A Series of Most Fortunate EventsPt11 p115,Note121

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kaushu

@kaushu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

"Do you trust him?" That should direct the way Anjali should think in. Loved the turmoil NK was in when Anajali was watching the video. Both the couples akash and payal, arnav and khushi are in blissful state where as anjali is fighting her demons with the help of NK. The right way to go. Loved it.

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

I am very grateful to you for putting one of my fantasies in writing. What would have happened if things had gone right in IPK. Loved her realization of the shared emotions. but i always thought that people in love complement each others moods rather than mirror. if one is down, the other pulls both up or else we would be stuck in a downward spiral.

my favorite part so far is anjali's reaction to the video. incredibly natural, realistic and perfectly written. wish you were a screen writer. our screens would be so much brighter for it.

i will also be honest and say that I did not really follow too much from the teaser but that is what i expect from you where context is everything.

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

Just caught with the update...fortune to be reading such fortune events! ;)

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Amazing update!!!!!

I loved the arhi part! So damn adorable!!!! 😳

And so glad anjali knows now...

Thank you for tge quick update! :*

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

That was quite an update...!!!!

Khushi feeling self conscious and nervous around Arnav was understandable especially when she couldnt figure out the reason for change in his mood...!

Arnav didnt wanna leave her alone for his peace of mind... I love that he is able to communicate his feelings so easily now...!!

The second half of the update was heart breaking... The way you described the plight of a brother who had to tell his sister such a horrible truth about the man she loved and a woman whose entire life shattered in minutes had me swallowing a lump in my throat...

Lovely update😊

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

You updated! And since you titled this as a series of events that happened at the right time..I'm sure N.K revealing the truth to Anjali was a good idea! :)

Arnav and Khushi are so adorable...I think its your writing that makes them adorable! Because their emotions jump off the screen towards me. Khushi's swing from anger to love...it was so true...that she adjusts herself to Arnav's wavelength! LOVED IT!!

Thank you for the PM :) I can't wait to read more!!

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Yet another wonderful update and you know what stood out for me? The economy of words and yet the evocative description of the feelings of all the players in this drama.

I love your writing and the way it flows and your use of words though sometimes, just sometimes, I feel some of the words are superfluous and you could have got at exactly the same place with fewer words.

But this update was spot on, perfect use of words and prose especially to describe the devastation that Anjali was experiencing and NK's helplessness. I'd wager this was perhaps the best update that you have written. In fact I'd go so far as to say that you described it way better than it was shown in the serial!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#768

oh no so the house of cards crumbles i see
but it had to be done
sooner rather than later
but lets not forget he is still out there
ready to strike and we dont know who he will go for first
if he is cornered then god knows what he will do
so her world collapsed after that video
but its to late to build it when it was never really there
and you feel for her
yes there is no denying that she loved him but what about trust
can she refute this video
can she say absolutely with no hint of uncertainty that he wouldnt do it
no she cant and that has her stumped
guess it had to be done
before it was all too late
but should he done this now
or ask the elders about it
well truth neve sees timing does it
and this was is the truth of her life
so what now for her and for them
awww arhi they are in their own world
and am glad he is getting what she meant about putting himself in khushi place
and that will see them through
but what of anji and that deceiving husband of hers