FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

simply awesome... loving their behaviour towards each other :)

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580531

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Nisha! 🤗 I am absolutely loving this FF of yours. 😊 It is shaping up very well and you are building the story nicely and progressively. Loved reading about the first ArHi meeting in Goa. It was as sizzling as expected. 😊 Eagerly awaiting to read the verbal combat to come in the next part. 😊 Hope you will update soon dear...😃

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Nice update. Message to Arnav: Man get a clue you are trying to win her back. Stop acting like you own her. 😆

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Awesome update , really enjoyable reading .thanks for the pm

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

OHHH I do love a jealous Arnav!!!!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

wow ...loved it ...keep on writting...

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

thanx for the link to this

before i comment on the update I have to read the story from the beginning

i shall do that and then i will edit my comment again

😉

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sbk2

@sbk2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Wow! Loved it Nish!! 🤗

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: sbk2
Wow! Loved it Nish!! 🤗

You know I had a feeling you would...you did always love the old arnav. 😃

Ok Im off to write Bundle of joy part 2 😃

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 13 years ago

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#230

Yaar i'm really an addict 2 ur FF...i really love it...i wonder how they stayed away 4 such long tym?????...back 2 ma point...can u pls try 2 make ur updates a lil longer...its kilin me 2 be satisfied wid such short updates...i am a lil impatient😉