A Series of Most Fortunate EventsPt11 p115,Note121 - Page 78

Such a beautiful update ! I really felt sorry for Anjali, but I agree with NK ' You cannot love a person you do not trust ! "

Beautiful story, I am so glad that you are doing regular updates now. Thank you for the PM.

I feel for NK, I do ...and for Anjali ...to have one's doubts so mercilessly verified , to jump from mere suspicion into stark reality ...she must be in hell.

take your time dear
and hope you enjoy where ever you are going

brilliant update, loved how khushi was trying to get arnav to leave but he couldnt leave her on her own.
very brave of nk to bring shyams truth in front of anjali.

I forgot how much I enjoyed reading this ss. The words draw me in and don't allow me to look away from me screen. You're always able to portray each person's emotions wonderfully. I think pt 11 is one of my favorite updates. Anjali's feelings and thoughts are captured so skillfully, it is as if I myself were in her place. Her losing inner fight to hold on to the conviction that Shyam is innocent was spectacularly written, and I enjoyed reading the brother-sister bond between NK and Anjali. For once, it is Arnav who is able to be a little carefree while NK proffers his support to Anjali. His character is given much more depth than the show. Yes, he helped Khushi and Arnav a lot in the show for Shyam's exposure, but he is directly involved in your ss. He is the one who slowly reveals Shyam's truth. Thanks so much for writing this ss and showing a brighter side to ipkknd and how things could have been. You explored the characters and provided more meat to many of the characters, especially payal, akash, and anjali. Anjali isn't just the blind, sobbing sister in this; she imparts wisdom and I have a feeling she will be an asset in stopping Shyam.
Have fun abroad!!
And on a slightly irrelevant note, if you ever have any downtime and are thinking of writing something, I would love reading a La-NK story from you. It's just an idea; if you don't like the couple/have time, feel free to ignore it/forget about it. 😃

NK did the right thing, though it may not seem like it. One thing I found very realistic is that Anjali was aware deep down that Shyam was capable of such villainy and that she couldn't say that she trusted him. Of course a recorded conversation where the man you love reveals his ugly true colors is a pretty good way of dispelling any notion of innocence, but now, hopefully, she'll pull through...

Two back to back updates...wow... that too from u...double wow... u always cast this magical spell with ur words and take us deep into it that one feels like its happening around... beautiful update... u catch every little emotion and movement of the charecters and potray it so effortlessly that I can visualise every second of the story...
Nk did a wonderful thing showing anjali the video... hopefully she will come out strong...but my question is where is shyam???
Have a happy and safe journey...see u next week...I hope ;-)

Wohoo...