n and shramiks main bhi..
but best are merchants..

mohan is is wid shera like her shadow...shukar h brahmachari h ..
bechari meera...kya hoga inki lov stry ka..😭


mere liye tho yeh, veer n shera k baad nextimp. lov stry hogi 😳
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
superb👏
loved the cs

nicely written

u divide the characters acc 2 there social background😊
Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Wao
nic ji nic
maza ayega
jaldi ud de do
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
RAdika
thanx for character sketch .DV ki yaad aa gayi
n isme bahot sare new characters bhi hai
update soon sweety
waiting
love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Loved It !! Continue Soon !!

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