Once Upon A Time...RT-MC FF

ridzzi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#1
hey everyone...first of all thanx to you all for so much appreciation on my os...thanx to every single person who commented or press like button for it...😊

so now i am writting a new story on rt-mc...an ff...many of you is writting many stories on rt-mc...but on morden style(accept arunita di)...so i thought to write something on the era from which we get to know our prince and princess...i don't know how will it come out...but i will try my every bit to make it worth...hope you all like my work...😊




INDEX:-






part 2:-74528410

part 3:- 77644869

===================================


my another work...






murat fantacies by radhika: - Murat Fantacies By Radhika (short stories)... <3

Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

161

Views

14.9k

Users

28

Likes

173

Frequent Posters

ridzzi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#2

Sometimes we didn't knew what is written for us by the destiny and when,where,how and with whom we met?,What secrets are kept behind our birth?,what is the purpose of our lives?,The thing which we only knew is that we are the only mere puppets dancing on the finger tip of the destiny.

This story is of two brothers-about their journey,their relationship,the circumstances they faces and how their life took turn when they both fell in love.



This story is set hundred of years ago,around 13th century,when the people were discriminated on the basis of their livelihood.Their status are set according to their wealth and their capacity to earn their lives.Aryanagar is one of the kingdom like that,where people are divided into groups,one is aryavarat's-the king,queen and the prince,princess basically the royals and the other one is sharamiks-they work only for royals like building sculpture for royals,making things to decorate the palace etc,but generally they are not workers but the powerful or I can say the cruel one forced them to be workers by using their royality power.


Jaivardhan,the minister of aryanagar and one of the most cruel person of that time,always jealous with his younger brother aryavardhan because the ministry of aryanagar palace has choosen aryavardhan as a king instead of him and that makes him feels insulted infront of whole assembly and this is the reason he always keep a hatered towards his younger brother in his heart but never showed it to anyone,not even his wife and does all the wrong deeds in the shadow of aryavardhan by taking his name like increasing unnecessary tax on the common people,forcefully making sharamiks their slaves,treating them like animals etc but he does these things in that way so that the news of his wrong deeds could not reach to the ministry or to the king.The wife of aryavardhan and jaivardhan maharni padmavati and maharani kaushalya were almost 9 months pregnant.

====================================

One day aryavardhan got the news,that his sister's husband the king of udaypur maharaj digvijay has been died in a battle and his whole empror has been destroyed by his enemies and now his sister needs his help.So king arayavardhan brought his sister maharani nivrati to the palace,who was 9 months pregnant.After seeing her condition and knowing everything about her,he decided that she would live with them as there is no place left for her after his husband's death,not even her empror.

==========================================

One day the priest of royal family foretold about the birth of a sharmik child who will be the reason for the distruction of the empror of aryanagar and the end of aryavarats rule over the kingdom,which gave a big shock to all the people present their but the king aryavardhan managed the situation by saying that it will be seen when the actual times comes but deep inside in his heart is feared about whatever their priest has foretold.


On the other hand,somnath(soma) and bhimsen,lives in shramik tribe with their wife's pari who was also 9 months pregnant and gauri who was eight n the half month's preganat.They both are the sharmiks leaders and the karantikari's who raised their voice against the discrimination system and injustice.They were encouraging their sharmik brothers too to raise their voices and secretly making their army to attack on the aryavarat's.But to their bad luck one of the sharmiks who was very loyal to jaivardhan informed him about soma's and bhimsen's planning to attack on aryavarat's.This made him got in fear,because he knew if any one of the sharmiks got arrested alive then his all wrong deeds will got open infront of the king which is not good for him,so he ordered his guards to kill all the sharmiks karantikaries along with their family and that too in mid night but after the birth of royals,on the day of their arrival,so that no one will able to get the actual reason behind it,because everyone will be busy in their newly born happiness.


Soma and bhimsen,both were sitting in soma's house with their wife's and soma's 4 year old daughter when a royal guard who was one of them came and informed them about jaivardhan's order.Without thinking for a second they both decided that they will send gauri to her brother's house and pari will be with them as her time of delivery is very near and it's not good for her and for the baby to travel in this condition,and next morning they send gauri to her brother's house with one of their shramik brother.

====================================

Two days later,queen padmavati gave birth to a baby boy and on same day queen kaushalya too gave birth to a baby boy just after 1 hour later of padmavati and just next day queen nivrati gave birth to a baby boy but to her bad luck the baby was dead.This made nivrati got totally broken but on insisting her one of maids chanda,the queen controlled herself and decided to give the baby to river ganga without getting anyone knew about it,not even her brother's.


On the other hand pari too gave birth to a baby boy,all the sharmiks got happy because they knew about the words of royal family priest about the god or the messihah of shramiks,but their happiness doesn't lasted for long as jaivardhan's guards attacked their tribe on the same day in mid night.Bhimsen and soma put their full efforts to fight with the royal guards but all went in vein but they are still tried to rescue their family.Pari was watching all this from her house window as her condition was not so good,soon she understood that this was their end.Somehow soma managed to reach to pari and asked her to leave as soon as possible but pari was not ready to leave without hm.Soma makes her understood that it's not about him and her,it's about their children,for their sake she has to leave without him,finally pari agreed and escaped from her 4 year old daughter and one day born baby hiding from the eyes of jaivardhans guard.


Soma was killed by the guards of jaivardhan merciessly and after his death,the guards cut his body in many pieces and throw them in several direction of the kingdom and bhimsen got arrested.Pari was running with their children,but it was becoming difficult for her because of her health,she has just given birth to a baby and instead of resting,she is running to save their childrens life.Soon they reached to a temple,she moved towards steps and looked behind,a little far,jaivardhan's guards were still following her.She hurridly climed up all the stairs and after reaching to the threashold,she took a glance to her son,who was sleeping.She hurridly kept her baby in a basket near the threshold and covered it with flowers and then holding her daughters hand she moved inside the temple and hide themselves behind the statchue of god.Jaivardhan's guard reached the temple,they searched all over the temple but didn't enter inside and after a while thinking that they had mislead their path,they moved to the other direction to search for them.


On the other hand,in the other direction of temple queen nivrati was sitting on the stairs beside river ganga all numb after loosing her child,when she heard the voice of a baby crying,her eyes suddenly glitter with happiness,she hurridly stood up and moved towards the river where she has drawened her baby in a hope,but soon she realise that the voice is coming from the other direction of the temple,she moved in the same direction of voice wiping her tears,she scaned all over but didn't found anything but the voice was still coming,soon she recognized and moved towards the basket,removed the flowers and saw a little one day boy crying.Her eyes got teary and heart filled with happiness,she took him in her arms,looked at his innocent face and then looked at the temple and thought that it was a gift given by the god to her and decided to brought him up as his own child,her maids warned her that he is a shramik child and if anyone get to know about it then it will be very disastrous but queen nivrati didn't listen to anyone,she thanked the god and returned to palace.Far away pari was seeing all this and decided to keep quit as it was the only way to keep her son alive.

================================

After some 15 days,their was a grand pooja in the palace for the naming of all the three prince.The priest of the family suggested the name agnisen vardhan for jaivardhan's son and then he declared about aryavardhan's son and nivrati's son,that they will not only be brothers but they will be more than that,they will be two bodies but one soul.Therefore,their names should a type which can be taken in one breath,together.Hence,their names were decided as dharamsen vardhan for aryavardhan's son and veersen vardhan for nivrati's son,but it will be taken together as dharamveer.


On the other hand,bhimsen's wife gauri started have labour pain,her brother got the news and summoned their daimaa and after sometime gauri gave birth to a baby girl but her condition became worse because of all the tension she suffered in last 15 days and after listening her husband's death.As she has very less time,she called her brother and asked him to look after her daughter and save her from jaivardhan's guard because if anyone get to know that she is bhimsen's daughter than they will surley try to kill her.Her brother promised her that he will look after her and brought her up as his own child and treat her equally to his son arjun and after that gauri died.Jaimal(gauri's brother) performed all her last rituals and looked at the baby in his hand,his 5 year old son asked about her name to which daimaa replied that her name will be ananya-the unmatchable girl and jaimal smiled and announced that her name will be ananya but her identity will be revealed as shera and by raising her up he declared that she will be next sardar of their tribe.


Days started passing and all three brothers started to grow up holding each other hands but generally not agni,he always keep a little distance from his other two brothers.After sometime all the three prince were sent to the gurukul for higher studies while on the other hand shera was brought up as a boy,jaimal taught her all the techniques and arts taught to a royal one in hot and blazing sun,without any convienice.

============================================


HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT...

PLZ DO GIVE YOUR REVIEWS...WETHER I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT...

LOT'S OF LUV...

RADHIKA...😊




Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago
pranita1202 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#3


me first me first me first




why everyone is preggers yaar🤣 🤣

i soo knew aunty who was 8 n half wil give birth to gal just wasn't sure she will D'S FUTURE GF
OR VEER'S GF

i guess we think alike yesterday i was writing for the ff i too mention ananya as the unique one

=====================================================
Firstly 4 starting this ff
=========================================================================


so now coming 2 the u


every wel written
ofcourse i don't need 2 tel u that u r OS track record tells everything

i loved the description

loved the scene wen nivi found veer

jayu n agni r 🤬😡

our princess anannya/ shera will lead the tribe . way 2 go gal

all prince r going 2 gurukul which in my eye is ancient version of college
hope gals hostel pass mein ho . i mean kalabhavan rajkumariyoin ka

wondering hows dharam's gal will b

eager to see veer, dharam n ananya shera ka tashan

mazza ayega
=========================================================================

finally
lots of

4 u
Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
sweetsanyo thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#4
res..pranita di congo.aap first ho..
ridzzi congo shongo to u too
~~EDITED~~

wowie dowie...
ridzzi di ka ff...yipiee, hip hip huraay...

pehle tho main haryanvi dholl pitwa loon, meri taraf se,

and soonali di aapke liye lavani dance karengi...unki taraf se

coz, humdono ka mission accomplish hoa h.
...
agar aapne yeh ff kudh hi likhna decide kiya h, widout getting dhakka mukki frm us,
still iska credit main hi longi ki aapne naya ff strt kiya, coz,
apko pata h na, mujhe aapna credit lena kitna acha lagta h...

okay, now...stry,

di, aapka desc. mujhe sachi main bhot apsand h...
dv ki yaad aa gyi, (compare nhi kr rhi, bas glimpse dekh rhi ho uski))

but di, shera ka character is so new, so prefect, i loved it...
shera will b so apt for veer dis way...she will help veer in his-MASIHAAH...character...

but di ek request h- aap issmain rtmc romance bhi acche se dekhana,
dv bro- romance ko thoda second priority..
coz, uss imagine wale dv pr bhi dv jyada aata h, rtmc badmain aata tha...

and, that masihaa, revolt, part bhi jyada dkhna...

its not dat, mujhe dharamveer jodi pasand nhi h, but voh thodi si boring h, poore imagine wale dv main hum wahi tho dekha tha...

stryggle tho dekha hi nhi...

shera n veer bhi unhone pripority niche rakhi thi.

i just loved the way u played wid ur characters,
like gauri, his bro, nini's husb, her daimaa...
evry thng so perfecto.

ud soon, lovely strt.

and, main iska ek banner banaa chati ho, but agar aapko 1st sovhne main 3 weeks lage, then mujhe bhi 3 weeks lagene banner k liye,??????/

tho kya main banao???????

ud soon, lov u di.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
prahelika thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
yay!!! another rt mc ff...
thank you so much ridz...😃...
starting is really nice...and after so many days we are again getting a ff on DV...makes me nostalgiac...
i'm really sorry for such a short comment this time...
but plz cont. this ff...😊
and i don't find it similar to samyukta...both stories have their own styles...specially the part where ananya was born...that was different...
plz update soon...
luv u...
Edited by prahelika - 13 years ago
sweetsanyo thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
di dont be sad, i wanna give a biggg...
comment
bt abhi padau karni h, kal subah tak big bigg comment wil be der..
til den sry ridzzi di. :'(
rasp_berry thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Nice start, it took me in d time DV. Plz continue soon nd do pm to me
ridzzi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

di dont be sad, i wanna give a biggg...

comment
bt abhi padau karni h, kal subah tak big bigg comment wil be der..
til den sry ridzzi di. :'(


don't be sry dear...studies are first...take your time...😊
Freethinker thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
no wonder that was brilliant sweetie...waiting for the next update...do continue...
Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
Priyart12 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Res
di jldi edit krungi pakka

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno

5 months ago

When is the right time???

Everything happens at the right time, but we can't always recognize that right time. Don't wait for the perfect moment, because the perfect...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Nush_Rat

1 years ago

A Tale As Old As Time

Author's Note Hello my dear readers! Back in 2020, right after Nazar had ended, I along with my dear friend Nikita wrote a short story on our...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Saumya96

2 years ago

SKR FF 6:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 107

Hello everyone ☺️ This is Saumya ❤️ I have completed the five long threads of my FF "Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story Following are the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".