MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #5 LINK # 6 pg 140 - Page 19

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It's ok. We'll wait. Take your own time.
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ASmazing teaser dear.
Now will be wondering who this sweety is till u update...
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Amazing teaser dear!!!...
I think Sweety is NTs Doggie...
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thnx 4 pm


sweety is d new girl whose pic u had uploaded



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YE SWEETY KOUN HAI.IJUST HOPE NT DOENST AHVE EVIL SIS LIKE HER.WO EK HI KAAFI HAI.WELL TEASER IS INRESTING BUT LITTLE CONFUSINF.SO UPDATE IS THR TODAY PIYA DI
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eagerly waiting for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.Here is the next update I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it
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PART 30

Maan: Tum kitna pyar karti ho mujhse Tara; tumhe ye baat yaad thi k kal hi k din maine tumhe propose kiya tha aur ussi ki khushi manane k liye tum party de rahi ho main bhi tumhe ek badiyaan sa taufa dunga humare iss special day par [U love me so much Tara u still remember that I had proposed u on this date and u r giving a party to celebrate this occasion; I will make sure to make our special day extraspecial by gifting u a memorable gift]

Maan goes to the biggest diamond shop of Mumbai and purchases the costliest diamond necklace from the shop for Naintara

Maan: Ye haar main tumhe khud apne haatho se pehnaunga Tara bus ab kal shaam ka intezaar hai [I will place this necklace with my own hands on ur neck Tara now I am waiting for tomorrow evening to make our special day all the more special]

He gets into his car and before starting the car

Maan: Jab puri duniya k saamne main tumhe ye haar pehnayunga toh mujhe jo khushi milegi wo main kabhi lafzo mein bayan nahi kar saktha; aur ye khushi mujhe sirf tumhari wajah se milegi Tara thanks for making me feel special [The happiness that I would be getting by decorating your neck with this necklace with my own hands cannot be expressed in words and this happiness is just because of u thanks Tara for making me feel so special]

He starts the car and drives to his residence

Meanwhile,

Geet was busy packing her bag

Geet: Chalo meri puri packing ho gayi bus ek cheez baaki hai [Good I am done with my packing only one thing is remaining]

Geet opened a drawer and removed a bracelet. She looked at it lovingly and placed it on her hand

Geet: Aaj se tum humesha mere saath rahoge; meri har khushi mere har ghum ka har kaamiyaabi har chunathi mein tum meri taakat banoge [From today u will be there with me in my happiness, my sorrow, my success and my challenges; in every phase of my life u will be my strength]

She kissed the bracelet and closed her bag

Adi: Secretary k liye ek advertisement de dethe hai [We will give an advertisement for the post of a secretary]

Prem: Nahi yaar koi bhi aa jaayega hume Geet k liye koi bharosemannd insaan chaiye [No dude any one can come for this job we need to find out a responsible person for Geet who would be perfect for this job]

Adi: Par tu bata phir kya aasman se aayegi kya koi secretary dhundhna toh padegana [But then from where would we find out a secretary would she come from the sky we need to find her right?]

Prem: Ek kaam karte hai industry mein apne jitney bhi bharosemand friends hai unse help lethe hai [Let us ask some of our faithful friends in the industry]

Adi: Haan ye thik rahega [Yes this will be perfect]

Prem: Toh chal kaam par lag jaate hai [So let's start our work]

Prem and Adi contact some of their industry friends

Adi: Thik hai toh aap use bhej dijiye [Okay pls tell her to come and meet us]

Adi: Prem Geet k liye secretary mil gayi [Prem finally we got a perfect secretary for our Geet]

Prem: Kaun? [Who?]

Adi: Apne Rahul bhai ki bhehen [Sister of Rahul]

Prem: Rahul bhai toh Shahid Kapoor k secretary haina? [Rahul is the secretary of Shahid Kapoor right?]

Adi: Haan wahi [Yes]

Prem: Phir thik hai waise unki behen ka naam kya hai? [Oh that's perfect then by the way what's the name of his sister?]

Adi: Sanju

Prem: Sanju hmm' nice name

Adi: Waise Sanju kuch der mein humse milne aa rahi hai [Sanju would be coming to meet us in a while]

Prem: Achhi baat hai tu Geet ko bata de main tab tak apni foreign trip ki taiyaariyaan check karke aata hoon [That's good u inform Geet about this till then I'll just check all the preparations of our foreign trip]

Adi: thik hai [Ok]

Prem leaves the house for sometime and Adi informs Geet about Sanju's arrival

After 2 hours

Prem: Chalo saari taiyaariyaan ho gayi hai ab bus Geet ko apni nayi secretary pasand aa jaaye tab hum charo milkar aaram se jaa sakthe hai [All the preparations is complete I just hope that Geet likes her new secretary then all 4 of us can leave the country tomorrow itself]

Prem enters his Villa and exactly at that point of time a girl comes from the opposite direction


She was in a great hurry and in an attempt to walk fast she collided with Prem and as an immediate reaction Prem supported the girl with his arms and protected her from falling

Prem was confused about this girl and was thinking what was she doing in his house but before he could ask her any question the girl started speaking

Girl: Oye hoye hum kya koi filmy scene shoot kar rahe hai jot um mujhe yun pakadke khade hue ho chaddo mujhe [Hello are we shooting for some romantic scene of the movie that u r still holding me in your embrace common leave me right now]

She started hitting him with her hand

Prem: Dekhiye maine aapko girne se bachaya hai aur aap hai k mujhe maar rahi hai aapko toh mujhe thanks kehna chahiye [Look I protected u from falling u should be grateful to me but instead of thanking me u r hitting me]

Girl: Ye filmi paitrena kisi aur ladki k saamne apnana mere saamne nahi chalo chodo mujhe warna aisa sabak shikaungi jot um humesha yaad rakhoge [Use these movie tricks in front of someone else leave me right now or else I will teach u a good lesson]

Prem: Are'[but]

Girl: Achhe se jaanti hoon main tum jaise lafango ko ladki dekhi nahi k line maarna shuru ek toh jaanbushkar takrathe ho aur phir bachane ka bahana banakarbaho mein lehte ho aur phir thankyou; sorry vagaire vagaire se apna chance aajmane lagthe ho [I can understand the intenstions of u guys very well as soon as u see a girl u make a point to collide with her and the n u will try to impress her by protecting her from falling and then starts the drama of sorry, thank you and it goes on and on]

Prem: Tum kya khud ko maalikaye husn samajthi ho? [Do u consider yourself as a beauty queen?]

Girl: Aww' ek toh lafanagagiri upar se dhamki tumhe sharam nahi aati ek bholibhali ladki se jhagda karte hue tum jaante ho main kaun hoon[First of all u r troubling me and now u r giving me some stupid warnings aren't u ashamed of getting into a fight with a girl do u even know whom am I ?]

But before Prem could answer anything the girl kept on accusing him with her innocent yet strange accusations

Prem: (thinking) Kitna bolthi hai ye ladki par maine isse abhi tak apne bahu mein pakde kyun rakha hai issne mujhe itna kuch suna diya ab isse saza toh milni chahiye [Oh God this girl is too much she is talking nonstop without taking any break but why am I still holding her in my arms she is accusing me so much I think she deserves some punishment]

Without giving any second thought Prem removed his grip from the girl's waist and the poor girl landed on the floor with a huge bang

The girl gives a shocking expression to Prem

Prem: Kyun yahi chahthi thinaa aap? Dekhiye maine prove kar diya k main ek gentleman hoon aap mujse issliye naaraz thi kyunki maine aapko girne se bachaya but I am sure ab aapko koi problem nahi hogi [So I guess this is what u wanted me to do and now u should be happy with my act previously u were unhappy since I protected u from falling but look I proved that I am a true gentleman by fulfilling your wish]

The girl gave him an angry glare but before she could say anything

Prem: Saiyonara [Bye]

Without looking at her Prem left that place leaving the angry girl all alone

Girl: Gadha kahika isne mujhe Sanju ko neeche giraya waqt aanepar achha sabak shikaungi [Donkey he threw me..Sanju uhh' let the correct time come I will teach u a good lesson]

Sanju gets up and goes to meet Adi and Geet

Prem was taking a shower when Sanju's interview was going on

Geet and Adi were impressed with the innocent and down to earth nature of Sanju

Geet: Toh tai raha aaj se tum meri secretary ho par ek baat batau kya Sanju tumhara asli naam hai ya nick name? [So it's final u r my secretary from today but tell me one thing is Sanju ur real name or nick name?]

Sanju: Mam mera naam Sanjana hai [Mam my real name is Sanjana]

Geet: Beautiful name Sanju par main tumhe tumhare nick name se hi bulanungi aur haan tum bhi mujhe Geet kehkar pukarna no Mam no Madam we will be friends agar ye sharth manzoor hai toh hi tumhari job pakki [Beautiful name dear but I will address u with your nick name and I would love if u call me Geet we will be friends so no Mam no Madam if u agree to this decision of mine then u get the job]

Sanjana: Mujhe manzoor hai Mam oops I mean Geet [I agree Mam oops I mean Geet]

Geet: That's better

All 3 of them start laughing

Prem comes to the living room and once again both of them were face to face

Prem & Sanjana: Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? [What r u doing here?]

Adi: Tum dono ek dusre se mil chuke ho are Prem tune bataya kyun nahi k tu Sanju se pehle hi mil chukka hai khamkha hume interview lene mein timepass karna pada aur Sanju tune bhi nahi bataya k tu Prem se mil chuki hai [U guys have met each other but Prem why didn't u tell me about this before we simply wasted our time in this formality of taking an interview and Sanju even u were silent u should have told me that u met Prem already]

Prem: Chodna yaar ab toh Sanju ki selection ho chuki haina bus wo important hai chalo ab tub hi jaakar packing kar le hum charo kal abroad jaa rahe hai [Leave it dude now Sanju has been selected na this is more important common u also complete ur packing we are going abroad tomorrow]

Adi: Okay

Geet: Sanju tu chal mere saath main tujhe apne saare contacts k details de dethi hoon tujhe usse kafi madat ho jaayegi [Sanju come with me dear I will give u the list of all my contacts this will help u a lot]

Sanjana: Okay Geet

Geet left for her room and Sanju starts following her

Prem: Good to meet u Sanju

Sanjana: Its Sanjana did u get that

She twisted her nose and walks away from there

Prem starts laughing

Prem: Sanju ho ya Sanjana I have to agree u r really cute [Sanju or Sanjana I have to agree u r indeed very cute]

Next Day

Prem, Geet, Adi and Sanjana left India

Naintara had finished all the preparations of her party and she made a point to call all the big celebrities to her bash

Maan got a royal welcome and he was feeling proud to see Naintara's arrangements

Maan: Kitna khayal rakhti ho tum mera Tara humari uss anmol pal ko tum itne shaandaar tareeke se celebrate kar rahi ho [U care for me so much Tara u r celebrating our special occasion in such a grand way]

Naintara: Maan aap aa gaye hum kabse aapka intezaar kar rahe the chaliye [Maan u r here I was waiting for u from such a long time]

Maan: Ab itna special occasion hai toh maine socha kuch special gift toh banta haina [Now the occasion is so special so I had to get some special gift as well]

Naintara: Achha zara hum bhi toh dekhe wo special gift kya hai [Oh really let me also see the special gift]

Maan: Ek sharth par main chahtha hoon k mera gift main khud apne haatho se aaj ki iss mehfil ki mallika par sajau [On one condition u will allow me to decorate the queen of this party with this gift by my own hands]

Naintara: Beshakh chaliye ab dhikayiye hume wo khaas taufa [Off course common show me that special gift now]

Maan removes the jewellary box and takes out the most expensive diamond necklace that he had purchased for Naintara

Naintara was totally spellbound with the beauty of this piece; she was totally speechless

Maan: Haar pasand aaya Tara? [Did u like the necklace Tara?]

Naintara: Maan hume yakeen nahi ho raha itna mehga aur khoobsurat haar aapne' [Maan I can't believe this u purchased such a costly and beautiful necklace for']

Maan: Shh'Tara tumhari khushi k liye main kuch bhi kar saktha hoon ye toh ek chotha sa nazrana hai toh bolo tum khush toh hona? [Shh'Tara I can do anything for your happiness this is just a small token of my love so tell me are u happy?]

Naintara: Khush rukhiye hum apni khushi ka izhaar puri mehfil k saamne karenge aapki wish puri karke [Happy? Wait let me declare my happiness in front of this whole party by fulfilling ur wish]

Maan was very happy

Naintara: Ladies and Gentlemen may I have ur attention please

Naintara: Ye dekhiye aaj humare Maan ne iss mehfil ki queen k liye kitna beshkimeeti aur mehnga taufa laaya hai [Have a look Maan has got such a precious and costly gift for the queen of today's party]

All the guests were surprised and awestruck seeing Maan's selection

Naintara: Haina ye sabse special gift aur jaante hai Maan khud humari SWEETY ko ye taufa apne haatho se pehnayenge [Isn't it a special gift and to make this occasion all the more special Maan will himself decorate my SWEETY with this special ornament]

Everyone starts applauding; the media people come in front to capture this moment but Maan was totally shocked

Maan: Sweety?

Naintara: Haan Maan Sweety; humari Doggy aaj ussi ka toh birthday hai [Yes Maan Sweety; my Doggy it's her birthday today]

Maan was totally shocked; it seemed someone had pulled the floor from beneath his feet

Maan: Tumne iss wajah se yeh party rakhi thi? [U had arranged this party for this reason?]

Naintara: Ohfo Maan ab acting bannd kijiye aaptoh aise behave kar rahe hai jaise k aapko kuch pata hi nahi tha [Oh Maan not stop acting u r trying to show as if u were unaware of this fact]

Maan: Par mujhe toh laga k [But I felt that..]

Naintara: Chodiye Maan aapko job hi laga wo itna important nahi hai pehle hum birthday girl ko lekar aate hai dekhiye puri media khadi hai uss aitihaasik pal k intezaar mein jab aap ye haar humare sweety k gale mein sajayoge [Leave that Maan what u thought is not at all important wait let me get the birthday girl first just have a look the media is so desperate to capture the historic moment when u would decorate my Sweety with this necklace]

Maan was standing there like a lifeless soul; in a matter of seconds his heart was shattered into a million of pieces and to make the matter worse the media people started asking him stupid questions

Journalist 1: Maan aapne ek Doggy k liye itna mehga taufa khareeda kuch khaas wajah iss baat k peeche? [Maan u purchased such a costly gift for a Doggy is there any special reason for behind this?]

Journalist 2: Aapne Naintaraji k pet k liye aisa shaandaar taufa kareedha toh aap unke birthday par isse bhi kuch khaas plan karnegena [U got such a special gift for Naintara's pet so u would be purchasing something extraordinary for Naintara's birthday]

Journalist 3: Kya wakai mein aaj ka din aapke liye itna khaas tha? [Was this day so special in your life?]

Maan felt that someone had pierced his heart with a sharp knife when he heard this question

Naintara: Offcourse ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai humare Sweety ka birthday se zyada important aaj k taareek mein aur kya ho saktha hai haina Maan? [Offcourse nothing can be more special than my Sweety's birthday on this date right Maan?]

But before Maan could anser anything Naintara continued

Naintara: Chailye Maan pehnaiye ye heero ka haar humare Sweety ko aur de dijiye apne dil ko sabse badi khushi paane ka mauka [Common Maan put this necklace on my Sweety and gift yourself the chance to become happy]

Naintara's every word was a slap on Maan's emotions

Naintara: Chaliye Maan sab intezaar kar rahe hai [Common Maan everyone is waiting]

Maan had no option with a heavy heart; he took the necklace and put it on the doggy's neck

Sweety bit Maan's hand as she got hurt while Maan was putting the necklace

Maan: Ouch

Naintara: Sweety baby aise nahi kaathe dekhiye aap kitni khoobsurat dhik rahi hai aapko toh Maan ka shukrguzaar hona chahiye [Sweety baby u should not have bit him like this just have a look he got such a precious gift for u; u should be thankful to him]

Naintara:Maan aapne SWEETY ke liye heero ka itna mehnga haar gift k taur par kharedha hum bata nahi sakthe hum kitne khush hai; ab toh hum ye soch rahe hai k aap humare birthday par hume kya gift denge humare expectations kafi badh gaye hai [Maan u purchased a diamond necklace for SWEETY as a gift; oh Maan I am so happy now my expectations have increased and I am busy thinking what would u gift me on my birthday]

Maan: Naintara maine toh ye [Naintara I got this ]

Naintara: Hum aapki baate baadmein sunenge pehle aap Sweety k saath presswalo k saamne photo k liye pose kijiye hum chahthe hai k kal k akbaar mein humari Sweety ki sabse khoobsurat tasveer chapke aaye [I will listen to your talks later on first u give a perfect pose for the press with my Sweety so that in tomorrow's paper the best picture of my Sweety gets printed]

Naintara: Waise bhi Maan aaj toh Sweety k birthday se zyada important humare liye kuch bhi nahi hai baaki saari baate bakwaas aur bebuniyaad hai humare liye [Maan nothing is more important to me than my Sweety's birthday today all your talks and the rest of the things is secondary and useless right now]

Naintara forces Maan to pose for the pics

Maan: (thinking) Kya humara rishta bhi tumhari nazro mein bebuniyaad hai? [Does our relationship hold no importance in your life?]

PRECAP: Geet felt dizzy; she couldn't believe that she was standing in front of this man (The biggest twist of Geet's life)😃

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Part 31: Page 67

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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