Once Upon A Time...RT-MC FF - Page 9

that was really interesting..

nice CS...

cont. soon...

thnx for the pm...

First of all, I'm really really sorry di for my very late reply 😭

So I finally read it and it was great!! 😃

I loved the starting few lines that you wrote before the banner as a preview to the story

And the prologue/intro was beautifully written. Made up for a very interesting read!

I like the name of the 1^st part...very apt

Love the bond between Dharamveer😳

Loved how Dharam agreed to all of veer's demand 'coz he knew it was no use arguing with him...😆

So Dharam Sia meet and he is a total goner😉

The part were Veer is running and then he realizes that his bro is still lost in dreamland was really funny!! 😆

And after reaching forest they start blame game...hilarious!!😆

So veer plays flute...just like Krishna kanhaiya😉

So veer-ananya dashed and played rolling rolling game😉😆

Di...your description of Ananya's beauty was totally amazing👏

Love the fact you gave her blue eyes..

Well first mulakat pe fight toh hona hi tha...but I lovd the staring session😳

The part where Dharam faces identity crisis was sooo funny!!😆

And your immaculate calculation of ages and character sketches of so many characters shows that you have given a lot of thought into this FF 👍🏼

Loved the character sketches⭐️

So both Kranti and Sanjaya love Sakshi

But I didn't understand who actually Maya is. How is she related to the Thakur family?

I loved Meera-Mohan characters...naam bhi aapne achhe choose kiye hain

Also liked Daimaa's char….

Thx for starting this FF😊

Keep up the good work

Waiting for the next update😃

And again sorry for the late comment

Lov u...🤗

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

Wowww AWESOME CS DEAR:-):-) SUPERB:-) Waiting 4 the next part:-):-) LOVED IT:-) Continue SOON:-)

Originally posted by: tejjo

not liked it
bt loved it vry much
dv ki yaad aa gyi

bt isme to bhot saare characters h padhne me maza aayega

cs padke hi excitement ho rhi h mujhe
to thodg jaldi ud dena ok

superb cs
n mindblowing writer do cont soon

luv u

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

resed..wil edit soon

~~EDITED~~

ekdum feeling aa gyi ,

historic, nostalgic abt dv,

di mahaul bana diya h,

ab jaldi se stry shror kardo,

rayal main bhoot variety n and shramiks main bhi..

but best are merchants..

mohan is is wid shera like her shadow...shukar h brahmachari h ..

bechari meera...kya hoga inki lov stry ka..😭

mere liye tho yeh, veer n shera k baad nextimp. lov stry hogi 😳

Originally posted by: pranita1202

superb👏

loved the cs

nicely written

u divide the characters acc 2 there social background😊

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

Wao
nic ji nic
maza ayega
jaldi ud de do