A Series of Most Fortunate EventsPt11 p115,Note121 - Page 65

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This is an awesome update. thanks for the PM. I really really hope you will update FF: Mohabat Door Jaane Na De once this is complete.

This is the perfect epitome of complete perfection. This chapter was written with so much skill, thought and what a flurry of emotions. Starting from Khushi's disbelief to Arnav's still evident guilt. And also, his want to have her, fully, that need, the vulnerability is perfectly shown. Brilliant, as always!

You are aware that I mostly post long comments...but this time, any amount of words can't justify how wonderful I felt after reading this chapter. Everything, right in place. Emotions, so delicately handled. And lengthy chapters? Bring them on! ;-) For me, this was the MOST beautiful chapter till date. Bas! Isse zyada kuch kehne ko reh he nahi jaata!


And I think that you have a great friend. S/he gave you an absolutely brilliant advice to write from your heart...for nothing can get better that that; the proof is here.


Loads and loads of hugs for you coupled with tonnes of good wishes for making me so happy. May God Bless You Alway! :-D

I love this story of everything going right at the right time in the right manner for the right people and everything going wrong for wrong people at the right time in the right manner!!

That was a lovely update, DE- a dream proposal from a man who is so down to earth. I loved how you've woven all their special moments and their miserable ones into this moment as a precursor to the life they will have, and as a testimony to the people they are. For they will fight, they will disagree, they will hate each other, be angry with each other but through it all their love will be the yolk that will bind them to each other.

Read it in on go. Awesome. Lov it. Wish it ha been like this. I can actually imagine the scenes with your writing and that in itself is. Sign of good writing.

'Ugh! All I'm trying to say is, I thought you were asking me to marry you because it would be the right thing to do, not because you wanted to!'

There, she thought triumphantly, I said it and it did make sense. She tried to ignore the wispy black smoke that now gathered about her heart, the conviction that she was currently dissuading him from something she craved with every fibre of her being.

But she did not have to try and ignore it for too long, for she was most effectively distracted within seconds of her mortifying admission.

Laughter.

He was laughing.

He had actually thrown his head back and laughed.

And not a snigger or a chortle either. Full-fledged, unrestrained laughter. With such abandon that it took her breath away.

It was possibly the most beautiful sound Khushi had heard in her whole life.

She was certain, at any rate, that it was going to haunt her for the rest of eternity.

That, and how disarmingly boyish he looked with his face, its customary deadpanned look discarded, crinkled with his glee, his eyes glimmering with liquid delight, his entire visage aglow with some innate light of its own...

When she finally regained her voice, she snapped, in clipped tones which barely disguised the sting of hurt that had twisted through her at the idea that he had found her soul-shredding misgiving so hilarious, 'Why are you laughing at me?'

But instead of answering her waspish question, Arnav shook his head slightly, fixing her with an almost incredulous stare, the corners of his lips still twitching from the lingering aftermath of his amusement and some other emotion that she could not quite place.

'You thought ' that I did not want to marry you. That I said it because it was my duty?' He also choked on the last word, as though a fresh bout of laughter had swept up on him and he had tried to swallow it down.

if this is how your "most messed up chapter" comes out i think i woulkd love to read such " messed up chapters".

bcuz i for think this is one of the best ones you have written yet.

with arnav and khushi you can't expect a straight-to-the-point proposant and an immediate yes.

if it was so then they definitely are not arnav-khushi😉

kam se kam itni baatein to banti hai.😆

and i wish there was somethimg like this on the show atleast before the second wedding.

anjali now has a clue that something is fishy and i think the end of shyam is not far.

another minblowing update.😊

thanks for the pm.

Yay! You updated!

i am at a loss for words. incredible update.