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Posted: 12 years ago

EPISODE 2:-THE ARRIVAL



guys before proceeding with this part do go through the cs first...here is the link for cs...

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ARYANAGAR (THE STREETS):-


As the huge and loud noise of big dhols and nagadas reached to the ears, almost whole aryanagar came out from their respective houses and gathered around the street path to have a glimpse of the arriving royals. Voices were not clear as in that huge crowd everyone was excitedly discussing about them, their voices were merging with each other and was coming out in form of murmur's as bees were humming in their nest.


In between the curious and excited crowd two pair of moist eyes were continuously trying to look ahead on the street path sometimes by standing on her feet or sometimes by peeping out from the crowd.


''sakshi'':- a manly strict voice came from behind making her aware that she is standing in midst of the crowd and her stupid antics to have a glimpse of that special person of her life for whom she has waited for long 18 years was making the crowd turn towards her with an amusing face. She passed them a hesitant smile and awkwardly turned to face the source of voice. Kranti was just standing few feats away from her with curiosity to know the reason behind her these antics and moreover for coming here which he knew very well but wanted to hear from her mouth.


Kranti was sakshi's childhood friend, a 25 year old boy with dusky complexion and well toned muscles and perfectly shaped body. Clocked in white khadi dhoti and mehroon knee length kurta exposing his chest with a yellow scarf and turban, he was looking not less than a gentleman.


''what are you doing here sakshi???????, you are suppose to be with pari chachi, she is not well":- he asked her getting a bit harshness in his voice knowing very well about her reason for coming here leaving her unwell mother at home and that too in early morning.


''I know that right know I have to be with maa but everyone was coming here to see the royals and savari (sakshi's one of friend) forced me so I just accompanied her'':- she tried her best to hide her real intentions and curiosity of coming here without informing anyone related to her, not even to her mother.


''oh really????????:- he asked raising his eyebrows and glaring at her fully annoyed and then he spoke up making her a little stunned:-''sakshi on one hand you say that you hate aryavarats and their laws, rules, regulations and on the other hand you came here to hoot in praise of those heartless, cruel aryavarats and don't blame savari for your acts":- kranti retorted brusting out his all anger for aryavrats on her. He hated aryavrats since he was just 7 years old, he had saw her mother begging infront of jaisen for the safety of her husband ramgir whom they had imprisoned without any valid reason, they blamed him that he had secretly supporting the revolutionaries against aryavrats. She begged but he didn't listen and while bashing her, he gave the orders to throw her and kranti out of the palace. After that she tried to meet king aryasen but she didn't succeed, the royal guards didn't allow her to enter in palace as per the instructions of jaisen. And then after three days they found ramgir's dead body near a lake fully drained in blood. After that everyone in shudra's said that aryavrats are heartless and cruel to any extent, they didn't did good to kranti's mother and moreover one day kranti over hears the conversation of some drunkard guards of palace that king jaisen had also asked her to sleep with him for a night and when she denied he threw her and his son out of the palace. This made kranti's blood boil with anger and hatred. And then he too joined revolutionaries in their mission against the aryavrats and then their only he met with sakshi and fallen in love with her at first fight.


''I am not blaming anyone and whatever I had said was true and is true and will be true, I hate them and always do'':- she completed in the same tone as his and after a brief pause she continued:-''and about coming here so I was just'''''..'''..'':-before she could snap him back or say anything her attention got distracted as the loud noise of crowd reached to her ears who were hooting for the arriving royals:-


''rajkumar dharam ki jai''

''rajkumar agrasen ki jai''

''rajkumar veer ki jai''


The name of the last prince made her heart jump with happiness and excitement. All her anger and disappointment vanished as the name of that special person struck to her ears, her eyes twinkled with tears of happiness. It's going to 18 year when she will see her brother, her little adorable brother who had been snatched away from her before he could open his eyes. Her mother and she had tried their best to see him when he was just 6 and was about to send to the gurukul but their all efforts went in vain but today she will see him though couldn't meet him but no worries he is going to be here forever now. Finally he is here, in midst of all of them.


Hurriedly turning back she stood on her feet taking the support of kranti's shoulder , only to find a prince ahead on brown horse and two on chariot. Soon the confusing wrinkles covered her forehead as who is her brother the one on horse or the one who is on chariot, the left one or the right one???????, everyone has an aura of being a royal but none has the resemblance of her father or not even of her mother but soon her confusing wrinkles of forehead turned into a beam of smile on her lips as she saw the fourth prince coming out from behind the chariot on white horse.


The prince on white horse must be her little brother exactly resembling as his father. Same big brown eyes, curly hairs till his neck, well toned muscles, healthy yet perfectly v shaped body and same killing smile like his father everything was same just as his father's accept his face cut, it exactly resembles her mother's, she smiled thinking that. Their he is, her little brother but soon she realized that her little brother is not little anymore, he had turned into a youth, a young youth who will be soon known as a man. Thinking all this her eyes got moist, how desperately she wanted to be with him, wanted to feel the love, care, protectiveness of a brother but she was forced to live without him. After having a brother she was compelled to assume that she was the alone child of her parents.


On one hand where she was just gazing at her brother and praising his personalities and outer looks without knowing that her hold on kranti's shoulder was making kranti's whole body topple around. He was least bothered about the royals and his surrounding's, he was just lost in the beauty beside him. But soon their attention got broke as the royals passed by the street and moved ahead and slowly the half crowd followed them and rest just dismissed themselves to their respective houses after all they have to attend the celebration in which all of them are going to introduce to the public of aryanagar.


Instantly realizing that he was gazing at her like an stupid he tore his gaze and turned his face on the other direction mentally chiding himself for gawking at her like that and on the other hand sakshi just realized that unknowingly tears made their ways out from her eyes, she hurriedly wiped them off and removing her hand from his shoulder she turned to face him only to find him facing other side.


She moved towards him and while waving her hand infront of his eyes she asked:-''what happened????''.


''nothing'':-he replied in low voice hiding his eyes from her, he was trying his best not to show his blush on his cheeks to her.


''ok then let's go maa must be waiting for us'':- saying so she held him by his arms and dragged him along with her with a new happiness and hope to see him again and soon to meet him also.


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THE PALACE OF ARYANAGAR:-


The news of the arrival of royal's reached at the palace and spreaded like a fire in forest. It had almost taken just the couple of minutes to reach the news to palace and before it could reach to the king, the palace maids and workers spreaded it like a rumour. And as the news reached to the royals, they became alarmed and all of them came out to attend their children's.


Queen kaushalya was standing just in middle of the door frame of the palace and queen padmini and nivrati was just beside her and then king aryasen and jaisen were accompanying them with broad smile on their lips. Happiness and restlessness was clearly visible on their faces. And soon the time has arrived and their wait ended.


All the four royals reached at the huge gate of the palace, slowly dharma and veer climbed down from their horses, agni and kanha also came down from their chariot and four stood their infront of the threshold of the palace with the mix emotions of happiness, proud, gladness and was a bit stunned and astonished after seeing their palace. Well they knew it very well that they are prince and they have high status with high authorities but this is something surprising for them. The palace was 50 times bigger than their small gurukul, for these 14 years they lived in a small room of that gurukul which was shared by almost 8 students but after seeing the palace from outside they can easily figure out that their one room will be equal to that one small whole gurukul. And the way commoners were standing around the streets to welcome them and to just have the glimpse of them had made them dumbfound, and now this palace, the path from the threshold of the palace directly lead to the door frame of the palace but before reaching their it got divided into three ways, first directly leading to the door frame and rest god divided into two which directly went into opposite directions, directly leads to two different beautiful gardens with every possible fragrance of flora. And the way whole palace was decorated with white-purple curtains, rangolis of different color and the garlands were making whole palace look like a newly wedded bride.


On one hand where Dharma was feeling a bit proud and happy on seeing everyone and on being back to his parents and state , veer was also feeling happy and proud but a little scared and stunned as he knew it very well that with every big status, big responsibilty too came as he got too many punishment's in gurukul but personal lessons also by his guru where as agni was standing with a bit attitude and arrogance while looking everywhere where as kanha was just standing expressionless as his belly was shouting on his full note and asking something to eat, he hadn't eaten anything from last two days apart from the fruits which he had secretly packed with his stuff before their journey. And with these thoughts all of them moved forward, towards their relatives.


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As the standing royals saw their kids coming close to them a huge smile played on their lips, the way they all were walking with an aura of royal attitude was clearly describing their royalty. 14 years ago they had send their 6 year old kids to the gurukul and now they had returned back to their home but with different aura's of being a young royal with responsibilities, soon they are going to handle the throne and the responsibility of whole kingdom will be on their shoulder.


Where jaisen was feeling all proud and was giving that his all time famous evil smile while looking at his son agrasen who was exactly resembling like him but he had a doubt that though he is exactly resembling like his, his intentions will be also like him, will he support him or will he support his brothers?????????????, where as nivrati was little stunned on veer's look, his features were not resembling any of being a shudra from any angle and on the other side araysen and others were just praising their children's attitude of being just like them, thinking all this they didn't realized when they reached to them and got down to touch their feets.


Alarmed by their sudden acts, all of them came to their sense and gave their proudly smile to them. And after that queen kaushalya did their arti one by one while doing tilak and splashing some of the flower petals on them and then dharma, veer and agrasen took everyone's blessing one by one when nivrati's eyes suddenly fall on the young boy with chubby cheeks and innocent face, standing just behind their children's and with curiosity she asked them:-''who is this cute boy?????????????''.


As she mentioned about him everyone's attention turned towards him and with a friendly smile dharma came forward and introduce his friend to everyone:-''well bua he is kanha, I mean kanahiya singh chauhan, prince of kaling kingdom'':- he completed while holding him from his shoulder and after a brief pause he told the reason behind his coming aryanagar with them:-''well pitaji actually the king and queen of kaling had went on the tour of kingdom and may be will not return soon so we just offered him to visit our kingdom and experience our hostility before returning to his own kingdom'':- he completed hoping that whatever he does will not dissatisfy his parents where as veer and agni both were also looking with same expression on their faces at their parents.


After a couple of minutes king aryasen and queen padimi step forward and padmini just kissed his forehead with motherly love where as aryasen welcomed him to his kingdom as a king does while presenting his hostility to the king of other kingdom while kanha just bent down and touched their feet feeling very delighted with the love he received from them and after that all of them moved inside leaving behind the curious workers and maids and moreover the young maids who were just flattered on the newly arrived prince's.


THE TRIBLE BASTI (SAKSHI'S HOUSE):-


As she entered in her house with her happiness and excitement, she saw her mother in bed still resting, she ran towards her and while sitting beside her she excitedly narrated all her experience of morning and briefly described about his little brother without even realizing that though her mother's eyes were little open but still she is not in her sense because of the heavy dose of medicines given by the vaid to her.


''right maa?'':-she excitedly asked while turning to face her mother but not receiving any response from her mother she moved a little close and smiled on her stupidity, she herself had given those medicines to her mother so that she can rest for long otherwise she was habitual of not sitting at one place.


She smiled and covered her with the comforter while waiting for the noon when king and their family will introduce all the prince to the commoner's, she is too attending that ceremony and will surely attend it whether kranti will accompany her or not but some where she was sure that if she will ask him, he will not denie.


ARYANAGR (THE PALACE HALL AREA):-


Everyone entered and decently showing their royalty they sat down on the chairs while veer and kanha just bump themselves taking out all their tiredness of journey and making themselves fully relax. They all were just making themselves comfortable when padmini spoke up breaking the silence between them:-''so how was your journey? you guys didn't have any problem in your journey na?''.


''no maa we didn't have any problem in our journey but we are feeling little bit tired now, we are continuously travelling from almost two days, so it's just we had a little pain in our shoulders and at back'':-he completed while others just agreed on his statement where as kanha too added his point of view to his statement:-''and we also hadn't eaten anything since two days, we just had our meals before leaving the gurukul":- his addiction to the statement made everyone worriedly look at their childrens.


''you guys doesn't have food for two days????????'':-king aryasen exclaimed in shock while jaisen spoke up in anger:-''that's why we have decided to sent the royal guards to bring you all back but you guys don't have to listen, you all just denied because you all''''''':-before he could scold them anymore nivrati interrupted after seeing down heads of their children's and realizing that may be they are not feeling good by scolded like that as they have just arrived:-''bhaiya please leave it, they have just arrived, you can scold them as much as you can but later, right now they need to take rest, as they have to attend the introduction ceremony today itself, it will be too much for them":-she completed while all the younger prince just raised their heads up listening the word ''INTRODUCTION CEREMONY''.


''what kind of ceremony bua ???????'':-agni asked and all of them looked towards nivrati but now it was padmini who answered:-''maharaj has set a ceremony to intoduce you all to the common public of our kingdom so that they will get to know about their will be rulers":- queen padmini completed and without wasting a second queen kaushalya informed:-''their will be a little pooja for your arrival in noon and after that the ceremony will start where deverji (aryasen)will introduce you all to the public":- she completed and all the four younger lad just passed their hesitant smile to their parents and slightly nodded in yes. With their approval all of them chatted for some moments and then all four of them moved to their respective chambers directed by their mothers to take rest and got ready for the upcoming events of the day.


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IT GOT TOO LONG...😳...HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT...

DO GIVE YOUR REVIEWS...

WITH LOVE...

RADHIKA...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is really good
so all the prince are coming after compelting their studies from gurkul and for this the people of aryanager are gathered together to see the their would be rulers
sakshi whose brother was snatched by the kings also went there to see her lil brother who now turned into a prince now she is really happy to see her brother but kranti he is not at all happy by seeing her there as he hate the aryas
anyways the way the princes were welcomed by their parents and palace people is really well described
looking forward for the nex tup
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good
so all the prince are coming after compelting their studies from gurkul and for this the people of aryanager are gathered together to see the their would be rulers
sakshi whose brother was snatched by the kings also went there to see her lil brother who now turned into a prince now she is really happy to see her brother but kranti he is not at all happy by seeing her there as he hate the aryas
anyways the way the princes were welcomed by their parents and palace people is really well described
looking forward for the nex tup
plz cont soon and pm me



thank u ria...glad u liked it...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
a dharam veer ff...😲
oh i so miss those times when i was crazy about dharam veer.
sry won't be able to read it.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
very very nice part...
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

o terii

kya cs tha

kya story thi

mindblowing n superb

nd nd itne saare characters😃...eee👏

maza aa gya ridzzz

u r amazing

omg
omg
omg

kya dhanshuuu story start ki yr...2nd part me hi flat ho gyi mein to

haye kinnin long wali update thi

loved it a lot

especially saakshi wala part

loved it dharam veer ki yaad aa gyi sacchi😭

anyways...she hated aryavrats but i know she never hated her brother😃wo h hi itna cute koi usse naraz bhi nhi ho sakta

n i liked the kanha character

abhi to mujhe characters yaad bhi nhi hue but mein kar lungi

excited n eager to read more

pls pls pls

update soon

ridzzii...i want to give u a hug...n kisses😳

especially for u for ur special story

muahhh

love u
Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede

a dharam veer ff...😲

oh i so miss those times when i was crazy about dharam veer.
sry won't be able to read it.😭


ya me too miss those days...it's ok if u r unable to read it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

very very nice part...

loved it



thank u shaffy...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PariK

You gave mast mast update after a long time 👏

But I m more interestd in... Aah u know that right? 😛 😉

This story takes me back in DV time..

Do continue soon


oh thank u pari...well the part u r waiting for,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,will take a little time...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful part ridzzi!!👏

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