A Series of Most Fortunate EventsPt11 p115,Note121

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sushmitasahu

@sushmitasahu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#801

wonderful story ... would love to see the downfall of shyam... hope anjali doesn't creat any probs... but please update soon

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Soujanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Read this story n number of times but never commented...

Loved the story...how one step can change the entire story...I always feel facinated by how you guys come up with such beautiful ideas...

Please please please continue????

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pragya_11

@pragya_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#803

This chapter was just wow! I don't have any words to express it. The way you wrote the arnav khushi moment was ❤️. Loved it. Loved it. 👍🏼

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pragya_11

@pragya_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

OMG, OMG OMG OMG!!! This was the single most beautiful scene i have read in a while. They way Arnav made his intentions know was SO him. Without saying anything, he said it all. Very Arnav. It was brilliant! Amazing!!!👏

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ship13

@ship13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#805

Fantastic writing. You write so well that one can visualize every single detail and thought that you are trying to convey. 👏 Please update soon. This story is SUPERB. 😊

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 11 years ago

#806

I just reread this and remembered how much I enjoyed reading it the first time around. Reading it in one go made me really appreciate the story you weaved and how this really is a series of fortunate events. The slow but explosive build up of Arnav's and Khushi's confessions, the nerve wracking condition of NK as he shows the Raizada family the recording, the insanity displayed by Shyam, the selflessness of Payal, the strength of Akash, and the possessive nature of Arnav all make the story so enticing. The suspense of future events and anticipation of Shyam's downfall is intense. I sincerely hope you decide to continue this sometime.