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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

awesome updates!!
i din;t read lashy's but i like sweeetsumi's
love ur description style!!

Edited by shruja - 13 years ago

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Nice update DV ke din yaad aa gaye.

In sabko jaldi se bada kardo.

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

meri taraf se...🤗.. aapke liye...

rtmc tho ek dosare k liye kaafi h na...
so mera wala hug aapke liye..

ab aap meri leg pulling thodi kam kr donge na.😳

o meri taraf se bhi tujhe ek bada wala hug...🤗

n na re main teri leg pulling zarur karungi...maine pada tu aur glossy mil ke kya planning kar rahe the meri gallery main...sare di's se revenge...bachu...😆

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Its very nice update...send me in DV land...can imagine each n every scene of ur update...loved RTMC meeting.

and about age,OMG...that was so accurate description of age 😆,for me I enjoy story as it comes...never think much about ages😆

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Vey Very nice part Radhika

loved it thoroughly

you written very well

I loved ur writting

nicely dscribed about temple n carnivals .

Dhram n sia met n hiarious thing was Veer nose which emerged in that 😆

Best part of the update . Veer n ananya meeting

...haayeee kya meeting thi kitni Romantic 😳 😳 😳

~~~~Day Dreaming ~~~~😍

n veer's praises about her Beuty .ohhh It seems Veer fall on her one sided 😛

They both looked at each other and as their eyes met with each other,the world around them has stopped,it seems like the world around them doesn't matter or it doesn't even exist,😆 It doesn't even exists

n ur discription abt her Beuty is so apt .

her shining blue eyes , delicate skin , her hairs which is more velvety than velvate ,, her angelic touch , smell

her smell was so mesmerizing that it can creat an havoc of desire in anyone in just a second, ⭐️her beauty was so unmatachable,so pure that one can spent his entire life just gazing at her and then veer's gaze moved towards her lips which are hidden behind the black netted scarf,☺️

kya kyamention karu ...soch me pad gayi ...🤔

I loved it so much

update soon

love u ⭐️

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

wooowww..

simply marvelous..

wat an awsum start..

just loved it..

cont. soon..

thxn for the pm...

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
reso jii
now dis time, me first...

lalalalala

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ach acha laga...bhot acha laga..
sooperbo ekdum, sachhi, app ki stry jab main padti hoon,
beshak aapka desc. simple h, but ussmain ghoos jati ho main, stry ki world imagine karte karte lagta h, mvie dekh rhi hoon jaise,

ab iss baat main mujhe credit nhi lena, meri imagination acchi h, i noe, but... stry bhot jydaa achi h, isliye movie around me wala credit aapka :0

veer, sacha bhai h, mujhe psnd aaya,...
kya bindaas tareke se lada aapne bhai k liye,
dharam ws doing nothing oder den gawking at sia,
kya hoga isska...??
veer na hota, tho dharam tho pakka sia ki kaal khothari main hota, .. lol.

oops! baghte baghte jungle main pahuch gye,

but ek bhot famous kkahwat h-

JUNGAL MAIN MANGAL!!...

yipieee,,!!
ho gya jungal main mangal...
mil gyi humare veer n ananya,...
wow di, kya mulakaat h,
bechari veer ki niyat, at the age of 12 pr hi phisal gyi...

abhi abhi tho khud dharam ko bhashan de rha tha,

yeh dono kabhi nhi sudhrenge,
hr jagah pehle ladai kr lete h...

wowie, dowie...
humari anu ki payal mili h veer ko, veer sambhal kr akhna, bade hokr kaam aayegi...

ud soon, di, lovd d part.

lov u

movie feeling...awww...thank you so much rashmi...

luv u...😊

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: pranita1202
haven't read it yet but the blue font caught my eyes

itni age accuracy explaination🤣
1 day ; one hour ,15days😆

age issue rtmc ff mein hamesha aata
we writers should get a calculator and calculate every thing
before introducing leaps and flashbacks
hai meri ridzzi

ff likhana chodke pehle characters ka birth certificate bana pe concentrate karna padh raha hai🤪 🤣

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superb
very well descripted

send this SAGARS n tell them 2 make DV sequel. miss rtmc

love the way u described D N V 's nature

loved sia n dharam meeting

they got into trouble by veer's nosing😆

but jo hota hai acche ke liye hota hai verna hamari princess charming angel cum dacoit annaya se 1st meeting kaise hoti😊

loved dV CONVO IN Forest

aww veer flute bajajta hai

wow hamari annanya ki entry👏

"khiche mujhe koi dor teri aur" i thot of this wen anu was into veer's flute tune

yay annaya helped veer

after rolling session eye locking session

""""""AANKHON KI GUSRAKHIYA MAAF HO""""""😳

BUT nok jhok started

poor dharam in wondering why everyone is bothering him😆

aww pyar ki nishani. veer treasure it

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update soon eager 2 see there next meetin certainly after 6-7 yrs

dv ka sequel with this pari...kya bol rahe ho...

thanx for this lovely comment...luv u...😊

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
OMG WOWWW:-D:-D:-D What a BEAUTIFUL update dear:-D:-):-) The First Meeting was jus FANTASTIC;-);-) I LOVE VEER:-):-) and The Fight was so CUTE:-):-) Awww Veer is so Stubborn;-);-) and Dharam loves his younger brother a lot:-):-) I LOVE This FF so much:-):-)

ohhh...thanx for loving this ff rashi...

luv u...😊