Once Upon A Time...RT-MC FF - Page 2

Originally posted by: pranita1202

me first me first me first

why everyone is preggers yaar🤣 🤣

i soo knew aunty who was 8 n half wil give birth to gal just wasn't sure she will D'S FUTURE GF

OR VEER'S GF

i guess we think alike yesterday i was writing for the ff i too mention ananya as the unique one

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Firstly 4 starting this ff

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so now coming 2 the u

every wel written

ofcourse i don't need 2 tel u that u r OS track record tells everything

i loved the description

loved the scene wen nivi found veer

jayu n agni r 🤬😡

our princess anannya/ shera will lead the tribe . way 2 go gal

all prince r going 2 gurukul which i my eye is ancient version of college

hope gals hostel pass mein ho . i mean kalabhavan rajkumariyoin ka

wondering hows dharam's gal will b

eager to see veer, dharam n ananya shera ka tashan

mazza ayega

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finally

lots of

4 u

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

res..pranita di congo.aap first ho..

ridzzi congo shongo to u too

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wowie dowie...

ridzzi di ka ff...yipiee, hip hip huraay...

pehle tho main haryanvi dholl pitwa loon, meri taraf se,

and soonali di aapke liye lavani dance karengi...unki taraf se

coz, humdono ka mission accomplish hoa h.

...

agar aapne yeh ff kudh hi likhna decide kiya h, widout getting dhakka mukki frm us,

still iska credit main hi longi ki aapne naya ff strt kiya, coz,

apko pata h na, mujhe aapna credit lena kitna acha lagta h...

okay, now...stry,

di, aapka desc. mujhe sachi main bhot apsand h...

dv ki yaad aa gyi, (compare nhi kr rhi, bas glimpse dekh rhi ho uski))

but di, shera ka character is so new, so prefect, i loved it...

shera will b so apt for veer dis way...she will help veer in his-MASIHAAH...character...

but di ek request h- aap issmain rtmc romance bhi acche se dekhana,

dv bro- romance ko thoda second priority..

coz, uss imagine wale dv pr bhi dv jyada aata h, rtmc badmain aata tha...

and, that masihaa, revolt, part bhi jyada dkhna...

its not dat, mujhe dharamveer jodi pasand nhi h, but voh thodi si boring h, poore imagine wale dv main hum wahi tho dekha tha...

stryggle tho dekha hi nhi...

shera n veer bhi unhone pripority niche rakhi thi.

i just loved the way u played wid ur characters,

like gauri, his bro, nini's husb, her daimaa...

evry thng so perfecto.

ud soon, lovely strt.

and, main iska ek banner banaa chati ho, but agar aapko 1st sovhne main 3 weeks lage, then mujhe bhi 3 weeks lagene banner k liye,??????/

tho kya main banao???????

ud soon, lov u di.

Originally posted by: prahelika

yay!!! another rt mc ff...

thank you so much ridz...😃...

starting is really nice...and after so many days we are again getting a ff on DV...makes me nostalgiac...

i'm really sorry for such a short comment this time...

but plz cont. this ff...😊

and i don't find it similar to samyukta...both stories have their own styles...specially the part where ananya was born...that was different...

plz update soon...

luv u...