A Series of Most Fortunate EventsPt11 p115,Note121

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Thanx for pm and update. Sorry I am late to comment.
Thanx a lot for the long update. Loved it. i don't know why you are nervous when your updates are really brilliant.
to be frank, I sped through Shyam's part and Anjali-doctor convo as I was anxious to know what happens bet Arnav and khusi. So finally she accepted and all is well for now.

Now I am anxiously waiting for next update and yes I am looking forward to 'New year Resolutions' update. I really love that story. Pl update soon there.

Edited by shree10 - 12 years ago

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jeshsaiiii

@jeshsaiiii

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Amazing!! Can't wait to read the rest!!

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#653

You make me wish a lot !

I wish the Arnav in the show talked as much when he was in love ! *sigh* But Im glad the one here talks so much ! I mean he'd probably defeat Khushi in the talking ! But Im seriously not complaining ! This one is going really well ! Definitely yhe most fortunate events !

And so Shyam calls the family doc and asks about heart patients ? A folly commited already, and now Anjali doubts him too ! And the fact that Shyam is unaware that now its not only Shashi as evidence, its NKs camcorder too ! So yeah ! bring it on Shyaam, he wouldnt even be able to touch Shahsi's hair !

And Arnav and Khushi by the poolside yet again ! Sure it is the luckiest place for them on earth it seems ! Haa, so Khushi clears away her doubt ! And yipeee ! They are getting engaged ! The way Arnav puts his heart open and bare for Khushi to see, I loved that ! And Khushi said the I love you tooo <3

An amazing update nafisa ! Waiting for the next few chaps !

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

nice updt

updt soon

thanks for pm

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

hey hun

i know im extremely late..

amazing part, as always ⭐️👏

shyam is an absolute pyscho... i love how you always describe his inner thoughts 👍🏼

oh and anjali's part was superb as well 👍🏼. she's the sweetest 😳. i really like that conversation with the doc, and especially that part when she remembered she forgot to pray for herself and shyam ⭐️.

oh arnav-khushi 😃😃😃. gosh every scene was beautiful and magical . i just loved it.

i love a teasing arnav.. soo damn hot ☺️. khushi's innocence is wonderful. i love how she confessed again that she loves him...😳

ur writing takes me to a dream world . its exactly like how you described arnav's feelings: as though feeling the gates of paradise opening wide before him...

eagerly waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

take care dear🤗

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

interesting update..😊

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vann

@vann

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Please update soon. Cul de sac too.

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

I just cannot stop myself from reading the last update over and over again!

It is just so beautifully written!

When I am imagining this while reading, the poolside is looking so gorgeous! Arnav and Khushi present at the poolside makes the poolside even more beautiful!

I cannot believe a ficticious setting has created such a vivid and clear picture in my mind! All thanks to you! I am seriously now fighting the urge to read the update again...

(I really have to go study now *sighs*)

Great job!